He-he, I will look forward to how the readers' opinions of various characters change over time. A fluffer, lol. Yes, I'm old enough to know what the term means!
Hmm, what an interesting POV. Yes, readers get to see only what Lawrence gets to see, hence the whole mystery. As he investigates, I like to believe that the readers will start investigating by his side!
Motivations - oh yes, that's what a motive makes!
I know I think it's because I'm focusing on the mystery - without neglecting the characters, only they will be revealed more gradually. If it helps, it will still be a love story - though romance might be only a subplot in this one for a change.
Chapter Six – The Invisible People
The first thing Lawrence did after waking up and getting ready for the day was to ignore Bastien’s order about not taking the empty pot back to the kitchens or express his gratitude in any way. To prevent curiosity and questions, he had wrapped it in the same cloth, along with the spoon that had been provided with the meal. It had been a hearty dish, allowing Lawrence to go to sleep in a good mood, but now he was back to being the investigator in charge of
Thank you so much. It means a lot. I hate stories where details are forgotten or things exist without mattering for the plot, so I always do my best to make my stories make sense.
One of the last chapters was titled 'You Cannot Change the Past' - not only because it's a time-traveling rule like Jack suspects.
But the present and the future can be influenced. Our heroes need to keep their eyes peeled!
Of what readers know at this point... these are scenarios to play out. But things will be even crazier. (This is me, and this is the understatement of the year).