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Hmm ... and I thought you would be more disappointed in Chris. Why Ryan?
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Chapter Eleven – Hurtful Truths Adrian traced invisible lines on Edward’s hand, profiting of the fact that it laid flat between them, like an invitation. Edward smiled as he stole a glance at him, but one of his fingers began tapping, so Adrian placed his entire hand on top to stop it. “You can’t be nervous,” he said matter-of-factly. “These are your people, right?” In the backseat of his luxury car, in his luxury clothes, spelling privilege, and money from head to toe, Edward Hastings w
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The Writing On The Wall
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Writing On The Wall
Yes, you are correct! -
The Writing On The Wall
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Writing On The Wall
You're right about Ary But everything will be revealed at the right moment! Thanks for your appreciation ... and frustration ... (I guess it says a lot about what you think of the story ) -
The Writing On The Wall
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Writing On The Wall
I'm afraid little Ary was more the 'attacking' character in that scheme, lol! But Toby will reveal himself, just like anyone else, even if he doesn't remember who he used to be. Thank you for your comment and appreciation! -
The Writing On The Wall
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Writing On The Wall
Are you a genius? Please tell me! -
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Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Writing On The Wall
I wouldn't put it that way ... but Rhys has his reasons to feel guilty ... -
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Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Writing On The Wall
I know ... please forgive me ... -
Chapter Seven – The Writing On The Wall Unlike at the radio station, where they had been left to wait in the hallway, this time, Mason and Billy were pointed toward a relaxation room and told to feel at home. Billy sighed in satisfaction as they both sank into the comfortable sofa. A coffee table was in front of the couch, and Mason had a feeling people working there indulged in the bitter fix with religiosity. “This is pretty cozy,” Billy commented. “Hey, there’s even a TV. Ah, sorry,
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The Carrot And The Stick
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Carrot And The Stick
I don't get the reference, sorry ... who's Donny Allerton? Google search returns nothing relevant. -
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Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Carrot And The Stick
Oh, the butler ... we don't have one, right? Hmm .... -
The Carrot And The Stick
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Carrot And The Stick
Some things of what you said are spot on As always, I won't give too much for fear of spoilers, but I'm happy with your interpretation! Keep them coming, Dave! -
The Carrot And The Stick
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Carrot And The Stick
Hmmm ... yeah, Rhys preferred to let the confusion grow a little here ... but Mason has his ways of finding the truth! -
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Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Carrot And The Stick
Some chapters might focus more on the romance side ... but I will drop hints and clues for the observant reader to collect! Mason will have to deal with more than one puzzle, that's sure! -
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Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Carrot And The Stick
Yes, that happened so far ... and next time, more on Ary! I seriously hope I'll manage to keep a good balance between mystery and clues so that people continue to enjoy the story! -
Chapter Six – The Carrot And The Stick “Do we have anything else scheduled for today? Anywhere we need to be?” Mason linked his hands in front of him and watched his partner. Billy hid a lollipop behind his back, not fast enough. “Why don’t you ask Rhys? He’s in charge of that.” “I’m asking you because you seem to be well informed all the time when it comes to our precious charge. I bet you even know what brand of toothpaste he uses.” Billy offered a crooked smile. “Guilty as cha
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No Walking In The Rain
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in No Walking In The Rain
Hmm, since it doesn't count as spoilers, I can tell you: it wasn't my intention to give off that vibe. The three guys don't know each other, so the only links between them would only be the three friends. But I'm always interested in seeing how readers interpret my writings! Thank you for your kind words! -
No Walking In The Rain
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in No Walking In The Rain
Hmm, I'll hold you on to that Let's see what you think a few more chapters down the road! -
No Walking In The Rain
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in No Walking In The Rain
Lol, Mike is like that, indeed. As for the fireworks ... stay tuned. You're on to something in regards to Chris, but I won't say another word since ... no spoilers! As for Adrian and Edward, oh, they will be surprised, indeed! But that will happen after some time. Thanks a lot for your insight! Much appreciated! -
Chapter Ten – No Walking In The Rain Mike felt good, almost like laughing for no reason. One night sleeping next to Jared, and he was as good as new. His friend was good enough to be rented by the hour or sold in a bottle, and just as he thought that, Mike realized how weird that must have sounded. It was such a good thing that no one could hear his thoughts, or they would have believed him to be an absolute basket case. Jared would have gotten the joke, but Mike still chided himself interna
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Rhys, at this point, is a bundle of negative emotions. More of what happens inside his mind will be revealed slowly, as Mason gets closer to the truth. As for what Rhys feels, you are, again, so keenly aware of it that it makes me wonder if you're not looking over my shoulder while I right, lol!
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Thank you! I think that's the main idea behind the story, in a nutshell!
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Mason has it rough because he needs to be careful. Any questions he might have, he has to ask them at the right moment.
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That's a good idea, lol! And Toby is now officially part of the crew! You'll get to see him almost every chapter!
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Mason doesn't watch TV, lol! But I think he will learn the hard way that it's not so easy to get rid of a ghost. Feel free to concoct your theory, as more and more clues will be delivered as we delve deeper into the plotline. And you're right about Levine!
