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You just keep creating the best story. Seeing everything come together, friends family and musicians was almost overwhelming. If you had ended the story right here, I would have been satisfied. All the pain and sorrow was washed away with this chapter. Brandon’s comments to Ted were perfect. Now Ted knows and we the readers know too, Ryder has always loved Teddy. Thank you for this chapter.
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That was fantastic. I am so glad that Oli and Mark are growing in their friendship before the pants come down. Sex is so much better when the time is right. I liked every moment of this chapter. It felt like I was there standing off to the side watching as things happened. Great job.
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Time for Remembrance and Celebration
OzLoGo commented on Dahawk's story chapter in Time for Remembrance and Celebration
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No kidding. Watch out world, and I suspect it is going to be a better place because of Oliver and Ryder music. Staying ahead of rumors is always a good thing. In real life, my life, when I heard a rumor I would always go to the person the rumor was about and try to tactfully do some fact checking. Wonder how mom and dad will take a press conference. When it comes right down to it, they are his responsible parents for 4 more years.
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The mood swing in that chapter was almost too difficult to bare. There has been so much sadness I was hoping and praying things would turn around. I had a tiny ray of hope that it would and it did turn to joy. Mark is amazing. I do feel for him. Oli has so many mood swings and since Mark and Oli have been friends for years, I am sure Mark has seen most of them. I want the two of them to be an item like Ted and Ryder, time will tell. Great chapter. I still think this story needs a greater readership.
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Great questions there at the end. Like beauty which is in the eye of the beholder, music is up to the listener. It doesn’t matter that it is Ryder, it may not be a sound that catches the ears of enough people to make it a hit. Like and venture there are risks that have to be taken to raise above the norm. Great chapter. Now it will be interesting to see what direction Oli takes with his sexuality. At least he now knows the pleasure of JO.
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Keep them coming, that was fun to read.
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Emotions are such variable things. Having been in a number of plays I could really feel the emotion of opening night. On one had it is here, weah. On the other dread what if something goes wrong. We were fortunate we had an auditorium with seats so we could vision it filled with people. The best part of this chapter was the end of course. Sure glad Jackson never did anything to make it so Carter never wanted to see him again. Great to see that Carter woke up and saw what he was missin.
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Absolutely beautiful. Perfect in very way. I refuse to read the next chapter (not) because I want the boys together for ever. Even if Andy can’t be with Vic in your story line, at least he has been able to break through and learn that love is love.
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That was a well developed chapter. Sam is so right. Some are thinkers, some are doers. It is hard to say one is better than the other. The advantage Sam has is, it seems he is also a thinker because he has a much better grasp of life. I found myself chuckling to discover that Carter was also skipping class. Those boys need to have people they can confide in and get some information.
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You may not have written this chapter planning on causing tears, but that is exactly what happened. That was beautiful. Absolutely everything came together. I was so afraid with all the other events in this story that something would happen on the way to the hospital. I was almost afraid to open this chapter in fear of what might happen. You did a great job with this chapter it was perfect in every way. 😊
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Beautiful chapter, and trust me, not too much sex. That’s just how it goes when you meet a person you are in love with. I am happy for both of them but in honesty I am most happy for Vic. Sure he had plenty of sex, and sex is way better than JO but sex with out love is just getting off. I hope in time Andy will get brave enough to try taking Vic. Even if Vic is the regular bottom it is so much more enjoyable when you have all options available. I had a partner that was a total bottom and sometimes I just wanted to bottom myself. That meant I had to look outside our relationship. It is so much better when all options are available within the relationship. Great chapter.
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Break Ups and First Dates
OzLoGo commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in Break Ups and First Dates
Excellent chapter. Everything worked. The thought crossed my mind a few chapters back, maybe Oli can get Ryder interested in music again. I look forward to seeing that develop. The first kiss, the first wet dream. They just seem to go hand in hand. Teddy handled it well. Keep going I am enjoying every chapter. Great job of writing. -
Oh wow!!! So real. You got it all down on paper. How many times has that exact same thing happened. I felt like crying right along side Jackson. The only saving grace was the title you chose for this story. It gives me hope. In real life it didn’t always turn out. Thank you for your writing gift and a great story.
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Glad your imagination is fertile and great things are growing out of it! Kept it growing or is that going.
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Is it ok that I had the same reaction to this chapter that the two boys get when seen each other lol? Your writing just keeps getting better and better. Not knowing for sure I am beginning to think you are just telling us your life story. Lucky you, lucky me too my BF is Asian.
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Excellent chapter, I could feel the tension in the gathering. Hope Liz comes around after the delivery. Wouldn’t it be cool if she had a son and his middle name was Ryder. I enjoy your writing and always look forward to the next chapter.
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I saw that you had a new chapter posted a couple days ago. I have not started reading it yet it is 3:45PsT. 3/9. I am writing this before I read it. I am filled with excitement and expectation. I know it is going to be good. Part2. I have read the entry and enjoyed every word. The sexual tension was perfect. I could see the scene developing nicely in my minds eye. Great job.
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All I can say is wow! I hope the very best for Chandler now and now I hope Landon can trust someone and begin to heal.
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Kind of a strange start for a story. Having read your other story and really enjoying it, this one leaves me with a few questions. I will keep going and see where it leads. Your other story had a lot of tragic lives so that is a similar theme to your writing. This one the main character is more dark.
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Such a great story. Thank you for taking the time to write it. You have so many spin offs from it. I will mark you as a favorite author so I can read everything you write.
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Open a New Window, Open a New Door
OzLoGo commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Open a New Window, Open a New Door
Great chapter. Very sorry for Hunter, he will be back. Cool that Jamie was home at the right time, that will help Hunter recover ever quicker. It will be fun to see what happens with Andy. I guess Vic is eye candy to Andy. -
Cross Country - Full of Surprises
OzLoGo commented on Roe St. Alee's story chapter in Cross Country - Full of Surprises
IWell written, full of tension and humor. Makes me wish I was back on the track team. Oh to see what my neive brain did not even see as an opportunity. I have read your other story and am following your present (in progress). You are a good writer. I look forward to reading other things you write. ********* An additional thought. This story could use a sequel. You left lots of room for some great stories. -
Geoff, your doing a good job with your writing. Cliff hanger, or no cliff hanger you have my attention. I want to see how the story goes. Kept writing and we will keep reading.
