D.K. Daniels
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Day 42 Today was an all-around terrible day–not because I did anything terrible, but due to the sinking feeling in my heart. Somehow, I feel like I've lost all sense of direction, and I have chosen to give in to the seedy underworld. It's not my proudest accomplishment, but I'm afraid. I'm fearful of having to go home to my dad… I'm scared of Salvatore–he's scarier than my father. It's the knowing of what could happen but not realizing when it could happen. I believed I was pretty cl
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I think you are right... Matias getting the little bit of freedom to demonstrate his dominance in an environment he feels like he can control has mellowed with him. It will take some messed up stuff for him to change his mind... and thanks for reading
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No matter how bad things get... there is always a way out... even if its not the most desirable exit. The consequences will catch up, and the exit will be less than stellar. Thanks for commenting
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I'm sure he'll figure out how to put things back on track. Sometimes you have to be foolish in order to figure out how to correct things.
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Day #40 I'm exhausted, so excuse me in advance for making mistakes. I can hardly keep my eyes open, and my brain feels like it has melted. All the brain juice is swishing back and forth in my upstairs room, and I don't have the energy to debate whether I'm right or wrong. So, listen, after what happened on Sunday, I thought it would have been all peachy with Matias. The more I hang around with him, the more I fall in love with who he is and how free-spirited he can get. Except, seein
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Its probably the first time he was happy in such a long time, though... as with most things in life... the moment doesn't always last. I guess we are sailing on calm sea, and the storm on the horizon is drawing closer.
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Trouble is coming.... I guess all thats left is to wait and see who is caught in the crossfire... metaphorically speaking. And year... I heard that expression a few times, so I had to add it. Plus, there was a filter on snapchat that allowed you to open your mouth and you'd puke a rainbow lol.
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I'm sure they will be shocked if they found out. I guess we'll have to wait and see if they find out, and if Kyle stays just a normal teen.
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Day 36 I still can't believe how the whole week has passed so quickly. I thought I'd have more time to do things, but it feels like I just get up to go to work, sleep, work, and repeat some more with work. I've been thinking about what Matias did all week, and the more I reflect on it, I can feel myself going a little more stupid and crazy. Why does it feel like Matias enjoyed what he did at the bakery? I don't want to be with someone who gets pleasure from causing pain and destructi
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Folks who suffer from substance abuse never realise the damage they do to the people around them until, usually it's too late. You have to be willing to make a change, often many don't wish too. Its the irony of the fathers problem that I wanted to show. So, thanks for pointing it out. Thanks for commenting too.
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Things are only starting to heat up in terms of this story. I am already a few chapters ahead over on Patreon, and things are beginning to look bleak. Things are set to get more complicated.
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It might be soon... you'll have to keep reading to find out 🤣
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Its sad to think about it. Some kids don't realise how well they have it. Kyle is making his own path in this crazy world, even though it might not be the best, at least he's trying. Nice to have you on board. I hope you enjoy the remainder of the story
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I think you might be onto something here... having allies does sound like fun. Makes me wonder what could happen when the real s**t drops.
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I guess we'll have to wait and see. Matias might be rough and ready when it comes to business with Salvatore, but maybe he just might have a soft spot for Kyle.
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Day #33 I never expected Matias to turn up at my job today, asking and begging for me to come along with him on some wild adventure. If it was earlier in the day, I might not have been able to sneak out. However, something tells me he timed my departure. There was still about an hour left for the day, and I felt tired and irritable with the horrible sweat I worked up. At first, I told Matias that I couldn't go along with him, and I thought that ought to have been enough.
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Glad that the story is bingable... and always comment, no matter how big or small the offering. I love hearing feedback, and I love to respond to folks. I guess, the android phone is lost to the ether... or is it? And yeah, the priest saying is something people say here in Ireland when they are hot and sweating on a summer day. Recently we've had really haphazard weather. Its sunny one moment then back to the usual rain the next.
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I know right... I must have a thing for Latino boys of late in my stories. Julian in my Dumbstruck series over on Amazon is also Latino. 🤣
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Lets hope he can pay of his debt.
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It baffled me too, I hadn't planned on it ending up that way either, but here we are....
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I wonder if she noticed. Maybe she has some inkling about these things. Fingers crossed it all comes out well.
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Welcome to party.... I hope you are enjoying the progress so far. Things are only beginning to heat up. I hope you stick around for the race to the finish.
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I hope they end up together and safe by the end of the story. Even I don't know all the details of the ending just yet, but its good to see that the relationship is starting to bloom.
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Thanks for continuing my story. The idea of two boys falling in love with a crime background intrigued me for a while. Things with the loan shark are going slow right now, the story will eventually hit the ground running in the next half of the book.
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Thank you for your kind words. I try to be open and honest about everything, and this matter was something I could not skip over. I needed to show why I wrote such a story to some degree, so other kids could see that it can pass when you reach out. My stories are sort of a reflection of the type of person, or the adventurous life I wish I had lived when I was younger, but never got to due to bullying. My vacation is going great, I've seen so many new places. I'm feeling inspired, but I've been trying really hard to stay away from the keyboard for the month to give myself the break. I hope you are having an awesome week too :)
