Laura S. Fox
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He-he-he ... thanks a lot! Jessica Fletcher should be on the case!
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Thank you for thinking so highly on my story! For some reason I don't understand, as you explained the meaning of the word pedantic, the elevator scene with Winona Ryder having Ethan Hawke explaining the word 'irony' in Reality Bites came to mind. Or maybe there was no clear reason! Just weird how the mind works!
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Your heart won't be broken ... but you will have a big surprise! Just saying!
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All implemented, and they were useful. Except the handle/treat. Treat appears to sound a little better. I'm glad they weren't more. Just for the record, when I do go through the text before publishing it, there are plenty more others. For each one you listed here, there were at least several more.
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It's great that readers can find such imagery in this story! I'm constantly influenced by what I'm reading or I've read, so this particular chapter might have had something to do with a certain feeling I got while reading Dennis Lehane's Live by Night.
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Time to copyright your theories, everyone!
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Oh gawd, perfect gif as always, dear reader! I guess I managed to make everyone completely confused!
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Jared's story won't stop here, as it happens to everyone. He has all his life in front of him Adrian ... well, I'll let that be a surprise. Buckle up for the next chapter. I think it will be quite the ride As for Mike ... have trust in him (and that's all I'll say, he-he). Thank you for the comment!
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Hmm ... could he? Let's think ... Thank you for your constant sleuthing, Wes!
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Hmm ... that's an interesting angle. I'm glad to hear new ideas!
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Renzo will make other appearances throughout the story, so maybe his role will become clearer. Thanks for your comment!
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If you pointed out the mistakes you noticed, it would be more helpful. Otherwise, there's nothing for me to learn from your comments. And I don't understand what you mean about ignoring you. I think I repaired the shiny/shining armor mistake, and even replied to you. Of course, I might be wrong since when there are many notifications, I might skip some by mistake.
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Chapter Nine – Eyes And Ears The venue definitely had an indie vibe, with its paper lights hanging from the ceiling, and refurbished furniture that looked like it had been saved from some dumpster somewhere. Mason sat gingerly, afraid that the old wood might just give up under his weight. Rhys grinned at him. “What are you so spooked about?” “Spooked? Just worried that the chair won’t hold me.” Surprisingly, the table cloth was real cloth, and so were the napkins. The light was insu
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The Only Wound That Matters
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Only Wound That Matters
Hold on tight to those theories! You'll see whether they turn out true or not! -
The Writing On The Wall
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Writing On The Wall
That's totally correct! -
I don't say that's untrue ...
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Thank you, and you're welcome! Please feel free to comment as much as you want!
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Hey, thanks a lot! Edward's notion of fun, oh, boy :)) How about Mike getting Ryan ... and Chris might get what he deserves regardless of Jared's actions!
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The Only Wound That Matters
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Only Wound That Matters
Hi Tony! The 'how' is the biggest question! Thank you for your support! -
The Only Wound That Matters
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Only Wound That Matters
Ah, please don't be so hard on Rhys; his life wasn't easy. But you're right about Ary, Levine ... and Billy. As for Toby's fault, that's something that remains to be seen -
The Only Wound That Matters
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Only Wound That Matters
Nothing is ever accidental ... at least, in fiction! There is a connection between all the characters that are given screen time, so keep that thought in mind! -
The Only Wound That Matters
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Only Wound That Matters
Hmm ... great! We have a contender to Wes's theory about Levine! -
The Only Wound That Matters
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Only Wound That Matters
So far, you're doing great! And I'm glad you're on the case! -
Chapter Eight – The Only Wound That Matters “After you died? Are you sure?” Mason whispered and threw an anxious look toward the bathroom door. The sound of water running probably masked whatever it was said in the room, but he didn’t want to risk having Rhys question his sanity. Toby nodded slowly, his eyes never leaving the wall covered in quotes. “It’s strange, and it feels like it must have happened long before the month I believe I’ve been around, as I told you.” Mason looked at
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Thank you so much! 🥰
