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Laura S. Fox

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  1. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 17

    Nice seeing you here! Thanks for the comment!
  2. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 17

    Oh, so happy to see people enjoying Jake's 'punishment' And sorry for keeping you waiting. I just hope it was all worth the wait! Just one thing I'll add. There's still more to the story!
  3. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 17

    Ah, thank you so much! Your offer is so generous. Unfortunately, I already built the story with the idea of trying to stay away from German, since I know only a few words ... The one phrase that matters, I already know how to say it! Damn, I so wish I had your offer when I first started. I would have liked a few cuss words in German with Klaus in the throes of passion! (And now I sound like a brat, good thing I have Jake with me as company :)) Thank you again, Nina! Comments like yours make my day.
  4. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 17

    Glad to see you didn't forget about Diaz. Thank you so much for the praise!
  5. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 17

    Well .... there's a right time for everything!
  6. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 17

    He, he, maybe Jake is a natural!
  7. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 17

    Thank you!
  8. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 17

    If I could leave a thousands hearts on your comment, I soooo would! Yeah, I made the Ice Man fall in love yay! I mean not me, Jake! Of course! As for hermano mayor ... We will see
  9. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 17

    Ah, thanks for telling me that, I was just suspecting something, since I haven't heard from her in quite a long time. I hope she'll get better.
  10. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 17

    Ha, ha, I don't even dare ...
  11. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 17

    Hey, glad you're glad! But there's still more to the story!
  12. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 17

    Chapter Seventeen Jake eyed the belt with growing unease. Klaus was balancing the scary object, ever so lightly, and that seemed hypnotizing. He could not tear his eyes off it. “I believe you know the drill, Jake,” Klaus began speaking. This time, Jake was not fooled. This was Klaus when angry. Never mind the even tone, the controlled gestures. He was going to get it good. “You will obey each word I say,” Klaus continued. “Undress and come here. On all fours.” Jak
  13. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 16

    He, he, hope is a good thing And yes, my baby boy is learning!
  14. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 16

    You have a bit of a prediction there about Jake ... And yes, Diaz is a bit blind to what's going on and who he's going up against. As for the punishment, I will see next time if I raise to everyone's expectations. I definitely hope I will!
  15. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 16

    Wow, thanks a lot! I'm glad you like it.
  16. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 16

    Please stick to it LOL! I hope you'll love the next chapter just the same.
  17. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 16

    Thanks a lot! Jake will have his fair share of ... ahem, punishment As for Diaz, well, he's kind of the bad character. There's nothing he wouldn't do.
  18. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 16

    Thank you for the insight on Diaz's personality. Whenever I write a character on the page, I make them from bits and pieces, and it's nice to see someone else putting together the puzzle. You could not have been righter in your characterization of him. As for Jake falling into his role ... you will understand more at the right moment. I promise!
  19. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 16

    Oh, God, how will you react to the next one? You must invent some new emojis!
  20. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 16

    He's a brave little one, my boy! I raised him up good :))
  21. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 16

    Hmm, Diaz, he gets quite the fan club, doesn't he? Gosh, I cannot wait until you will see all the plot unfolding. But you're right! Diaz is slow ... not a match, it seems. Or is he? LOL, I'm just a tiny bit evil, while I'm sitting here, by my bucket filled with red herrings. As for the sore butt, he, he, we'll see Cheers!
  22. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 16

    Just you wait for what will come next, and then tell me how you feel :))
  23. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 16

    All in due time
  24. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 16

    Chapter Sixteen Jake knew he shouldn’t be mad at Klaus. After all, the guy was working himself to the bone. Apparently, being rich didn’t mean sitting on your butt, by a pool, eating ice cream or something. But Jake had to admit that he felt restless without being able to talk to the guy. He had wanted to call a few times but felt guilty at the thought that Klaus was getting too little sleep as it was. A week was not that long. More than half of it was gone, anyway. Sunday, Klaus was
  25. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 15

    As always, deville, your comment is spot on! Jake may be little and cute, but he's smarter than his brother
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