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EPISODE 6: NEURODIVERGENT The ride was quiet, as I had given him directions to my house. Glancing surreptitiously at him whenever an opportunity came may have turned out to be a fun game we played. Burbling chuckles were repressed fondly by glancing to the side, by huffing and sighing of furtive resolutions, tickled by his salacious glares that never flinched away from his vested interest; we were dancing, and our eyes were doing the salsa. Energetic prancing left and rig
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😂 I was already panicking, telling myself, "Did I misspell something?" "Did I have too many run-on sentences, tense shifts, sentence fragments?" I was ready to go through the story again and edit the shit out of this thing. 😆
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I'm not using Grammarly. 😂 Nor do I see any spelling mistakes so far in my work, since I double check what I write. If I've missed something, citing examples would be thoroughly helpful. 🤣
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If only you knew. 😅
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It's actually Nathan that's on the different spectrum. Greg is as normal as they come. Next episode sheds light on Nathan's circumstance. I just find it hard to write Greg because he's a very smart guy who prefers to downplay his intelligence due to his preference of keeping a low profile that's problematic for him since he's astoundingly good looking and people tend to notice. So in order to NOT shine in possible situations, he dumbs it down for himself though the dialogue he shares with those around him. Notice how his POV is very descriptive that it's overly literary yet the way he converses with those around him tends to be very simplistic. He's no longer in the police force due to plot reasons. Hahaha. Around chapter 11 or 12 reveals this.
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I giggled for a bit at this. 😆 Yeah, next week's episode will be a very, very interesting one.
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Greg took up criminology at Loughborough University. And while working as a police officer, he was getting his masters in Bioarchaeological and Forensic Anthropology from the University College of London. UCL has an 11% acceptance rate, and 5% for their post-graduate studies. I'm just saying that he's technically very educated as a city cop. That's why he's particularly hard to write for, because the way his mind thinks is very different from the way he acts and the way he projects himself around other people.
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Yeah. Nathan has a very interesting way of looking things. 😂
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EPISODE 5: CHARTREUSE Looking at the busses passing by, there was solace in the confounding truth that everyone was meant to go in every direction. That a path opens and closes for those yearning to seek it, those desperately wanting it, and those trying hard to fight for it. Allowing my heart to crow praise for deeds I have yet to make, I empowered myself to think. You deserve more. You deserve more. You deserve more... That I am more than the cruddy est
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Definitely. I have a feeling Karens aren't safe with you, rightly so. 😆 I'll bring you along the next time I wander off cautiously and happenstance meet a Karen.
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I'll take your anger and respite into consideration as I keep on writing. HAHA! 😂
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Yes (Book 2--depends if I go for it). And yes. And yes, Greg does deserve a break. He'll have a kitkat soon.
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I'll be posting every Wed-Sun, Asian Time, and Tues-Thurs, Western Time. I really like next week's episode and the episodes after that. 💀 The fun is just starting.
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He's being recorded for his onlyfans. He got recognised in public. 😂 Next chapter shall answer such questions. Stay tuned!
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EPISODE 4: BUMPED I arrived at Paullete, this small, quaint, and fairly expensive but satisfyingly delicious patisserie that serves cakes, pastries, and French breakfast just across Aldi’s. Fifty pounds for a six-inch pistachio cake is considered a hard sell for broke people like me. But their crispy leg confit, fried duck egg, mustard maple syrup waffle, and smoked duck breast, poached eggs, hollandaise, siracha eggs benedict were to die for. Normally, I’d never take a st
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OMG! This is too much effort! You're really trying to make me think and I hate thinking. 😂 Alrighty, when you're having consensual sex with an adult, regardless of whether it's a one-night stand or night, certain stipulations and agreement must be stated prior to the act. For Ryan, showing Ryan his STD lab results means = we can have sex without protection since I may be (a.) taking PrEP, (b.) wearing protection on my other sexual encounters. For Greg's perspective, it's a selfish way for him not to do the same, but he's very assured that he's won't get any STDs from anyone else because he's not bonking anyone else apart from Ryan. I inserted that narrative because it's to show that there's a sense of respect and balance within their relationship.
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Ryan is someone more. Mr. Bucket Hat is someone more. The cashier at Aldi's is someone more. Everybody's the main character at this point. 😂 I can't spoil the surprise can I? All I can say is things are going to get spicy at this point.
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EPISODE 3: THE QUID My jet-black fringe draped above my eyebrow. I blew the darn thing and eventually swiped my hair back. I said to Ryan, "I can’t take that.” We were in his bed, in this room that’s cluttered and slightly damp from all the fucking we just did. The blinds were closed, and only a smidge of sunlight entered through the slits, while the sweat of sex was all over the bed, along with the smell of carnal pleasures that had gone rank and rancid. Normally, w
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Cause I said so. He's also going to die in the next episode. In fact, this is the final chapter. Thanks for reading guys. 😂 I'm kidding. I'm not going to spoil the story. All I can say is he'll get a different job.
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London weather is always on crack. 😆 The end-of-year trip for year 7 students (my nephew's trip), which included a bus journey to Paris and four nights spent in a youth hostel, cost more than £500 per child. Given that the majority of the students were going, it would have been very difficult to refuse. However, £500 is a significant sum of money, particularly if you have many children. My sister wasn't having it. She did send him on that trip, but she was so pissed at the school for springing it on the parents without much notice.
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Thanks mate. 😁 Yeah. I really love Brady as a character. As for Greg, you'll love him more in the next episode. 😂
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Awww. 😢 Do you need a hug? I'll give you a hug to cheer you on. And yes. Greg's not getting that job. I'm kidding. HAHAHA.
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EPISODE 2: SOMEDAY Rain poured in, and a blanket of grey enveloped the entirety of London, where the skies continuously wept. While waiting under the shade of the gable ends and the ridge where two sloping sides of the roof met, I noticed the mansion across this house, as I was leaning on the wall, waiting for the heavy downpour to subside. With the property having occupied at least four apartments, there were two middling-sized London Plane trees in front of the main entrance.
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I'm not really versed in American politics. But from what I gathered, the government in power should care—and I think on the sidelines, they do. The US needs to salvage whatever it can from its weak negotiating position. When it signed the first deal, the US was able to leverage a strong position formed by working with not only its European Allies but with China and Russia. The US also had a more tenable and credible military position in the region with bases in Afghanistan that it could leverage to put pressure on Iran from Afghanistan and the support for Saudi Arabia that it could also leverage. It now has none of those things and is in a weaker position for it.
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Book 1 is 58k words, and it's already finished. I'm planning this novel to be around less than 300k words, around 4 books/acts. So yeah, I'm just being lazy altogether. I'll post the first book. But I have no plans of NOT finishing this...this novel is really spicy. Plus I like my writing style on this one. 😅Don't say that. Don't kick the bucket yet. You still have to finish reading this novel.
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