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  1. D.K. Daniels

    Chapter 1

    Yes, sorry about that, on my end, I have been writing like crazy and finishing deadlines for a book release. Sometimes when things get hectic another project needs to be pushed to the side. I am afraid that is what happened with You & I. Although for now, I can say that chapter 13 is complete and I am to have to up on Patreon tomorrow and next week here on Gay Authors. I am delighted that you want more
  2. D.K. Daniels

    Chapter 1

    Thank you so much @SolarMaxx I am terribly sorry that I missed your comment. I don't know how I have not seen it until now. Its the fact that I am starting off again with the story because I was busy launching other projects in-between and had to stop writing. Its the fact that I was listing who wrote what letter that I came back to the previous chapters and only noticed your comment. I am glad that you like the concept, and I hope you stay tuned for the upcoming chapters. It's nice to see a familiar person commenting and reading my work
  3. Legend has it; the pumpkin clan screamed bloody murder.
  4. Love Like This D.K. Daniels I do not know his name, but for one short second, I believe I saw the man of my dreams. He moved swiftly between Christmas shoppers, smiling as he conversed with two pretty women. Wearing a black parka, beige chinos, and gleeful woollen sweater; the man ambled on unaware of my presence. For a while, I became transfixed looking at the beauty in the woollen jumper. There is something so boyishly sexy about it. The trio was headed to the food court
  5. A day at the mall for a middle-aged man turns into a relapse of memories when he shows interest for a handsome man.
  6. Oh I know that's not what I meant either. I was a little tired when I wrote that status so perhaps I didn't read it right. I just meant that I am sorry if my intention when releasing a short is not clear, and then getting your hopes up that it will be a continuation. Thanks for the comments and compliments, I hope your travels are going well.
  7. I like to keep most of my stories separate because they are different themes running through them. For instance, if I was to put up Now You See Me here on gay authors people would be a little shocked to find out its a young Norman Bates in the making. For one that is why I don't house most of my fiction together, and another reason being is that people often think it is all one story. Perhaps in the future when I am releasing a couple of stories together I'd put them together according to the theme. Although from what you mentioned I guess I'll put on new stories that it is a single entry. I have one consecutive series of all different themes which are flash-fiction. I believe you have commented on some of the stories. I don't believe however, it has reached the same exposure as some of my other works. People can be put off by the titles or other stories inside and simply stop reading. I am sorry If I disappoint when you see that a story will not be going on longer than it should. For now though if I do have free time I will be uploading shorts up until Christmas until I finish all my edits and release my novel-length pieces. I think I have grown as a writer, so I am wanting to stray away on different topics. I hope to go back to add a second edition to As They Say though
  8. D.K. Daniels

    Chapter 8

    I believe most people thrive when they are backed into a corner. For the ones who fight back; you'll be amazed at what you'll withness.
  9. D.K. Daniels

    Chapter 9

    When you have the survival of the group to endure with, the needs of your own no longer matter. I believe that is what is happening to the boys, they seem to be the backbone of the entire thing along with Marnie. Without them, what they have built up will topple faster than anyone can imagine is possible. The mystery of the plane is still a contender. Could they be imagining it? Could it be Military, or perhaps another it flies to another city outside a quarantine area? The zombie has displayed a new level of sophistication. Sneaking up on its prey is now on its repertoire. All along as I was reading, I was secretly thinking, this is pretty badass actually; the zombie undermining the kids while they are asleep. I can imagine how I'd feel with a thing like that happening, it put a little worry in my mind for the characters. That's character development done right. Perhaps the zombie knows what sleep is and that he's been watching them. If bullets and fire won't kill him... maybe a kaboom is the only thing that can. Love this chapter... strongest written chapter yet.
  10. D.K. Daniels

    Chapter 8

    Sorry for the long absence, I have a habit of starting too many projects and my head gets crowded, same for reading material lol. I will finish.... this year I hope. I wonder what is on the aeroplanes, now that everyone has spoken about it the interest is there. The best thing they can do is prepare, and that is what they are doing. I just hope in the future that when the zombie comes back they have an advantage on their side. Its good to see that a community presence is established. It would appear everyone has everyone's backs. The more I read, the more I notice how much life you have brought into this story. From the continuous laboured thrill of day to day tasks, to the capturing of hope. I am thoroughly enjoying this story.
  11. Thanks, OzLoGo, thrilled you liked the new story. Thanks for the kind words. The comment on being a master of emotion was an ego boost lol. I try really hard to breathe life onto the page, and if you can feel it then I must be doing something right. Perhaps in the future, I will write the other side of the POV for Eoin. I never really thought much into a continuation. I finishing up a couple of loose ends from other stories so that I can focus on a large project. True problems like Eoin's dad needs to be dealt with. I know back awhile ago you asked about me doing a more larger work and that is what I wish to do. I hope to finish up Before The Storm, and my Halloween Speical, Light The Night by Mid-November, so that I can go back to do editing on 3 large projects. So that in the new year I can start As They Say - Part 2 and Even If We Tried which is an older book.
  12. Thank you for your time, I am delighted that you took the time to read my content. Whenever I set out to write the environment and the characters are always my top priority. In order for me to tell a good story I need to feel close to the characters otherwise, the emotions that come through on the page would never come forward. Thanks for the comment.
  13. Thank you I am glad that you enjoyed the read. Yes, unfortunately, I have only planned in my head for it to be a one-off piece. Though perhaps in the future I will write another short from Eoin's point of view to tie-up loose ends.
  14. Echoes of Love D.K. Daniels "Come on… Come On…" Eoin beckoned to me, motioning with his hand to accompany him to the diving spot. Running barefoot along the promenade I chased after my childhood friend. My toes slopped around in the tiny puddles left by the sea. Anytime my soles touched a spill that had accumulated made me shudder. When I did come in contact with a pool, the wetness left behind a trail of footprints, and picked up sand as I pushed onward. You couldn't exact
  15. Fourteen-Year-Old Eoin is facing some tough obstacles. That is until his best friend takes him out for the day to get away from all the difficulties. When the two boys skip a full day of responsibilities to go diving at a local dive spot. They realize the afternoon is just what they needed to escape the pressures of reality. Everything is sunshine and peaches until Eoin finally speaks his mind.
  16. D.K. Daniels

    Chapter 7

    I'm pretty sure they have enough explosives to make mincemeat of the zombie. I can imagine it now; a misty blood shower... whoops that got dark lol. Anyway loved the tone you set throughout this chapter. Its made the boys feel vulnerable to me. All along I was waiting for something to happen, that would change things, and I am relieved that nothing bad happened... yet. The silence and the layout of the town you described sounded like it was a nice place to live before all what happened. As the boys were taking the door from the truck, I was secretly saying to myself... don't put the gun down... argh... he put the gun down. The silence and stillness of everything increased the tension. I can relate to such a situation, I think most people when they are in a quiet place. Looks like everyone is banding together for a standoff. What's the odds that after all this prep, the zombie has a trick up his sleeve. Thanks for the chapter; now that Halloween is almost here this makes for a perfect story.
  17. D.K. Daniels

    Chapter 6

    Interesting point of view. Many people just label zombies a flesh-eating monster. Having some stop and think whether their previous intelligence has any impact on what they are now is cool. The more I hear of all the characters I grow to love them more. The idea of incinerating the zombie may prove tricky if the thing has intelligence. Let alone on the first try, the zombie never even came near the base. Richie seems like he will be a great leader for the pack, although I have assumed already that Marnie and Richie are the natural powers when it comes to them being leaders. Can't wait to see what the kids come up with to protect themselves from the zombie; thanks for another great chapter.
  18. D.K. Daniels

    Chapter 5

    Awesome chapter; loved the buildup to the scene. The zombie would not give up easily; it goes to show they really are as intelligent as humans. Now that thought is rather scary. Glad the car was strong enough to hold up to the harsh beating it got. Jack did an awesome job to ensure whoever was inside would have time enough time to react accordingly. Glad everyone is okay. I think I like Marnie's attitude; bossy but lovable. Thanks for the chapter
  19. D.K. Daniels

    Chapter 12

    To Watson, I was gone long before school let out on Friday. I guess you could say it is a little weird considering I'm supposed to be the geeky one, and you're assumed to be the jock. Somehow, it's amusing to see the roles reversed. Currently, it's Monday, so I didn't get to read your letter until this morning. Nevertheless, yeah, I've known for a while that the teachers move the mailboxes daily. I presume you could say you know how the notes get transferred so quickly now. Over th
  20. D.K. Daniels

    Chapter 4

    Brilliant chapter. I wasn't expecting a zombie to pick up the trees and hurl them at the base. I thoroughly enjoyed the surprise. At the start when the tree was bending back and forth; I was like... here we go... something big is going to happen. Something monumental. Then the zombie ripped the tree from the ground and threw it at the base. Then it threw me. I was not expecting that but I love it all the same. This scene was pretty awesome. It can be said now that the zombies have some form of intelligence, or at least this one guy does... like Ceasar from Planet of the Apes. Can we call him Giovanni...? The suit seems fitting for the guy; as does the name. At first, I assumed he was tossing the trees to near enough to each other to build some sort of a ramp up the side of the building. That would show some strategic notion. I hope the boys in the car will be already. They have some wiggle room inside the vehicle in case of problems. Although seeing Giovanni picked up a tree and hurled I doubt would take much. Let's hope the boys locked the doors and the zombie does not know how to open them. Otherwise, this is going to be a reenactment of Jurassic Park. Loving the story so far... can't wait to read on. Leaving the base can put Marnie and the other kids in danger; let's hope the boys find a way out of this situation.
  21. D.K. Daniels

    Chapter 3

    I had a sense you were building up to something much bigger, and now I am intrigued. Love the build you added to the chapter, it was as if you were seeding a promise that something was going to transpire before the chapter was out. Some excellent thought went into developing the characters and with every new chapter I read, I become more enveloped in your story. The caution and length of these kids went to ensure the survival of not only themselves but also their group is fantastic. All along, I was with the characters as they rolled down the road from checkpoint to checkpoint before looping around the town. The little snips of time you interweave is beautifully done. For instance, the backstory about the friend sitting on the porch and taking it from a complete happy moment to a dull and sad moment; where the audience envision his decaying body is well executed that I felt the grief the characters are feeling. So we have fuel and food... we saw some nice character development with the couple and Mike who at first seemed hot-headed, but he only wants to protect those he loves and himself. If that means putting down a zombie before it has a chance to be on your front door, then so be it. Now with shots fired... let's hope its gun practice. I am enjoying the story so far; thanks for the time and efforts
  22. D.K. Daniels

    Chapter 11

    Ah I see, I'd love to experience all four seasons. In Ireland, we are lucky to get two. There are Winter and Summer, there is really no distinction between the others other than the fact that leaves fall and leaves grow. For about 300 odds days of the year, it is raining or either dull. When the sun comes it out it is rear but when it does, people love it. However, our weather changes dramatically. It could be raining one moment, scorching the next, and then two days later it could be snowing. I have never been skiing I must try it; water sports is the biggest thing in Ireland apart from GAA. Golf for me has never been an attentive pastime. I need something a little more stimulating to keep my attention. That's great to hear, I am glad that the two of you guys hit off. It's nice to have friends around the globe. Most of my books, however, are not based on me or anyone I know. Sure, the odd thing that happens like climbing a tree as a kid made it into a story but that's about it. Everything else comes from my mind. Most people I normally know say they find me interesting. I find myself either one of the following; annoying or extremely uninteresting. I am a quiet soul; I tend to keep to myself. As for how I write things down; well that's just me being honest. Once I know who a character is, I try to be honest in everything that they are doing even if they are manipulative. Oh please, do tell me what your book is about. I am delighted that I have inspired you to write; so thank you. I don't know actually what I have done to elicit such a thank you, but I wish you all the best with your project. I hope you are well.
  23. D.K. Daniels

    Chapter 1

    I have been good and yourself. I have been meaning to get around to a couple of your stories since you mentioned it. I am glad I did because I like your style. Oh yes, have a gander at the two movies they are awesome. I love the adrenaline of 28 weeks later... the soundtrack keeps me on the edge of the seat alone. My love for anything that is shot raw and as authentic as possible always catches my eye. Its good to finally catch up with you.
  24. D.K. Daniels

    Chapter 2

    It would appear that the zombies have a limited form of intelligence. The zombie went for the front door after he didn't get in the back. I wonder who the kids are going to survive when they are faced with having to shoot them on their own, now that Jack is gone. Excellent way to kill a character though. Sounds like Jack was a valuable guy from what I can tell. Loved how you brought the story back to the present with a heartfelt moment of human contact. Symbolising; we are all in the same position. We need to be here for one another. Thanks for a beautiful, thought-provoking chapter.
  25. D.K. Daniels

    Chapter 1

    I finally got the chance to start the story and so far the imagery alone has me hooked. I love how you have captured the sense of despair of what once was. The opening scene was so vivid, I felt as if I was watching a movie, witnessing the rock fall down the cliff face. I like the unconventional approach to the zombies. I love zombies who are fast and full of rage like 28 days later and 28 weeks later. Great to see you put Richie and Jermery as a couple, I can already see myself rooting for not only their relationship but their survival. The farm building the kids constructed sounds quite high-tech in terms of dystopian standards. I remember a while back when I was doing research for a similar project I read about tunnel entrances which had flamethrowers to stop people from getting in. I believe I also saw a couple of these things in action; being build on Doomsdays Preppers. I love how you set up the premise with all the kids with guns; I can guess this is going to be badass. I can picture the fort with the scorched field around it. Can't wait to read more.
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