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  1. Laura S. Fox

    In the Dark

    Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in In the Dark

    This is it in a nutshell Lyn interprets the events - past and present - through his carefully curated system of values. That doesn't make them the truth.
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    In the Dark

    Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in In the Dark

    Lyn will definitely need to get smacked in the face with a few truths to realize what's what. Alexander knows him - it might be frustrating to see him keeping from blurting the truth in Lyn's face - and that motivates his actions. Lyn's social - and even sexual - mask works in front of strangers. Not in front of Alexander. I hope you had a stellar week! And I hope to keep you entertained for a long time!
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    In the Dark

    Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in In the Dark

    That could also be right...
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    In the Dark

    Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in In the Dark

    Oh, I hope so. Some very interesting days ahead!
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    In the Dark

    Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in In the Dark

    It's - I believe - in line with his character to be in denial. He already imagined reasons for Alexander's coming on to him, and he doesn't want to let go of them. He'll have to, though
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    In the Dark

    Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in In the Dark

    It will take... things to happen for Lyn to change his mind. What he thinks, what he prefers, these are all words to Alexander. If there is someone capable of luring out the real Lyn... guess who's the man? No, definitely not just experimenting in Alexander's book. Oh, they will experiment a lot, but the final goal goes beyond sexual gratification (of which, there will be plenty, I promise). As for Brad's role, I'm keeping my mouth shut. I want all the twists and reveals to be a shock to everyone!
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    In the Dark

    Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in In the Dark

    True, if only Lyn could see it
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    Chapter Twelve – [Memory, Freshman Year, Winter Break] – Two Types of Friends Lyn examined the steep slope without hiding his suspicion that it wouldn’t be a great an idea to sled down it like a maniac. He had heard enough about Brad’s extended family to imagine the chaos that would come with it, but nothing had truly prepared him for the reality. An assortment of cousins, aunts and uncles, even two pair of grandparents were assembled at Brad’s family’s home, so his arrival had gone almost
  9. Laura S. Fox
    There will be help from another source! Hearst is working on it!
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    Hearst is like a little spy in the enemy camp...
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    I know it does feel this way... and they will have to reconcile with flaws of their own.
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    Jamie will be as strong as he can be emotionally. But help will come And Hearst will play a role in it.
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    A wild card will be played... by Hearst. I like to think it's going to be quite entertaining. With only several chapters left, we're heading toward the resolution!
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    Please do so! He really needs a smack upside the head, I agree. The good part is that he'll have to make it up to Hearst later.
  15. Laura S. Fox
    That's part of the fun! Thank you for all the comments, I appreciate each and every one of them!
  16. Laura S. Fox
    Chapter Forty-Nine – Facing Your Demons Hearst observed his opponent calmly. Angus Boyd observed him back. They were two parties sizing each other up before a big battle. Although Hearst wanted to believe that he’d be able to pull off the plan he was concocting in his mind to save Jamie from this bastard, he couldn’t underestimate this asshole. “Is there something on my face?” he asked. Angus’s calculated glare turned into an amused look. “I’m sorry, please tell me if I’m overste
  17. Laura S. Fox
    Ah, damn it, that was where my mistake was! Sorry, so sorry, folks. I knew I made a mistake in a previous chapter as I was writing Theo's wolf as white, but going back didn't help me at all... And in the end, I thought I imagined it! So, Theo's wolf is white. In that scene with Ryder, the fur had no business being dark. Honest mistake, I swear! (And not one my red-red herrings that send reader on all sorts of wild goose chases)
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    Hmm... let's see. Danny lives alone, so he wouldn't need a four-slice model. But Vince often comes by and he's a man with an appetite, so it might be a four-slice model after all. It's all logical and inevitable.
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    Of course, of course, such medical advice cannot be ignored... especially since it comes from a doctor, @drsawzall!
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    Mrs. Machi might be a little stringy, even for a wolf. Yeah, you must know me too well by now And since this story leans hard into romcom territory, suspension of disbelief is mandatory, lol. So, Kate Bush! Yeah, that's a strange one that I always enjoyed. I only watched her videos on the music channel that played music from the 80s, since I didn't get the chance to listen to her in her own timeline so to speak. It would make such great background music for the toaster fight! Well, it wasn't exactly a fight, though...
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    Ryder gets a new perspective on the curse placed on his pack as he learns new things about Cassandra. Theodore knows things, and he will have to disclose them.
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    Everything in this comment was on point. Except for Vince's and Jack's hostage being Theodore's mate. Cassandra will appear... and then you will all be able to see her true colors. More adventures await!
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    He wouldn't have left... because mates don't abandon each other
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    It's an excellent feature!
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    Excellent catch!
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