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ObicanDecko

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  1. Lovely ending to this beautiful story! I like the fact that Nick and Noah ended up together, even if it was bittersweet because of Billy moving to London. Still, Nick always seemed to be closer to Noah anyway. If there is a sequel planned, I support it 100%!
  2. I forgot to leave a comment I really enjoyed the scene with Ezra, Beau and their 2 friends! The banter between them was fun! As always, Eamonn is a highlight. He deserves a medal for the way he dragged Sarah! I'm curious about the scene with the mom trying to fix her son with Ezra. Somehow I think that wasn't random, and that we'll see the guy again.
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    Guardians

    Thanks, guys! And I'm pretty sure Cyr and Jarin won't stop trying.
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    Guardians

    “Fireborn Scorpion: This rare and curious creature comes from the volatile volcanic islands of Kar Magan, from which it spread across much of the tropics. Unlike most scorpion species, the Fireborn Scorpions are not birthed directly. The female lays eggs near heat sources such as volcanic vents, geysers and sometimes even directly into the fire. In a matter of days, the eggs burst and the scorplings hatch, impervious to fire and heat. The venom of these predators is not only fatal, but also
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    Admirer X

    Lovely! So unusual of you to post a story like this, but it was brilliant! And who knew you'd be good at poetry? We love a multi-talented queen! I love all of the characters! I'd be happy if the admirer was any of them!
  6. Me too! Thank you! Yes, the boys' journey continues in the next chapter!
  7. “Assassin Wasp: While the Mammoth Wasp is considered the queen of these flying insects due to its enormous size, the Assassin is rightfully deemed to be the deadliest. Unlike most other wasp species, whose venom merely causes mild pain and discomfort to humans, this nasty creature can cause great harm to a man, and a single sting can kill smaller animals such as rabbits and dogs. Even though wasps have inhabited most corners of our world, this particular species is found only in the western
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    Observations

    Time for that restraining order! No Joy in this chapter, but I'll live.
  9. Oooh thank you for reading and the lovely comment! I appreciate it so much!
  10. Thank you! Yes, Macarius wanted Castor instead, but for what... we'll find out later! Thanks, you shall get more!
  11. “Umnios, the God of Wisdom (later also known as God of Shifters), was often underrated even among his fellow deities. Living a reclusive life at the Cerebon Plateau, he would always keep to himself and affect the world in subtle, yet significant ways. When the first men were created, it was he who bestowed upon them the gift that would separate them from animals - the gift of reason. When other Gods turned to populating the planet with innumerable animal and plant species, Umnios went a step
  12. Ooh lovely!! Ezra is very likeable, you can't help but root for him! Glennys and Sarah are total bitches, and even though Beau is currently nice because he missed his boyfriend, I have a feeling once they're in the city and the wrestling talk resumes, he's gonna get bitchy again. At least Jack seems nice! I am worried about Ezra's 2 siblings left alone with Glennys, hopefully they don't kill each other. XD
  13. This is where you end the segment?! You are so going to pay for this, mister! At least Diego now knows Lance's eye color - that was the best Valentine's Day gift he could've received. I especially enjoyed the dance scene, Lance teaching Diego his own skills, introducing him into his world. As always, I'm on the fence between feeling sorry for Sean and being annoyed by him. As Israfil said, he is very immature and doesn't think things through. Let's hope Ollie doesn't regret taking him back. Ollie is our resident good guy. I feel bad for Ezra, what should have been the most exciting day of his life was ruined by Beau and Glennys (but we didn't expect anything better from her). At least he has unconditional support from Eamonn! All in all, a brilliant chapter!
  14. Thank you for reading & commenting! See ya soon in a new chapter!
  15. "Three is a charm, two is not the same..." Tbh I'm not surprised that something happened between Noah and Nick, they've had a strong emotional and physical connection ever since Nick moved in with the family. And I can't say I mind it, as long as all 3 boys know what they're getting themselves into. Still, a part of me can't help but be cautious (but also optimistic). Anyway, great (and hot!) chapter!
  16. That would be nice, wouldn't it? Hide yo weaves! Ooh thank you for the detailed comment, I enjoyed reading your thoughts! Yes, Alex is feeling guilty about Brandon, realizing how his actions affected the guy. He seems to want to do the right thing, but that doesn't necessarily mean he always does. On one hand, he wants to come clean to Jeremy but on the other hand, he is afraid that might ruin things for them. We'll see how Natalie's visit will affect him.
  17. Ooh that is a nice observation! Yes, we see many characters guilty of that - Jeremy's mom, Natalie, and most importantly Alex. Or could it be that Natalie simply doesn't care? As for the app, we'll see. Thank you for the comments!
  18. “Sweetie, is that place the first or the second street on the left? I know it’s here somewhere. Right?” Gaby Hartley asked her son as they drove through town. She was in the driver’s seat, since Alex wasn’t allowed to have a car yet, so he took the opportunity to hitch a ride with his mother. “Mom, how should I know?” he frowned as he looked around from the passenger seat. “You’re the one who goes to furniture stores, not me. And besides, you forget I haven’t lived here in four years.” “
  19. Super fun, high-energy chapter, just like Ezra himself!! Eamonn is truly an amazing brother, as we learn what he did for Ezra and how he's still helping him! I feel for Beau, he loves his boy and wants him to be safe, but like Ezra's mom, he'll have to learn that he can't control the guy's life. Now let's hope Gloria and Michelle will like the new video!!
  20. A brilliant story about the world of professional wrestling seen through the eyes of a veteran wrestler, Diego Silva. However, the story is so much more than that: we follow the lives of a group of engaging characters as they deal with heartbreak, homophobia, betrayal, family problems, etc., watch them learn from their mistakes and grow. Features the Queen of England himself - Lance Lovecraft! (Try not to fall in love with him - you won't be able to resist.) Anyway, whatever I write here cannot do the story justice. It's charming, exciting and emotional and will make you want more! I highly recommend it to everyone, even if you're not a fan of wrestling!
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  21. That's the idea, but as you can imagine, there's bound to be lots of obstacles! Thank you very much for the support!
  22. “Before the dawn of men, Gods inhabited this world, slowly filling it with their own children. Over time, they started creating animals to keep them company, but of course, each God had their own favorites. It wasn’t long before this turned into a contest of who would create bigger, faster and stronger creatures. Odum, the God of Death and Underworld, had been in a long-standing conflict with goddess Nammis, for she was the one who controlled the domain of Nature, which he had coveted greatl
  23. Lovely! I love the rhyme scheme in these poems. And of course, the subject matter of nature is another big plus from me.
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    Protostar

    Awesome start, friend, did not disappoint one bit! I think Ezra is a great choice for a protagonist! Also, always lovely to see Kween Gloria again, and to hear that Michelle is in charge of KADA! Bring it on!!
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    Chapter 26

    Wonderful! I love the detailed description of Milan going through the process of becoming a werewolf. Although it was painful, it will pay off!
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