Laura S. Fox

Since this is a fanfiction piece, it was written as if people would know the characters, so first of all my sincere apologies. As there are people who seem to be interested in the story without knowing the original story behind it, I will do my best to make an introduction to the characters and their situation. I will reply first to you here, in the comments section, and I will see what I can do to properly explain the entire setup. That being said, in the original story, things are as follows. Mo Guan Shan is a bit of a punk and gets into a nasty fight with one of He Tian's friends. Things end with that guy in the hospital, but Mo Guan Shan doesn't exactly escape unpunished. After the fight, a few days later, He Tian finds Mo Guan Shan as he exits a supermarket, while musing over how much he hates to eat packaged meals. For reasons that are not yet clear in the original story, He Tian lives on his own, in a vast loft apartment with very little furniture inside. Hence, he has no one to cook for him. It is made obvious, at some point, to the readers that Mo Guan Shan's family had a restaurant, so Momo knows how to cook and He Tian is aware of that. So, that day, he grabs Mo Guan Shan and drags him home so the guy can cook for him. Momo is a bit afraid of He Tian, so he obeys. As the story in the comics progresses, the readers witness how He Tian saves Mo Guan Shan from becoming a drop out. He Tian also seems to enjoy Momo's services very much and not only. However, since he doesn't want to humiliate the boy by paying him to be his 'maid', he finds work for Mo Guan Shan at one of his family's friends. There is quite a bit of drama there, as Momo's father is in jail, and we're not told what for, and Momo acts like a punk because he feels angered and helpless about what happened with his dad. He Tian basically tries - and succeeds so far in the original story - to save Momo from a life of crime. I hope this clarifies the entire situation a little. If not, feel free to ask more questions! Thank you for reading!

His head was hurting. He didn't want to think about it. He Tian had looked upset when he had left. And all day, in school, he had been an asshole. And by that, Mo Guan Shan meant He Tian totally ignoring him, and acting up towards anyone who tried talking to him. He had even brushed off his female fan club. And that He Tian never did. But it wasn't Mo Guan Shan's fault, was it? Just when the guy was starting to act more like a human being. He fiddled with his phone. No new messages. No 'bri

Thank you for the nice and long comment! But reading it and connecting the dots with what others have said, I start to realize that one thing I failed to make clear. Hans has already married his fiance. Where I live, the wedding party takes place after all the ceremonial aspects, and, at the end of the night, the couple lives for their honeymoon. And, while it was Hans's and Stephen's wedding night, so to speak, I made it special for Klaus and Jake. So a double wedding is simply not possible now, due to this timeline. So, so sorry I mislead people with this chapter. I am obviously very much a work in progress as a writer. As for the sub/dom dynamics, again, I personally think that it's just bedroom play. And, of course, some people find it hot, while it's not others' cup of tea. Yes, your observation is correct. Klaus has yet to admit it As for Diaz, you will find about him in the last chapter. Thank you for reading my story and for this interesting comment.

He, he, you've read exactly into Jake's behavior and his way of thinking. Yet, the conversation in question will take place, whether he wants it or not. (I'm so glad that you find Jake to have it all figured it out, you definitely make a case for him). Thank you for the awesome comment!

Thank you for the enthusiastic comment! He, he, you really do like Jake to torture Klaus! And Jake in control, yes, that was bound to happen

Ah, sorry for being evil. I feel like I must repent! And, yes, that was the point I wanted to make

Ah, so good to be understood ... And thank you for the compliment!

I promise the next chapter will solve everything! And maybe serve as a bit of a bandaid, :))

Ha, ha, I managed to leave you without words! I love your long comments a lot, but this, this just says it all. As a writer, I could not feel more rewarded.

You'll find out in the last chapter! Ah, Sweetlion - you really are sweet with your comments - you described what happened so well. Yes, Klaus needed this. And I love how you noticed that Jake wasn't being mean.

Ah, so happy to hear people feeling for Klaus ... I think the last chapter will answer your question.

I know

Glad to surprise you! And thanks for the nice comment! Cheers!

Hi, hi, Klaus needs all the support he can get. And hey, that's the sexiest cock block police I could find (I have no idea how to multi-quote, that is why I'm replying to this separately)

Thank you so much for all the support throughout the story! And I'm really so glad that I can put in words what I really want my characters to prove to readers. Yes, one more chapter I hope the ending will be just as satisfying.

Truer words have never been spoken ... yes, they must communicate, and neither is too good at that :))

Thank you! And I know I don't write long enough chapters ...

Ah, Wes, your undying love for Klaus is so cute

Chapter Twenty-Two “Hey, man,” he shook hands with Thompson and eyed the limo with growing unease. “Couldn’t he just send word where should I be?” A few people were staring at them. Jake waved at them. “It’s good to have limo drivers as friends,” he spoke to his neighbors, and the people just laughed. He turned towards Thompson with a serious expression on his face. “I ride in front,” he said quickly. “Of course,” Thompson nodded politely. “Let me put your back

He, he, I'm glad that I can put into words what these two characters are like, so that people who don't know them can like them

OMG ... this comment really brought tears to my eyes ... just so beautiful how you said it. It's really touching when readers remember all the little things, like that small scene with the glasses. But tell your friend who asked that they are so going to hate me. Also, that they should bear with me, because I always keep the best for last. You know, like dessert. :)

Mo Guan Shan was not some kind of idiot. Nope, he wasn't. So why was this idiot, He Tian, treating him like one? Alright, he got his ass beaten and handed to him, but it was not like that meant He Tian had any right to push him around like that. Why was he allowing that to begin with? Wasn't he some kind of a badass? At least, he used to. Well, not anymore. Because he was busy playing house with that idiot, cooking and cleaning and ... His hand hovered his phone. That thing had to be han

I wrote Nude Pics Please! for the 19 Days by Old Xian fandom. 19 Days is a really cute Chinese manhua (the Chinese word for comics) that follows the adventures of a group of teenage boys. To give a little bit of context for anyone who didn't read the manhua, the characters starring in my little fanfiction piece here are He Tian and Mo Guan Shan, two boys who are sort of in a cat and mouse game. This story starts after He Tian sends Mo Guan Shan a dick pic to tease the guy. The characters are aged up, so they are in their last year of high school and of legal age.

Yeah, I just thought Hans to be perfect for that role

Hey, thanks for the nice comment! Yeah, Jake would be like that, LOL. Someone should tell the boy that's not doable. So it's a good thing Klaus is right there :)) Thanks again for all the support throughout the story. It means a lot!