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Another sweet chapter! Noah's simple life is actually very enchanting at face value. A chill work day that provides enough for a stable living situation and enough space to bring home the tourist of the night, then beers with the blokes on the beach afterwards! What luxury - no wonder he's not at all excited about his parents forcing a higher target on him. It's really interesting to see Noah's introduction - or eruption - into feelings for someone else. At least he got Cassie's name right after he turfed her from his bed, but she & Gina just seem like passing fancies, even after a six (or seven or eight maybe) month relationship. Our boy has it bad for what seems like the first time, if the story so far is any indication. He doesn't seem to know what to do with this revelation or even what it means yet. He just does not like the idea of Leo dating someone! He notes it, but he hasn't worked out why yet. But that's fine, we've established repeatedly that this is something he's not good at He's a good egg - this elicited a smile from me! Trying to be genuinely kind and thoughtful and making a mess at the same time haha I can't believe I have to click the Next Chapter button to see what happens after Noah drunkenly slanders poor Luisa off in the texts to Leo and goes to sleep on it. That's going to be hard to take back if he doesn't like what he sees! Good chapter! But everyone who made it this far into my comment already knew that.

I'm not sure what reaction this was supposed to elicit but I found it funny haha Can you blame Noah for being distant with his parents? I'm not sure if it's passive-aggressive or just thoughtless, but ooft. Additionally, this one is relatable and stings a bit. I am also the target audience of this one. Noah's lack of emotional intelligence is on full display here, after we saw that in the first two chapters. I'm a bit amused his first thought is to deliberately rebound and get himself inside a tourist but he's twenty and been dumped for the first time, so pop off, king. I also note that he instinctively thinks about Leo when he's trying to look pretty in the mirror. Following the phone call from his mother, it's very easy to see where he got that from. She's hardly setting an example for him. Ironically, he's so charismatic and at ease socially. You definitely feel like you know a Noah in your friend circle, or at least adjacent to it. He's written to be likeable, but not perfect - he's easy to enjoy. (There's a joke to be made here - pretend I did that.) More on this: The chapter had a little less Leo, and I think it's a good thing. Noah's kind of bad at navigating his feelings, and that's where the fun in this story buds from. I'm eager to see them bond further - if he can get Cassie out of his damn bed.

I am 100% the target audience of this. This is a really sweet continuation of Noah's established fascination with other places. He seems to be very content and happy where he is, but still enjoys seeing pieces of other places, such as when he wonders where the tourists all came from and why they're coming to his home. I know it's just a name but the thought of a sandy spoon makes me shudder! Besides the obvious, Ralph, they're like, twenty. Please calm right down. I feel robbed by not knowing specifically what Ralph's issue with seafood paella is at a hot restaurant in a beach town is. It sounds like an instant crowd-pleaser. I'm glad he changed his mind! Noah not noticing the depth of his attachment is peak twenty-year-old! I'm looking so forward to seeing where they go with this. Maybe it's a little too soon from the breakup, but Noah is clearly hanging on to Leo whether he notices this or not. Super gorgeous chapter!

I feel SO bad for Noah in the beginning here! It's a very cold & casual way to end a relationship. Even if a little later - Noah proves how casual it is because two whole months is a really big margin of error when they've been dating for such a short amount of time! This, and the idea that Noah is usually the one who does the breaking up with makes me wonder if he has trouble emotionally investing in his relationships with women. Gina doesn't seem to think it's a big deal, after all. A "yeah cheers thanks a lot" and a peck and that's done forever. What a coincidence there's a guy right there who demonstrates a much more intimate connection right away the romantic/sexual tension coming from Leo is incredible! Noah not noticing that his friend is obviously in love with him makes this line even better: In fact, this line makes Leo immediately loveable - Leo is immediately jumping to Noah's defense - which isn't unreasonable at all, considering they're friends and Gina's goodbye was on the soulless side. But come on, this guy is sooo into Noah. Just happening to be outside his window after his breakup? Puhlease. This is such a fun, beautiful opening chapter!

It's another fun chapter! & @Summerabbacat, I couldn't have said it better myself The witty & fun-loving cast doing their best to act seriously in the roles they've been randomly assigned is just delightful. The best example of this is probably Eric/Father Tabernacle (which is my favourite in-character name!) - he wins my quote MVP for this chapter. That said, there was a lot more in-character interaction this time around, rather than the actors enjoying seeing each other again. I'm pretty sure there are some juicy deets ~ if I can look past the cast's seasoning on them! The "murder" scene kills me hahaha I can't imagine someone laying in wait in the hallway with a ketchup tube & getting the power cut ~ so much could have gone wrong! What if someone sprung them? "Yeah I'm taking this ketchup to my room in the dark, why are you being weird about it?"

I really do try to love all the characters equally ~ but always come running back to Stanson (of Charttoppers renown) and the queen of unintentionally hilarious dialogue, Tiffany! That said, Gloria had my favourite line in this one - she's making an incredible impression & definitely deserves more spotlight! On the flip side, I've forgiven & forgotten Marcus' transgressions from Charttoppers ~ it only took me a few years! This part cracks me up. Super relatable! It's a very interesting & engaging style of writing. The cast maintain their personalities while they're actively trying to play their role at the same time, which is delightfully chaotic & dare I say, fantastically distracting from the details they reveal about themselves! & good for Stanson I suppose the hot stableboy isn't out of his league!

I was so excited for the return of the characters from the previous series, and definitely justified in doing so! Until the sudden "death" of the host, you could almost forget that there were stakes & we aren't just a fly on the wall enjoying the interactions between the cast again ~ though "Murder on the Playground" is kind of a giveaway I'm especially keen to see more from the early boots of the previous game ~ the finalists (plus that moll Kelly) stole the show in the original Playground. This is hands down my favourite exchange!

SLAAAY!!

Haha that's true! I certainly didn't have that wisdom at that age 😂 Thank you Chris! Due to the mystery short story nature of the Oakfields it was unlikely I'd write a date in any follow ups, so I'm glad I did it here 😊 Thank you! I think they're pretty swish so I'm glad you liked it too! No Oakfield story goes without Reggie being a lovable pain in the butt. 😎

"Every time we ordered something else, or if we needed our empty plates taken away, the robot came back and looked at us and smiled on his little screen! And if he got stuck, one of the staff members would give him a smack on the head, and he'd turn around and go back to the kitchen - what a time to be alive!" Elijah's grin widened, listening to the speakerphone as he tried to make his annoying, curly hair behave itself. He'd expected to get a trim over the Summer holidays and get some nice

Thank you both! Definitely an honour! The audacity, the cheek, the nerve, the gall and the impertinence!

I'm glad! I thought why not ☺️ something low commitment and to kind of take the sting off Tyson's brattiness in the other story! Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! It was worth learning what a piroshki was and how to make one 😅 Hahaha I don't think Tyson will cope well with losing at any stage of his life, but especially before his growth! Masha is a pretty swish lady - I don't think she'd ever stand in the way of her kids being happy! (Just when they're trying to be alone!) It was my pleasure! I hope the other side of Tyson was a nice change ☺️ Thank you for the comment!

Though he'd been worried about oversleeping and getting woken up rudely by the woman who had taken him in as one of her own children, Tyson had barely slept a wink all night. It wasn't due to an unfamiliar setting, with starchy sheets, constant noise and a nurse shining something in his eyes every hour like clockwork. Nor was it Chad's annoying snoring or the sounds of footsteps creeping to the communal bathroom in the hall outside. He was excited - and terrified. Apprehensive was the correct wo

Three short stories about couples in my completed stories (Heart, Oakfield, To The Stars) enjoying Valentine's Day together.

Thank you so much for the cameo! This was a lot of fun to write & functions as a canonical spinoff of To The Stars or just a standalone story. I really personally enjoyed the cast of characters I spun up - whether they're amiable treasures or hostile little snots. Thank you Chris! I always encourage people to watch the weakest link 😜 criminally underrated game show format! Look... yes She's amazing - I can't say the same for the contestants! Bitchy is my bread and butter 😜 Gracias amigo! Best of luck with the Spanish students. ❤️

~ Genevieve ~ "Thank you SO much, Tammy. I'll call you back tomorrow and let you know what I've decided! Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU!" "I look forward to hearing from you. Bye-bye now," the voice on the other side was keen to hang up. Genevieve excitedly brushed the long blond hair behind her shoulders and squealed into her hands. Letting her giddiness subside, she got up from the edge of her bed and barrelled from the room she shared with two foster sisters into the sitting

Hahaha it was a lengthy battle but Elijah pulled through despite everything Tyson did to ensure a win! Close fight! Tyson tended to occasionally let some of his guard down in the periods between rounds when the camera wasn't looking! There is a little something I've got ready to post perhaps today after my flight or tomorrow after I sleep in 😅 The contest is over! But the saga has a little more to go yet. ☺️ Everyone except Tyson is probably happy about it! I'm glad you're happy for Elijah 🙂 My secret is that this was not the original winner haha 😅 so poor ObicanDecko probably got a surprise! Thank you so much friend, and thank you so much for your support! Tyson says you're a loser and he doesn't need your adoration. (But Heart Tyson says he appreciates it a lot!) Thank you Gary! I won't vote you off that's sure! 😘 I'm glad you enjoyed! I hope you read the next rubbish I post! An epilogue/teaser to follow.

At any point in the last six rounds, it would be easy to point to Tyson as the most confident among the finalists. He'd come in with a game plan and ruthlessly voted out whoever would be least productive to a large bank. That didn't come to fruition in the last round, as Elijah lost a tremendous amount of money, and Sona flipped the script and tried to vote him off instead. Tyson's illusion of a perfect game was destroyed, and the haughtiness and self-assurance had now given way to visible frust

I admit I'm having to rely somewhat on your comments to remember what happens chapter to chapter! Though I got a chuckle or grin out of every single one of these, I two of these are genuinely things I would have liked to have written in! (Spoilers the Luiza & Audrey one is amazing and I WISH I did that!) Thank you so much for the thoughtful comments! Fingers crossed no chapters come by that ruin the story! 😜

hahaha! I'd be thrilled to hammer out any dialogue-driven scenes if someone else had the patience to beautifully set the scene! I wouldn't let you skip to Tyson's story without a warning that Heart is a particularly dark text with a lot of confronting themes - plus it's a LOT of Tyson, being the protagonist I'm a little hesitant to talk further about projects I haven't finished (ADHD) but if all goes well this isn't the last you'll see of this ensemble

hahaha thank you for pointing it out! I fixed it

It certainly went lord of the flies very quickly! Tyson says he doesn't need your support 😜 but Vanessa, Veikko and Sona all appreciated your comment very much. I can't say for sure whether Sona likes you or not, but you would never find out until she wants you to find out. No spoilers! ❤️ Stop it Gary you're going to make my day! I love writing dialogue, so I'm glad that comes across in the finished product! I tend to struggle with vivid descriptions and setting a scene 😛 Thank you very much! This is supposed to be Tyson before the events of Heart, so I'm not about to disagree I'm not about to post his entire motivation & redemption in this little spinoff but when thinking of a primary antagonist for this story, he was an absolute shoe-in from my existing characters! Thanks for sticking with us! One more chapter to come - unless I decide to scribble up an epilogue!

As soon as Veikko had disappeared through the red-lit tunnel of shame, the final three should have been all smiles, but they felt uncomfortable. Since the first round, none of them had ever sent a vote at the other, trusting the other members of the trio to have their backs. They were all strong players and shared a mutual goal - but now, with one final vote coming up, they would need to betray someone. Sona, in the middle of the two, broke the silence first. "We made it, guys," she beamed

I appreciate that - I wrote Heart during a notably difficult period. If I were to rewrite, I would do a lot of things differently. Particularly the middle of the story, in which I would cut out a lot of the gloomy bloat. While I can assure you without spoiling the story that it does get better for both the readers and for Tyson, this story won't be edited any time soon & if so, it'd probably break the established rules of publishing on GA anyway. Thank you for your feedback.