Hello,
I thought this story was really good. The underlying physically driven romance was interesting.. lol. I don't think I've ever romanced someone by stripping..
anyway, the, "Is this finally real?" - part was extremely cute. Probably the most well written and original part of a story I've read for a little while and it had me outwardly smiling because it let everyone know that it just wasn't erotic, that there was real feelings there and too long subdued by the characters.
So yes...
Good job,
Krista