Oh, so happy to see people enjoying Jake's 'punishment' And sorry for keeping you waiting. I just hope it was all worth the wait! Just one thing I'll add. There's still more to the story!
Ah, thank you so much! Your offer is so generous. Unfortunately, I already built the story with the idea of trying to stay away from German, since I know only a few words ... The one phrase that matters, I already know how to say it! Damn, I so wish I had your offer when I first started. I would have liked a few cuss words in German with Klaus in the throes of passion! (And now I sound like a brat, good thing I have Jake with me as company :))
Thank you again, Nina!
Comments like yours make my day.
If I could leave a thousands hearts on your comment, I soooo would!
Yeah, I made the Ice Man fall in love yay! I mean not me, Jake! Of course!
As for hermano mayor ... We will see
Chapter Seventeen
Jake eyed the belt with growing unease. Klaus was balancing the scary object, ever so lightly, and that seemed hypnotizing. He could not tear his eyes off it.
“I believe you know the drill, Jake,” Klaus began speaking.
This time, Jake was not fooled. This was Klaus when angry. Never mind the even tone, the controlled gestures. He was going to get it good.
“You will obey each word I say,” Klaus continued. “Undress and come here. On all fours.”
Jak
You have a bit of a prediction there about Jake ... And yes, Diaz is a bit blind to what's going on and who he's going up against.
As for the punishment, I will see next time if I raise to everyone's expectations. I definitely hope I will!
Thank you for the insight on Diaz's personality. Whenever I write a character on the page, I make them from bits and pieces, and it's nice to see someone else putting together the puzzle. You could not have been righter in your characterization of him. As for Jake falling into his role ... you will understand more at the right moment. I promise!
Hmm, Diaz, he gets quite the fan club, doesn't he? Gosh, I cannot wait until you will see all the plot unfolding. But you're right! Diaz is slow ... not a match, it seems. Or is he? LOL, I'm just a tiny bit evil, while I'm sitting here, by my bucket filled with red herrings.
As for the sore butt, he, he, we'll see Cheers!
Chapter Sixteen
Jake knew he shouldn’t be mad at Klaus. After all, the guy was working himself to the bone. Apparently, being rich didn’t mean sitting on your butt, by a pool, eating ice cream or something. But Jake had to admit that he felt restless without being able to talk to the guy. He had wanted to call a few times but felt guilty at the thought that Klaus was getting too little sleep as it was.
A week was not that long. More than half of it was gone, anyway. Sunday, Klaus was