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  1. I'll be posting this next year. And you're right...this is a teaser 😂 Sorry for keeping your hopes up. But I'm awfully writing this at a faster pace. Probably because romantic stories are my jam.
  2. When high school Chemistry teacher Klebber Toledo and the big, hunky billionaire Dennis Ellison met on a dating app, they had no idea COVID-19 would turn their spur-of-the-moment trip to Costa Rica into a months-long adventure.
  3. BACK TO PRESENT DAY, NEW YORK AT THE ROOFTOP OF DENNIS’S FIFTH AVENUE APARTMENT… "...I almost forgot to ask," Klebber said, pausing the video, leaning back on his chair like he’d just remembered something. "Do you think that the production company’s gonna pull off recreating our first date? Didn’t they say they’re using 3D animation to make it cheaper?" "Pfft, animation?" Dennis said, going over to the blond's side and dragging a chair closer. "Nah, that’s trash. I threw in some
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    EPISODE 14: Q-NET Q

    Yes. He is their overlord, their gay overlord. *giggles* You're nearing the end... I👏 you kind sir.
  5. He has an uncle. His father's evil twin uncle several times removed, displaced and removed again. I'll post an epilogue after I finish chapter 2. Stay tuned. It's a 3rd person POV of Nathan.
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    EPISODE 9: OSCULATION

    He's a multi-billionaire. Like, he's drowning in zeh moneh. I'll expand on that come 2nd book.
  7. Ehm. *raises hand* Same here. 😂
  8. I think the GA system counted Book I as a chapter and added it to the volume list at 18. Book 1 - Chapter 1 Episode 1 - Chapter 2 and so forth... Episode 17 - Chapter 18 The system never really counted the prologue as part of the chapter volumes, I think. It's the inclusion of Book I that made it weird. Bad GA system! *Slaps AI arse*
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    EPISODE 2: SOMEDAY

    Oh definitely. Imagine not being able to provide for your kid. It's the worst feeling ever. I'm excited about your opinions. 😁
  10. But we don't want Greg to have it easy, do we? We want him to suffer! MWAHAHAHAHA. So he'd have lots of sex on the side, and I could write about it. Fair deal though. His suffering = sexual conquests. Sounds mint bruv.
  11. Thanks heaps. The prologue became my guide to how this story would end. Like seriously thanks for the support. We'll learn who Gustav is once we get that part. Even I don't even know who Gustav is. I have a hunch, but let's see where my brain will take me. Who knows, it might turn out to be entirely different.
  12. Based on what I've written so far, I'm 30k words in, it's literally just one scene, but I think based on the feedback I've gotten) it already has a lot of WTF moments. So I am excited. But I know this will take some time to get done.
  13. Aww. This is such a heartfelt take, and I love it. My original plan was to create a novel comprising Greg's assault, documenting his earlier life as a cop, his family life (with parts heading up to Leeds at his aunt's place) and his personal life (my intention was that he would have a boyfriend or be in a happy relationship). I wrote 10k+ words until I realised that I didn't have the stomach to write something sinister involving chopping up bodies and literally going inside the mind of a rape victim, a serial killer, and a PTSD sufferer. I told myself this had to be short because it might evolve into something more. I'm not a plotter; I'm more of a panzer, so I don't know where my mind would take me. So this entire novel became a prologue to Book II. And you're right, his family life should have been a great reflection of his struggle and desperation. This novel mainly has three episodes. I just chopped it up into bite-sized pieces to fit the format of GA. So I don't know the entire experience if you read it in one sitting. Maybe when I have the time someday, this will become a fully fledged novel, and I'll add the things you suggested. I did have a lot going on in my mind that I had planned to write about, like a plot with Ryan and his father (Greg becoming a bagger or something), an arc with Brady getting sick and Nathan having quality time, Greg staying in Leeds (his aunt's town) after he solved an ongoing political small town issue, and Greg going to America to find his mother. But I knew this would become a 200k novel if I did that. So yeah, I'll probably add those things to Book II.
  14. EPISODE 17: THE CHOICE My sudden descent back into the abyss into which I had fallen before had resurfaced. As the warm, ice-cold incisions in my chest and head had thawed, the rushing warmth, as I felt it crashing over my shoulder, my back, and my mind, flared up as it slowly ate my consciousness. In my chest—agony filled my chest! The impact was swift and terrible; the punch was crushing. Recurring occurrences, nightmares, fears, and isolation... Please leave m
  15. Haha. I think I'm too dumb to understand the reference 😂.
  16. What's being hoovered?
  17. It's a really big secret. And I can't wait for you guys to find out what it is.
  18. Well, it's fairly complicated. I'd say, based on what I've written so far in Book II, Greg would have, er, multiple love interests... *coughs* cause he's an irresistible slut *coughs* He'll have: A love he's been running away from. A love that he slowly learns to accept. And an unrequited love he's still unsure of. Either way, he's getting three dicks. So he's blessed. 🤣
  19. Dad will appear in Book II. Sadly, he will not appear in the last chapter next week. Doctor Beau will appear in the epilogue, which I'll write after I finish Book II. Because his story ties some plot to Book II, so yeah, that'll get posted next year. Greg's Little Secret is that... Stay tuned for the last episode. 😆
  20. What do you mean "gave away his love would be?" He might be Doctor by day and spy by night. Only time can tell, really. Hihihi.
  21. EPISODE 16: THE AGENCY The sun was closing in on the horizon, and the orange filter ballooned in the sky. I gazed outside, and the sounds that engulfed the street were cantankerous. Vehicles were, it dawned on me to say, enacting frivolous jubilation on the day’s end. The motorists encroached on the earth like ants bustling out of a colony. The sun’s departure signalled the rush to avoid the traffic schemes, annoying each other to combust their horns and beeps out o
  22. You just said the plot for the epilogue. HIHIHIHI. The plot thickens and I'm excited to write it several months from now. 😂
  23. The last two chapters are very special. I can't wait for you guys to read it.
  24. 😆🤣 Nathan has Aspergers, not ADHD. Although it would be a very interesting conversation and dialogue if he had ADHD. This book is going to have an epilogue that will feature Nathan. I'll write that down after I finish book II. Because his story ties some elements in the plot of Book II. So once I start posting the epilogue (Nathan's story) to this one, I'll be posting Book II a week later.
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    EPISODE 2: SOMEDAY

    I based the amount on a friend's school trip for his 8- and 11-year-olds. The school had rented private buses since it was for underage kids. They provided all the children with three main meals and two snacks in between. They were given £10 each (20 quid in total, for it was two museums) to purchase things at the souvenir shops. And then half the day was spent in a physics workshop, where I think the majority of the budget goes. The price seemed fair, but totally non-essential for a school trip imo. I could have brought my kids to KidZania and none would have been wiser.
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