Hello,
This is the new story of mine and I haven't gotten any feedback on it, so I've decided to open a discussion about it. There is only one chapter as of right now, but I do plan on doing some writing today and hopefully everything will go smooth enough for me to get the second chapter wrote.
Anyway, I'm sorry about the spacing issues I'm having. I only use one line between paragraphs and dialogue, but it comes out being a good couple of centimeters.. lol. I took away the spacing, but I forgot to post it, and I was too lazy to go back through again and do all that space changing again. The next chapter WILL have that fixed so that the reading can go a lot more smoothly with/out so much scrolling.
So, other than the "rough edges" of the story that I know is there, lol, what is there to discuss about it?
If you need the link to the story, here is is,
Roommates
Thanks,
Krista