Laura S. Fox

Well, 'ever' in human terms, actually means 'till death do us part', which I believe covers all the bases, lol!

Thank you, Thorn! Yeah, I often think that I made Alex a bigger asshole than what I intended in the first place. But I let the pieces as they fell. Ah, I'm afraid there won't be smut in the epilogue, either. The guys will have their hands full, you will see what I mean Thank you for being with me on this ride!

I just noticed this second comment. The story is called Fist to the Heart, and I'm afraid it's more or less 80% sex (it's basically erotica in the purest form, lol). I just got the first chapter out there, for now, and it's basically about a fighter and a beautiful guy who wants to book him to provide entertainment in his papa's ring. What story do you refer to about having read it? Pretty Perfect or A Good Servant?

Oh, dear godmom, I feel your sadness, and I thought it would feel like that, in a way. But after much deliberation with myself, I thought not to burden Carter with the knowledge of angels and all that He has, after all, the power to stand on his own and admit his love for Aron now. He, he, you noticed that about Alex. Yes, that's the correct answer Someone needed to give that man a good lecture. Believe me; he got it. As for the ponytail girl and her involvement in the story, it was only after I read an outraged article on people taking selfies at car crashes while paramedics try to save people's lives that I took this decision on her. It's chilling to think some people can be so disconnected from the rest of all humans to do that, but I realized that it would work for my story and it would not be considered hard to believe that someone would react like that in this day and age. It's sad, indeed, and that hardly covers it, how more in touch people are with their phones than with the humans amongst which they walk. I'm not from this phone obsessed generation, I can barely remember where I put mine most of the time, but I must admit that my mom didn't understand why I stood glued to the computer, either. (Until she learned to play Free Cell, lol. Then I had to find ways to get her away from the computer, he, he) Thank you so much for all the support you've given me throughout the story. It really means so much to know that I'm so appreciated. I hope that the epilogue will leave you with a big smile on your face, though! All the love, Laura.

I like how Michael is not self-important at all. The boy knows his shortcomings and that's not something you can easily see in someone of that age. I like the dynamics inside the group of friends, and Amy might be a bit too direct, but that doesn't make her less than a good person. Also, Michael being a little jealous of Julie ... hmmm (from the category of things that make you go hmmm....)

Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm glad the ending was to your liking!

Oh, Wes, you're so, so nice, I can't even ... always supporting me like this ... chapter after chapter. Ah, the story about boxers ... I suppose you know something, but that's not my next story here That one, in case you've read something about it, is a bit too sex loaded for GA, and I don't want to push the nice people running the website to tell me it's not suitable to be published here. We must be our own judges, after all But ... and here is a small secret I haven't told anyone to this point, I will have a new story here, but it will be about something else! (And now I whisper so that only you can hear me: it will be about a fitness guru and a perfect yuppie)

Plenty, just not of the sexy kind, I'm afraid, lol.

The chapter is up. Ah, ugh, I may disappoint you? But I hope what's in there makes up for that, lol!

Chapter Thirty-Four – Mints, Anyone? So what the hell was he going to do now? Had Aron called and he missed it or something? He checked his phone. No calls. Okay, he needed to see Aron. Wait, he needed to take a shower first. They were seriously going to have sex. If what the girl had said was true ... Of course it’s true. Now we remember everything. I’m so amazed how quickly you take credit. You said you had nothing but blank space in that part. But now we know. Yes, he

Ah, thank you for the detail, I missed it somehow.

Michael was a rather clumsy 'hero' in this one, but he's 14, I can forgive him. I think Loz would have the potential of being a complex character, but since I'm not the author and just the passenger, I will sit back and watch the show staged by the real 'master of puppets' My heart really went to Daniel at the end, in the scene with his mum. Somebody save this smol bean! 😢

I think I worry about Julie as much as her mother. I mean, I totally understand the mom and her need to protect. Also, Leigh! That girl is something. She gives good advice and she has already guessed Michael's secret!

It looks like Michael has his own struggles, which basically means that he and Daniel are alike more than they know at this point. I look forward to their coming together little by little

"falling in love with someone who doesn’t even know I’m there" I dare to believe that Michael already noticed Daniel But it's natural and very realistic for Daniel and his situation as it is, to believe that. I'm glad I'm starting to read this story. It will be a nice way to spend my breaks.

And I must thank you for commenting on every chapter. It was nice to read all your reactions!

I felt emotional while writing this, too! And, seriously, they are some of the cutest characters I've read about in a BL. And I'm glad you think that, too!

Aww, thank you, you're so nice to say this. Of course, writing with someone else's 'material', so to speak, helped a lot in this case.

That's what usually happens when you're very young, I believe. It's so easy to have misunderstandings because of the change that's happening inside you and around you.

That was sort of the point, he, he! Thanks for the reaction!

He, he, with all the frustration, the comics is still worth the read.

Thank you, Thorn, for giving my story a chance

I love how people throw around theories! In this case, while it's an interesting theory, I must say this story is all Carter's POV and all, to some extent, is about him or involving him, so that should give you something extra to think about

Thank you for reading my fanfic piece and having such awesome reactions over it!

Aww, Timmy, such a nice comment at the end, I love it! I think the two will complete each other. At least, that's what I seriously hope for!