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    You're somehow inspiring me to write another story like this--which I've already started. Haha. Thanks heaps for this! Really, thank you. 😁
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    Indigo

    LJCC commented on LJCC's story chapter in Indigo

    Thanks man. I really appreciate the feedback. Stay tuned for the next episode. More sadness to come. 😂
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    Indigo

    LJCC commented on LJCC's story chapter in Indigo

    LOL. Sorry, it wasn't my intention to make you cry. And I write like that cause that's Damien's voice. He's saying those things but I'm pretty sure that's his voice I'm hearing. Haha. I hear imaginary people, that's why. But joking aside, thanks for the input.
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    CHAPTER 8: INDIGO So there I was, frantically looking for Albert in the middle of the night, searching wherever my feet dragged me. Ending up on the main deck and then the saloon; he was nowhere to be found. I stripped the upper decks looking for him, as well as the gym. I even scoured the bar in the plunge pool and searched the sun deck, but he wasn’t there. I checked the ensuite rooms to ask the guest if he’d seen him. My reputation at the time was questionable. But I needed to put my pr
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    No offence taken. 😆 Thank you if you think the writing's getting better. But this is a completed series. So I had ample time to edit my own work and give you a finished product. And yes, the ridiculousness of the Plastic Love/In Da Club remix was reflected with how ridiculous the dinner was. Haha. The song's a banger though.
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    Oh stefan, don't insult me now. Of course it gets better. I'll stop writing if it doesn't get any better. Hahahaha. Geezus Christ, what a tough crowd. But I swear, the story gets better. 🤭
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    Oh wow. Thanks for that. Yes, it will slightly get darker but not that much. Just enough to give you an existential crisis for a second. 😂 But yeah, this is still a romantic comedy so there'll be humour pressed on every chapter. I hope you stick around. 😄
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    Paranoia

    LJCC commented on LJCC's story chapter in Paranoia

    Thanks heap. I had to speak through Damien's voice. That would've been said better but I'm liking how he said it plainly and straightforward. 😅
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    CHAPTER 7: PLASTIC LOVE BUT IT'S IN DA CLUB The night was windy that evening. Outside, northeast winds were clashing with temperate, cool waters, creating a gusty but inviting atmosphere. However, inside the yacht, the warm, humid temperature was at its peak when Emil and Dan fanned themselves from the lush sweat that dripped from their armpits. Dan’s white polo shirt had smudges of armpit stains that not even bleach could remove, while Emil’s sequined gown made her body all itchy from all
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    I tried watching this American Reality gay TV show called Finding Prince Charming. Bloody hell, it was a cesspool of differing personalities all vying for this one guy's willy. They were like trying to go for a gay version of the bachelor but the majority are vapid, while some want to have a future as a D-list celebrity. It was hilarious and awkward at the same time. I had to rinse my eyes with mouthwash. But it was a fun watch I'd have to admit.
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    Paranoia

    LJCC commented on LJCC's story chapter in Paranoia

    There's a reason why he doesn't want to kiss Damien. He has herpes. I'm kidding. 😂 No, the answer shall be revealed in chapter 8. After Chapter 8, everything changes. Their lives will never be the same. *maniacal evil laughter*
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    Misread

    LJCC commented on LJCC's story chapter in Misread

    No, it's Kimchi.
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    I saw a commercial of this and I was like, they better not be daft about their gossips. This is like love island gay edition all over again.
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    What You Know

    LJCC commented on LJCC's story chapter in What You Know

    Aww. Thanks man. How nice you. 😁
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    CHAPTER 6: PARANIOA The weight of the scuba gear pushed him further down. He paddled his fins for a good second until he could angle himself to reach the surface. "Dis is how you pirst test your scuba equipment. You scoop and dibe. Okey?" said Jerome, the official diving expert on the yacht. There were several people lined up, getting into the proper gear and equipment, who were listening to Jerome’s diving instructions. Every guest in The Kabukiran was a first-time diver. Every
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    Somebody Told Me

    LJCC commented on LJCC's story chapter in Somebody Told Me

    Thanks. I have a Filipino friend who translates what I wanted to say in English to which she'd text me the translation. As for the sauce, she drinks the vinegar sauce in the Tapsilog (the last time we had lunch at this Filipino restaurant) so I'm not sure if it's cultural thing or it's a her-thing. 😂 If it's a her thing, then I guess Albert adopted that behaviour. And as for El Nido, yeah, I visited Palawan last year. I was there for a month. I miss it already, especially the beaches. The beaches are really to die for. Bring me to the beach please... ☹️
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    What You Know

    LJCC commented on LJCC's story chapter in What You Know

    Since you asked... This story is complete at around 87k to 90k. I'm rough editing, meaning, adding some meat and bones since this is G.A. and not a publishing house where they squeeze the life out of your story. It's not really needed, but I want to since I'm procrastinating writing Book 2. Haha. The ending won't change. And I like the ending. It made me smile. Out of the crap that's going to happen in this book, the readers will need that. This is around 22 Chapters, with an Epilogue (I've yet to write but the scene is already in my head—I promise *giggles*) that would close up something in the story and will tie into the portion of the plot of book 2, which, ermmm... I have yet to write.
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    What You Know

    LJCC commented on LJCC's story chapter in What You Know

    Yes, a himbo: an attractive but unintelligent man, as per the dictionary. Damien's not really an idiot. But goddamnit he acts like one. But he's pretty good to look at, so that's a consolation.
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    What You Know

    LJCC commented on LJCC's story chapter in What You Know

    Yeah, he's a himbo. We all love himbo's don't we? Although next episode, you might see him in a different light. And as for the side track, it's very essential to his himboism. We need that side track to establish that he's more than a pretty face... and a sexy bodeh. Maybe he can eat his whole hand. Who knows?
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    What You Know

    LJCC commented on LJCC's story chapter in What You Know

    I love the giffy of the yacht. It's very summer-y. And yes, he'll resolve this coming Wednesday's dilemma with the power of lurve. They'll go on a sing and dance montage. 🕺 💃 oh wait... 🕺 🕺.
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    CHAPTER 5: WHAT YOU KNOW We were aboard the 135-foot luxury charter yacht, The Kabukiran. And the smaller one, The Hiligaynon, was beside our ship, rounding up its list of passengers. We were still waiting for the final guests to be picked up by the chase boat when Albert asked me, "Why are we on this yacht?" "This boat is for the VIPs." "Then why am I here?" "Cause you’re a VIP. Come on, I’ll show you around," I said while carrying his backpack as I motioned for him to foll
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    Somebody Told Me

    LJCC commented on LJCC's story chapter in Somebody Told Me

    Yeah, their chemistry is really something. While I was writing them, in the moments where they're in a sad situation or moment, I was like, "Aww... they just need to hug each other out." Then Damien does something sexual or Albert does something crazy. They're both lunatics in my head. As for the breakfast, yeah, I had tapsilog almost everyday at El nido beach. God, I miss that place.
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    Somebody Told Me

    LJCC commented on LJCC's story chapter in Somebody Told Me

    Yes, he currently buried the jar. Pickling time is 60 days. They'll have awesome kimchi after that. Albert's on a keto diet lately that's why he hasn't taken the drugs. He says it'll ruin his figure. It actually helps since you lose the appetite. What do I know, I'm only partially medicated. Haha. Stay tuned for the next episode... they'll be backstories here and there.
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    CHAPTER 4: SOMEBODY TOLD ME "Good morning," I said, while having my favourite breakfast to eat at lunch: garlic rice and a sunny-side-up egg with cured beef. Slicing a portion of the meat, I dipped it in the vinegar sauce and grabbed a spoonful of the rice and egg. "Wake up, you sleepy head. Rise and shine." I’ve been watching Albert sleep, waiting for him to get up as I tell him about my surprise. Once he opened his eyes, he grabbed his phone from under his pillow. "What time is it?"
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    Misread

    LJCC commented on LJCC's story chapter in Misread

    For example this one: The italicised text means it's spoken in a different language. In this context, it's said in Filipino, since the setting is in The Philippines, where Filipino is the official language. The one inside the parenthesis explains it English. Another one: The main character said the italicised words in Filipino because he speaks fluent Filipino despite being white. And then inside the parenthesis explains what he said in English, which I hope made it less confusing. Adding Filipino just adds a bit of reality to the dialogue, since the setting isn't somewhere in the West.
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