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Laura S. Fox

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  1. Progression with both families will happen. I don't intend to let Jonathan's parents be nothing but background.
  2. As lovers, they are complete from a physical point of view. While they might have plenty to explore, their hearts need to get in the game, too.
  3. So many questions, right? Well, the only way to get them answers is to read further
  4. Ugh, I'm not going to tell you not to worry, Gary...
  5. That might end up counting as cruel and unusual punishments, lol!
  6. Chapter Thirty-Two – Sh*tty Families It was now or never, Jonathan declaimed the words in his own head, as he squeezed the phone in his hand. The people around him moved fast, out of synch with his hesitant steps. He made a left turn and sat down on a bench, his fingers gripping the phone too tightly. With one last deep breath before the dive, he lightly touched the screen, hoping for a technological glitch at the last moment. “Hello?” His first word was a pebble thrown into a bottomle
  7. That's a confession as good as any!
  8. Well... I'm not going to say that they're never going to meet...
  9. Indeed. Jonathan does a lot of thinking, and maybe, just maybe, that can be a downside sometimes.
  10. Jealousy is part of the package deal... also, Maddox hasn't yet felt anything like that, so the novelty plays its role.
  11. Everyone reacts in different ways. Jonathan surely didn't expect the attack...
  12. Rusty is the definition of surprise. Even when he doesn't intend to be. But look up the dictionary, you'll see his picture there.
  13. Indeed, and people who choose to stay hidden... I'm not going to comment on that just yet.
  14. That's a new one! I'm adding it to my vocabulary!
  15. Well, a time for visiting families will come... but first, let's see... have we had enough drama so far? Hmm, nope, nope, nope, it's time for more!
  16. Indeed! Jonathan is unused to acting more decisively in situations like the one at the end of the chapter. He's too polite, too afraid of how his relationship with Maddox looks, and add on top of that his own insecurities.
  17. All possibilities... but I might surprise you once more with the direction the story takes. To keep up with my reputation, I really hope everyone will be surprised!
  18. Well, fun is one way of defining what's coming...
  19. Well, that's true. Jonathan has all that ingrained politeness that made him stay and try to talk to Connor's group. Plus, he has his own insecurities regarding straight boys, not entirely addressed.
  20. Well, certainly it may seem like it. Under the veil of so-called 'naturally curious' questions, Jonathan was asked uncomfortable things. How everything will play out is only a matter of time... and of course, the boys' ability to grow up.
  21. What's up with Rusty? should be the guy's middle name! But that will be the main dish when his story will come around
  22. Thank you! I know I have a penchant for drama, and that might not be up everyone's alley... However, there is more drama to be had, just saying!
  23. Chapter Thirty-One – Green-eyed Monster He didn’t expect the unpleasant feeling in his gut to go away as the days passed by, bringing him closer to the day when he was supposed to call his parents and announce that he would pay them a visit on Thanksgiving. That was no shock, really. The most appropriate course of action was to do it and be done with it. Still, something was keeping him from taking that step, and he kept postponing the call even after he purchased his plane ticket. How
  24. Not going to deny that... but it might take a bit to happen!
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