Laura S. Fox
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Ha-ha, I had no idea at the time that this expression would work in English ... it appears that it does!
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Everything on point, Dave! So feel free to keep your speculations coming!
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Who the ghost is will be revealed quite soon So your comments will receive their stamp of approval when that happens. But there's a deeper mystery here to be solved, and I hope people who read the story will join Mason in putting the pieces of the puzzle together!
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Corrected. Truth be told, I didn't realize it was 'shining armor'. Anything else you noticed?
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I would if I could ... Thank you for your appreciation!
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You're not off the mark with something you said. And more about that in the chapters that will follow. Thank you for enjoying the story!
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Some of the questions will be answered soon. Others will make the mystery deepen. And that's all I can say!
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Well, that's a lot of questions! And I think I can say you love Billy because he's just so awesome!
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Thanks a lot for the support!
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Ah, so sorry about that ... Not much I can do about it. If it were after me, I'd write all day long.
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Chapter Three – Smiley Face, Side Up Mason opened his eyes as the clock struck five in the morning. He didn't need an alarm to get up at the same hour day after day. Discipline was one of the defining principles guiding him in life, and events like those from the day before weren't enough to disturb his routine. He looked around as much as he could without getting out of bed. There was no sign of a ghost. Of course, it had to be some weird incident, or maybe he had dreamed it all. It su
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Someone figured it all out! Just kidding, but you are not off the mark in some of your assumptions. You will see where you were right quite soon! (And the mystery of the story will lie not with who the ghost is - something that will come up soon enough, but with something that I'd like to think it's deeper than what meets the eye)
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Welcome to the club of the Toby-ghost theory! I don't know what you're thinking of in regards to Rhys's comment, but time will tell you if you were right or wrong (and then you can let me know, too)
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Don't fret too much, I beg you! It's going to be a long story, and not everything will be clear right off the bat (or should I say, little will be clear ... hmm)
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Here's a cookie! (Not saying anything more, but remember this when you read the next chapters!)
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Thanks for appreciating the pun, Dave! Everything should happen for a reason - at least I try to make my stories have sense - so you're right on the money
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Let's say that you're right about one thing, but somewhat wrong about the other (through no fault of your own, of course). Rhys plays nice for Levine. His real feelings are hidden, for now.
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Everything you just said is on point. More on Toby and who he is will be revealed quite soon As for Rhys being a bit playful, that's part of who he is.
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Chapter Two – Play Dead The stranger hopped around him, going through Billy, the walls around them, and everything that represented a solid mass, without a problem. “Man, we have so much to talk about. I mean, do you even know me?” the stranger asked, stopping for a moment. Mason shifted his weight from one foot to the other and looked straight ahead. “You can’t ignore me,” the stranger pointed out. “There must be a reason why you, of all the people around us, can see me.” “J
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Good News And Bad News
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Good News And Bad News
Thank you! I'm glad you like it since it's one of the most complex things I've ever tried to write. -
Good News And Bad News
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Good News And Bad News
He-he, I'm not glad that you're jealous, but happy that the scene triggered some memories, Wes! -
Good News And Bad News
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Good News And Bad News
I think you have pretty good instincts But I won't say nothing else, as I shouldn't leave any spoilers lying around, he-he ... -
Chapter Eight – Good News And Bad News Adrian woke up with a yawn and stretched, blinking hard to chase away the sand from his eyes. For a moment or two, he felt the place next to him with one hand. He sighed. Somehow he doubted Edward was in the kitchen, making waffles. But there was no point in being disappointed since Adrian was not at all into that kind of domestic pleasures. He didn’t eat waffles anyway. He stood up and moved his arms, to remove some of the stiffness in his limbs, a
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Thank you, Tony! I'm happy to see you here! And thanks for the nice words!
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Ah, apologies, apologies, but I cannot do more than one chappie a week. As for the victory dance ... yeah, I guess Mason wasn't so happy about it, lol. Thank you for your comment!
