Laura S. Fox
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Thank you so much for all the support throughout the story! And I'm really so glad that I can put in words what I really want my characters to prove to readers. Yes, one more chapter I hope the ending will be just as satisfying.
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Truer words have never been spoken ... yes, they must communicate, and neither is too good at that :))
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Thank you! And I know I don't write long enough chapters ...
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Ah, Wes, your undying love for Klaus is so cute
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Chapter Twenty-Two “Hey, man,” he shook hands with Thompson and eyed the limo with growing unease. “Couldn’t he just send word where should I be?” A few people were staring at them. Jake waved at them. “It’s good to have limo drivers as friends,” he spoke to his neighbors, and the people just laughed. He turned towards Thompson with a serious expression on his face. “I ride in front,” he said quickly. “Of course,” Thompson nodded politely. “Let me put your back
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Chapter 1 - A Date, What Date?
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Chapter 1 - A Date, What Date?
He, he, I'm glad that I can put into words what these two characters are like, so that people who don't know them can like them -
OMG ... this comment really brought tears to my eyes ... just so beautiful how you said it. It's really touching when readers remember all the little things, like that small scene with the glasses. But tell your friend who asked that they are so going to hate me. Also, that they should bear with me, because I always keep the best for last. You know, like dessert. :)
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Mo Guan Shan was not some kind of idiot. Nope, he wasn't. So why was this idiot, He Tian, treating him like one? Alright, he got his ass beaten and handed to him, but it was not like that meant He Tian had any right to push him around like that. Why was he allowing that to begin with? Wasn't he some kind of a badass? At least, he used to. Well, not anymore. Because he was busy playing house with that idiot, cooking and cleaning and ... His hand hovered his phone. That thing had to be han
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I wrote Nude Pics Please! for the 19 Days by Old Xian fandom. 19 Days is a really cute Chinese manhua (the Chinese word for comics) that follows the adventures of a group of teenage boys. To give a little bit of context for anyone who didn't read the manhua, the characters starring in my little fanfiction piece here are He Tian and Mo Guan Shan, two boys who are sort of in a cat and mouse game. This story starts after He Tian sends Mo Guan Shan a dick pic to tease the guy. The characters are aged up, so they are in their last year of high school and of legal age.
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Yeah, I just thought Hans to be perfect for that role
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Hey, thanks for the nice comment! Yeah, Jake would be like that, LOL. Someone should tell the boy that's not doable. So it's a good thing Klaus is right there :)) Thanks again for all the support throughout the story. It means a lot!
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Ah, it seems like I have a knack for leaving readers frustrated LOL I like how you said that Jake earned respect from Klaus. Yes, Jake could not have proved it better, and Klaus now knows for sure Jake had never been in for the money, not even a tiny bit. I didn't realize this could be seen like this, but your comment makes me really happy Just hang on for a little bit I hope, in the end, the good would outweigh the bad in my case, too, not only Klaus's :)) As for your thoughts on Diaz? All spot on!
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Ah, so sorry about that ... And yeah, I know how that must feel
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Thank you for cheering for the two guys! As for the game they play ... There will come a time for honesty, too. I promise!
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I thought about people not knowing as much about MOBA games as I do, since it's not common knowledge, so I'm glad my explanations were helpful Don't worry about Jake, he will be ready
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I really love this phrase! Pride is a cold and lonely place indeed. Not much of the story left, so you will see soon what will happen!
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He, he, you will see next time
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Ha, ha, I lol'ed so hard. Yes, that would pretty much be the parody version of what happened between these two. And Klaus needs a little to be made fun of. Even I, his doting mother, agree.
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See, Wes? I knew you were going to like Hans, after all :)) And sorry about your hair
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Chapter Twenty-One “There is someone here to see you, sir,” the butler announced him. “He doesn’t want to say his name, but he has been here before. A certain Mr. Lopez.” Klaus quirked an eyebrow. Not the Lopez brother he wanted to see, that was certain. It was late, Hans was already asleep, and he was just burning the midnight oil, for no apparent reason. “May I suggest something, sir?” the butler spoke again. “This visitor looks rather strange. Maybe I should send him on his way?”
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And this is how you save me from a plot hole :)) Anyhow, Klaus could know where Jake is at any time, since he has that agent on the ground who does this kind of work for him. At this moment, he still believes that Jake is still at his brother's house and has no reason to think otherwise.
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Thank you so much for that info, it's not that different in my country either Now the boys will have to spend a bit of time apart, and it would be hard for Jake to go to uni now anyway since he has to think of making it day by day first. So sorry about the shower LOL and thank you for being such a sweetheart. Hugs!
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Find my phone app ... Gods, I feel old ... It's so easy to spy on someone today, isn't it? Well, the point is that Klaus is just bent on having Jake come back to him on his own volition, not because he is 'hunted down'. And sometimes, there is a phrase like that from a reader, like the one above that makes me wonder how do some readers manage to get in my head so well LOL
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I like your attitude! You're definitely one of the hopeful ones, I love it!
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Yes, Jay, I do remember that comment! It is true now as it was then
