Laura S. Fox
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Yet, he's not fully 'uncovered', so to speak... I still have surprises up my sleeve.
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Oh, I'm really looking forward to your reactions when that happens...
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Both questions will be answered
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This is Brad lashing out at his finest... he wants to protect himself, and does it recklessly as he usually does. The incident will happen on screen, so you'll be able to judge it yourselves. Lyn feels protective of Luke... he tends to do that with the wrong people, doesn't he?
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Chapter Forty-Six – [Memory, Senior Year, October] – Like Brothers The last months had been a whirlwind. Lyn didn’t know where to begin or where to end. The check sent by that man hadn’t ended up being sacrificed at midnight like the sacrilege it was. Instead, it lay at the bottom of Lyn’s school bag, among neatly arranged supplies like textbooks and pens. For some obscure reason, he couldn’t bring himself to throw it away. It was a lot of money. If he hit rock bottom, he might regret throw
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Very well, then Lyn 'broke up' with everyone after that fateful last day/night of college, hence the distance between him and Brad's family. -
I kinda see why people would think that now...
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Not a 'casual client', no. (I'm just leaving breadcrumbs.)
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Yeah, that guy isn't exactly Alexander's style... right?
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Maestro, you are feeling something... but that's for later. By moving in with the Fosters, Lyn does set himself up for the emotional debt you're speaking of, but it also serves in different ways for his development. Brad does have a big heart and he's showing it here. That's why I like to believe that he's a more complex characters, with good traits and bad traits. At the same time, yes, Brad does need Lyn. There is something going on there that's more than friendship but can never be more. I will not comment on the 'shadows of Alexander' this time. The following chapters will add more fuel to the fire so to speak. But it's an interesting view - all duly noted
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The person behind the check will make an appearance... I'll let the story speak for it, so you'll know if your guess was right Brad's and Lyn's relationship will evolve in a way - one I think that's more natural for them, although Lyn will still adhere to his usual, let's say, ideals.
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That's the vibe, yes. And Brad really stepped up here. He was the one to convince his parents to take in Lyn.
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Oh, no, that's not the movie, lol. I was thinking of Great Expectations, actually. And since Brad isn't big on reading, he better remembers movies. (As a child, that's what I got out of Great Expectations - a big wedding cake eaten by rats).
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He's getting saved... and I believe he deserves it.
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I understand...
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I like to believe that the way the story will evolve from now on will surprise you quite a bit But yes, I agree - this is the part of Brad that Lyn feels strongly about.
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Chapter Forty-Five – My Image of You Morning came too early. Lyn wanted to groan and complain, but Alexander had been clear enough: the moral dilemma in question was his and his alone. He’d have to figure it out, and preferably before the wedding came and went. There was no easy way to do this. Lyn stared at his phone, waiting for a sign. But Brad had no reason to call him, busy as he was with the wedding preparations. Well, not completely busy if he still had time to get together with
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Witty remarks are Jack's defense, unaware seduction, and just a means to keep his mouth running, lol. It helps diffuse Theo a little.... And I totally agree on Sheena. I just realized she's the one singing 'My baby takes the morning train...' - that's where I knew her from.
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All the sex will be in human form... so no worries about that, lol!
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Love the quote about salad... Theo needs an appetizer. And then he'll see it's not all that bad...
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Vince is good at making Theo see that it can be pretty good... if he slowly gives in.
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Ha-ha, never thought of it this way! His buddy downstairs might get a little wrinkled, though...
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In a nutshell!
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Chapter Twelve – Perfect When You Touch Me Theodore’s cock was delicious. As a man known for his appetite, both in and out of bed, Vince liked to think of himself as a connoisseur when it came to that part of the male anatomy. The cock in question was a glorious sight, too, long and of just the right thickness to match the rest of its owner. But the taste. Due to the flurry of the last several days, Vince had had no time to take care of business, so apart from Jack’s curiosity, which
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You Went for the Heart
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in You Went for the Heart
That's a valid point - those three should sort their own shit. But Lyn, knowing the truth, can't letting it go that easily... Lyn will see that you have a point (about your last paragraph).
