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  1. OzLoGo
    Well written, full of tension and humor. Makes me wish I was back on the track team. Oh to see what my neive brain did not even see as an opportunity. I have read your other story and am following your present (in progress). You are a good writer. I look forward to reading other things you write.
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    Chapter 13

    OzLoGo commented on Roe St. Alee's story chapter in Chapter 13

    First of all thank you for your classy way of telling the story. It feels so real. I look forward to your next installment.
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    Chapter 12

    OzLoGo commented on Roe St. Alee's story chapter in Chapter 12

    This is now turning into every guys dream. The longest blow job in history. You left us at the height of excitement and inticipstion and we are all waiting for Carters reaction. You are cruel (😋). Since the story is, “How I Got Carter” we can only assume he takes it in stride, just like Jackson did, but who knows, Carter is possibly Str8. This can go in so many directions, it will be fun to see what you do with it. Just please get on with the story so I don’t wear out my phone logging on to see if you have updated it lol.
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    Chapter 5

    OzLoGo commented on Roe St. Alee's story chapter in Chapter 5

    I am going to be honest, I started reading this story because my (in progress) story is on hold for the Olympics. I wanted something to read. I was not impressed with the first chapter, in fact I almost quit the story and went looking for another, but I went ahead and moved onto ch2. I am not a person who gets stuck with first impressions. I like your story and I am enjoying reading it. Good character development. Great story line, it is very real and believable.
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    Great job. I didn’t really want to see this story end, so the added chapter is perfect. Maybe others will write and you will feel inclined to carry on a little further into their lives. I felt a sickening feeling when I read the word Noah. If you wanted a reaction, you got one here. Another well done.
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    The Pen

    OzLoGo commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in The Pen

    Thank you, thank you, thank you. I was so pissed at Nate and so sad about Ryder that when I saw you had posted a new entry I didn’t even want to read it. I had to tell myself it is only a story, most likely made up, but still the events hit home, they brought back memories of real world events that had so much pain associated with them. Real life can hurt, a story can help bring pace where in life there was no peace. Thank you for righting a sinking feeling.
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