D.K. Daniels

I'm sure it will, you are a talented writer You've already surprised me a couple of times so I have no doubts.

Oh, of course, I always do the same in my stories... the closer to imitating real life the better. People always connect to human emotions when they are shown. I just think the little addition you have concluded reminds me of a real couple and empowers the realism.

I wonder what made mom stop talking in the first place? Glad she did though; speak I mean. It still lets people know she is there even though she has little to say. Sometimes the most influential people have the least to say. It's nice getting an insight into the other folks in the camp. The timing for it is perfect. It seems that everyone is growing as they make their way forward. Sometimes all you need is a call to action to make heroes of everyday people. I guarantee these kids would die for each other given the chance to save someone else. I am assuming that our friend will be back in his birthday suit when the time is right... Makes me wonder since they are completely a healthy blue and self-healing, then what is keeping them alive.

Perhaps I was right with the kids being stuck inside some sort of quarantine because you never really heard much about the outside world. For all, they know that the place still goes on without their knowledge and that they are being monitored like some crazy Maze Runner stuff. Imagine if Jack was one of those guys who were there to chaperone them, but when he died the people on the outside so how well the kids were handling themselves and decided to keep monitoring. Breaking the sound barrier needs to be a military plane, a jet which you mentioned. Not a lot of people I'd assume would know how to fly one. I recall you mentioning about the USA being invaded by another country. I can't remember which chapter it was, wheater it was this one or the next chapter since that is the farthest I have read so far. But that is an interesting take on the idea also. An entire country is wiped out so that another nation can take control of it. I wonder what they wanted from the country in the first place to take such a drastic action as to wipe out 320 odd million Americans. I am loving the progression of the story. Its great to see the kids being somewhat kids for a moment when they are discussing their interests in books while they are in the library. Can't wait to catch up... I am always catching up lol.

At least the heavy work of the contraption they have built is done, but yeah I don't think Zombo will fall for mannequins, after all, he did try to open the hatch, he blocked a driveway with a free. I think the kids are forgetting just how smart this guy really is. I think Richie and Jeremy and a pretty good couple. They lean on one another for guidance and understanding and that's what couples do. I love how you throw in the odd little flirtatious joke between the boys. It reminds me of things myself and my partner would also do. I sense everything is leading up to a big climax, I have a guess that it's going to be pretty awesome, but I'll be a little sad for when I get there.

I know, I know.... this must be the longest I have taken to read a book, but I will get there. Dividing my time between everything is hard sometimes, but just know I didn't stop reading because the story lacks any interest. On the contrary, I rather fond of the characters you have created and its great to see everyone beginning to pull together to protect what little they have. I admire the boys doing what has to be done to protect the last place on earth that feels safe for them. Let's hope Zombo gets the sh*t blown out of him when all comes around. Of course, I know nothing is ever that easy now is it. Thanks for another entertaining chapter.

Yes, sorry about that, on my end, I have been writing like crazy and finishing deadlines for a book release. Sometimes when things get hectic another project needs to be pushed to the side. I am afraid that is what happened with You & I. Although for now, I can say that chapter 13 is complete and I am to have to up on Patreon tomorrow and next week here on Gay Authors. I am delighted that you want more

Thank you so much @SolarMaxx I am terribly sorry that I missed your comment. I don't know how I have not seen it until now. Its the fact that I am starting off again with the story because I was busy launching other projects in-between and had to stop writing. Its the fact that I was listing who wrote what letter that I came back to the previous chapters and only noticed your comment. I am glad that you like the concept, and I hope you stay tuned for the upcoming chapters. It's nice to see a familiar person commenting and reading my work

Legend has it; the pumpkin clan screamed bloody murder.

Love Like This D.K. Daniels I do not know his name, but for one short second, I believe I saw the man of my dreams. He moved swiftly between Christmas shoppers, smiling as he conversed with two pretty women. Wearing a black parka, beige chinos, and gleeful woollen sweater; the man ambled on unaware of my presence. For a while, I became transfixed looking at the beauty in the woollen jumper. There is something so boyishly sexy about it. The trio was headed to the food court

A day at the mall for a middle-aged man turns into a relapse of memories when he shows interest for a handsome man.

Oh I know that's not what I meant either. I was a little tired when I wrote that status so perhaps I didn't read it right. I just meant that I am sorry if my intention when releasing a short is not clear, and then getting your hopes up that it will be a continuation. Thanks for the comments and compliments, I hope your travels are going well.

I like to keep most of my stories separate because they are different themes running through them. For instance, if I was to put up Now You See Me here on gay authors people would be a little shocked to find out its a young Norman Bates in the making. For one that is why I don't house most of my fiction together, and another reason being is that people often think it is all one story. Perhaps in the future when I am releasing a couple of stories together I'd put them together according to the theme. Although from what you mentioned I guess I'll put on new stories that it is a single entry. I have one consecutive series of all different themes which are flash-fiction. I believe you have commented on some of the stories. I don't believe however, it has reached the same exposure as some of my other works. People can be put off by the titles or other stories inside and simply stop reading. I am sorry If I disappoint when you see that a story will not be going on longer than it should. For now though if I do have free time I will be uploading shorts up until Christmas until I finish all my edits and release my novel-length pieces. I think I have grown as a writer, so I am wanting to stray away on different topics. I hope to go back to add a second edition to As They Say though

I believe most people thrive when they are backed into a corner. For the ones who fight back; you'll be amazed at what you'll withness.

When you have the survival of the group to endure with, the needs of your own no longer matter. I believe that is what is happening to the boys, they seem to be the backbone of the entire thing along with Marnie. Without them, what they have built up will topple faster than anyone can imagine is possible. The mystery of the plane is still a contender. Could they be imagining it? Could it be Military, or perhaps another it flies to another city outside a quarantine area? The zombie has displayed a new level of sophistication. Sneaking up on its prey is now on its repertoire. All along as I was reading, I was secretly thinking, this is pretty badass actually; the zombie undermining the kids while they are asleep. I can imagine how I'd feel with a thing like that happening, it put a little worry in my mind for the characters. That's character development done right. Perhaps the zombie knows what sleep is and that he's been watching them. If bullets and fire won't kill him... maybe a kaboom is the only thing that can. Love this chapter... strongest written chapter yet.

Sorry for the long absence, I have a habit of starting too many projects and my head gets crowded, same for reading material lol. I will finish.... this year I hope. I wonder what is on the aeroplanes, now that everyone has spoken about it the interest is there. The best thing they can do is prepare, and that is what they are doing. I just hope in the future that when the zombie comes back they have an advantage on their side. Its good to see that a community presence is established. It would appear everyone has everyone's backs. The more I read, the more I notice how much life you have brought into this story. From the continuous laboured thrill of day to day tasks, to the capturing of hope. I am thoroughly enjoying this story.

Thanks, OzLoGo, thrilled you liked the new story. Thanks for the kind words. The comment on being a master of emotion was an ego boost lol. I try really hard to breathe life onto the page, and if you can feel it then I must be doing something right. Perhaps in the future, I will write the other side of the POV for Eoin. I never really thought much into a continuation. I finishing up a couple of loose ends from other stories so that I can focus on a large project. True problems like Eoin's dad needs to be dealt with. I know back awhile ago you asked about me doing a more larger work and that is what I wish to do. I hope to finish up Before The Storm, and my Halloween Speical, Light The Night by Mid-November, so that I can go back to do editing on 3 large projects. So that in the new year I can start As They Say - Part 2 and Even If We Tried which is an older book.

Thank you for your time, I am delighted that you took the time to read my content. Whenever I set out to write the environment and the characters are always my top priority. In order for me to tell a good story I need to feel close to the characters otherwise, the emotions that come through on the page would never come forward. Thanks for the comment.

Thank you I am glad that you enjoyed the read. Yes, unfortunately, I have only planned in my head for it to be a one-off piece. Though perhaps in the future I will write another short from Eoin's point of view to tie-up loose ends.

Echoes of Love D.K. Daniels "Come on… Come On…" Eoin beckoned to me, motioning with his hand to accompany him to the diving spot. Running barefoot along the promenade I chased after my childhood friend. My toes slopped around in the tiny puddles left by the sea. Anytime my soles touched a spill that had accumulated made me shudder. When I did come in contact with a pool, the wetness left behind a trail of footprints, and picked up sand as I pushed onward. You couldn't exact

Fourteen-Year-Old Eoin is facing some tough obstacles. That is until his best friend takes him out for the day to get away from all the difficulties. When the two boys skip a full day of responsibilities to go diving at a local dive spot. They realize the afternoon is just what they needed to escape the pressures of reality. Everything is sunshine and peaches until Eoin finally speaks his mind.

I'm pretty sure they have enough explosives to make mincemeat of the zombie. I can imagine it now; a misty blood shower... whoops that got dark lol. Anyway loved the tone you set throughout this chapter. Its made the boys feel vulnerable to me. All along I was waiting for something to happen, that would change things, and I am relieved that nothing bad happened... yet. The silence and the layout of the town you described sounded like it was a nice place to live before all what happened. As the boys were taking the door from the truck, I was secretly saying to myself... don't put the gun down... argh... he put the gun down. The silence and stillness of everything increased the tension. I can relate to such a situation, I think most people when they are in a quiet place. Looks like everyone is banding together for a standoff. What's the odds that after all this prep, the zombie has a trick up his sleeve. Thanks for the chapter; now that Halloween is almost here this makes for a perfect story.

Interesting point of view. Many people just label zombies a flesh-eating monster. Having some stop and think whether their previous intelligence has any impact on what they are now is cool. The more I hear of all the characters I grow to love them more. The idea of incinerating the zombie may prove tricky if the thing has intelligence. Let alone on the first try, the zombie never even came near the base. Richie seems like he will be a great leader for the pack, although I have assumed already that Marnie and Richie are the natural powers when it comes to them being leaders. Can't wait to see what the kids come up with to protect themselves from the zombie; thanks for another great chapter.

Awesome chapter; loved the buildup to the scene. The zombie would not give up easily; it goes to show they really are as intelligent as humans. Now that thought is rather scary. Glad the car was strong enough to hold up to the harsh beating it got. Jack did an awesome job to ensure whoever was inside would have time enough time to react accordingly. Glad everyone is okay. I think I like Marnie's attitude; bossy but lovable. Thanks for the chapter

To Watson, I was gone long before school let out on Friday. I guess you could say it is a little weird considering I'm supposed to be the geeky one, and you're assumed to be the jock. Somehow, it's amusing to see the roles reversed. Currently, it's Monday, so I didn't get to read your letter until this morning. Nevertheless, yeah, I've known for a while that the teachers move the mailboxes daily. I presume you could say you know how the notes get transferred so quickly now. Over th