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Drinks And Trolls Won’t Break My Bones
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Drinks And Trolls Won’t Break My Bones
I can't really remember! But I did see it! -
Drinks And Trolls Won’t Break My Bones
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Drinks And Trolls Won’t Break My Bones
OMG, I remember that one, it was so damned hilarious! And why would you say that's just another chapter from yours truly? He-he (imagine hands on hips and not so rightful indignation on my part at this point). I'm only joking! But of course, people would feel that way about where I'm taking the story right now, lol! -
Drinks And Trolls Won’t Break My Bones
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Drinks And Trolls Won’t Break My Bones
Their minds are all mangled up now, and that's why they react emotionally, without any care for logic. But they will work it out, I promise! -
Drinks And Trolls Won’t Break My Bones
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Drinks And Trolls Won’t Break My Bones
Well, this is so much better than tomatoes! Thank you! -
Drinks And Trolls Won’t Break My Bones
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Drinks And Trolls Won’t Break My Bones
Thank you for being considerate about tomatoes and not wasteful! Just curious, who are the two idiots taking over your garden? -
Drinks And Trolls Won’t Break My Bones
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Drinks And Trolls Won’t Break My Bones
I suppose they should be enlisted to a special course, indeed. There is, indeed, something in the product, something not that easy to prove, as you will see. As for what Heath will do, he will think of something, you'll see! Thank you for commenting! -
Drinks And Trolls Won’t Break My Bones
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Drinks And Trolls Won’t Break My Bones
And birds of a feather flock together - is that how that saying goes? Yeah, I guess they are, lol! -
Drinks And Trolls Won’t Break My Bones
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Drinks And Trolls Won’t Break My Bones
You should see my legwork! Ha-ha, not really, I wouldn't dream of boxing, lol! I leave it all to Snake! -
Drinks And Trolls Won’t Break My Bones
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Drinks And Trolls Won’t Break My Bones
I guess there's no better way to put it, Dave! -
Drinks And Trolls Won’t Break My Bones
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Drinks And Trolls Won’t Break My Bones
Ha-ha, I'm glad to see you alive and kicking! Even if you may want to do some of the kicking at me! As for your plea, let's say that it doesn't fall on deaf ears. Still, expect the torture to continue for a little while. Hugs! -
Drinks And Trolls Won’t Break My Bones
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Drinks And Trolls Won’t Break My Bones
You're not far off the mark I did some research and the hidden ingredient is something close to what you're suspecting (I'm talking about sugar, not caffeine). I know a bit about what requirements are, although not in detail, and I also know how much manufacturers try to hide what their products contain. Sugar is, indeed, one of the top suspects, because it's so easy to prolong shelf life, and also make everything taste better. Take peas, for instance. Where I live, canned peas that have sugar and not just salt, taste, indeed, better (in the sense that they're sweeter), but they shouldn't taste that good. After all, veggies and legumes have their own taste, and even if a tad bland, it shouldn't be modified like this. -
Drinks And Trolls Won’t Break My Bones
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Drinks And Trolls Won’t Break My Bones
And I thought I could just sneak under the radar and blame Aidan of it all! Do your best, lol! I dodge well! -
Drinks And Trolls Won’t Break My Bones
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Drinks And Trolls Won’t Break My Bones
I'm glad none of the caps are directed at me! Man-child is a good name for Aidan, yes. But Heath will work on his end, don't worry. Just wait and see! And seriously, thank you for not throwing anything at me! -
Chapter Twenty-Eight – Drinks And Trolls Won’t Break My Bones “What is it, son?” Heathcliff drew one deep breath. Aidan was upset, and he needed someone with real-life experience to help him deal with this. Rushing after Aidan felt like a bad idea, and he needed to have someone look at the situation and tell him where he had gone wrong. “I got into a fight with Aidan.” He waited for a moment. “I’m listening,” his father replied. “Good.” Heathcliff let out an audible exha
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The Mother Of All Misunderstandings
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Mother Of All Misunderstandings
You are right about Aidan, but he needs a little more time to grow. Of course he should have seen it all, about his boss and all that, and he will have the chance to experience it soon. How he will grow out of his naivete or if, I guess that remains to be seen As for Aidan's mom, more about her and with her, later. Thanks for commenting, Timmy! -
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Well, you have at least one long-form story finished to read!
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Thank you! For all the comments you left for this story!
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The Mother Of All Misunderstandings
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Mother Of All Misunderstandings
Hmm, you're getting warm ... You'll see! As for Penguin Pants, I didn't give him much thought, since he's basically just a throw-away character! -
The Mother Of All Misunderstandings
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Mother Of All Misunderstandings
I guess this reaction sums it all up! -
The Mother Of All Misunderstandings
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Mother Of All Misunderstandings
Hmm, that's a good idea, right? (About Heath's company, I mean) As for Aidan, I totally agree with you that he needs a bit of time to see things clearly. But will he? Now that is the question Thank you for all your support along the way! -
The Mother Of All Misunderstandings
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Mother Of All Misunderstandings
Exactly! I love it when readers can explain my characters' action better than I do! -
How and if that happens, you'll find out later
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You're right ... my bad! Fixed now Thank you!
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The Mother Of All Misunderstandings
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Mother Of All Misunderstandings
That might be true, yes. The characters need this little crisis, I believe. -
The Mother Of All Misunderstandings
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Mother Of All Misunderstandings
In real life, I agree that little white lies may have their role. But, as they say, fiction is not real life, and I just want to remind everyone that honesty is one of the main themes of this little story! (And Aidan would have found the truth, anyway. No escape for Heath!)
