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Laura S. Fox

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  1. Laura S. Fox

    Secret Crush

    Oh, more than that will happen
  2. Chapter Four – Secret Crush Mike examined the fern guarding the door to the elevator like an extra from an alien-themed movie, something about overgrown biota taking over some distant planet. He could take the stairs, but it was just something about elevators he liked. The idea that he was, for several seconds, in the hands of a machine, pleased him and tickled his inner nerd. He felt the same thing about high-speed trains, but he wasn’t that much of a traveler to enjoy such joyrides. So, fo
  3. That you may be right about And I'm glad that you don't see Jett's dad as being all bad! I surely don't want him to be that, lol! Thank you for your comment!
  4. It will become clear at the right moment
  5. Yes, that's true. He really wants what's best for Jett Even if he shows his love in this way, he still loves his son.
  6. Sneaky indeed! Too bad I didn't think of it!
  7. Jett and April both are 20 years old
  8. I know, it's just I was working from home anyway, and the quarantine only seemed to have increased my load, instead of decreasing it like for others!
  9. Hey, I'm so glad there's someone who likes him! He's not all bad, but I can't really contradict the readers since they don't know him like I do! It wouldn't be fair. But I'm glad you see some good in him!
  10. Not just yet! Jett's dad is here to stay for a little while! (And he's a bit important for the main story line)
  11. It all sounds like a plan, but that would be too easy, right? Let the tension continue for a while!
  12. Jett's dad is, just as I told @Wesley8890, instrumental to the story. He's not present by accident, as you will see later on
  13. The next chapter will be Sunday, but I'm afraid I will disappoint you because the conversations to which Jett or April are not present can't be reproduced - changing to a different POV so late in the story is somehow not done in fiction. But Jett and April will learn some things in a second-hand manner from their dads
  14. Thank you for your impatience! It will get updated every Sunday! That's a promise, and I won't skip it!
  15. Ha-ha-ha, the kids should learn how to do it right!
  16. As I said before, let's not get all violent, lol! And Jett's dad is here to stay for now (evil laughter). He is instrumental for how the story will progress, so he has his uses
  17. Thank you!
  18. Chapter Thirty – Reinforcements Have Arrived April walked into the backyard, holding the phone tightly and looking carefully around to make sure that no one would notice. Actually, he cared about Jett’s dad not to overhear his conversation. However, by how moody Jett was, April didn’t want to be in the position to offer too many explanations to him either. “We can talk now.” “So, Jett’s dad is back home? I didn’t want to comment on it since it wasn’t my business, but I thought Jett w
  19. Oh, no, let's not go there .... brrrr
  20. Sid will surely make an entrance. As for the consequences of his words and actions, they might not be what April hopes they will be! (insert evil laughter here and I'll leave you with that!)
  21. I agree with you, especially about needing an entire village to raise a child. But there is more to that than Jett's dad's convictions regarding the traditional family. It will all become clear, I hope, as the story goes!
  22. Let's not get all in a murderous mode, lol! Jett's dad still has to go through some transformations, too! Thanks for reading!
  23. That would be quite the scene, lol! But I'm more forgiving with the characters than some of my readers, and I won't let them end up in such embarrassing situations, he-he-he ... The big reveal, eh, sigh, it will come at the right moment. And it will be maybe not as crazy as some may imagine, but I hope it will contain all the emotions that I've been working to reveal throughout the entire story. (And you're so right about Sid and what he thinks of it all.)
  24. Maybe April is better at handling tough men than others, lol! He will have an interesting conversation with his dad next time.
  25. Yes, families tend to be complicated like that, don't they? And Jett might not be telling the whole truth, one way or another. What he might need to do more than anything is to be true to himself
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