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  1. mate

    JQ-060109

    Thank You, what a story! And I vote for second book, please.
  2. This book needed the five star rating while having none, so here comes. The lovable honest Will Carter lives his job, life and now the business life, which is sometimes cruel. There are forces trying to hijack the company with money in pocket in sight instead the company's future. With some unexpected help and some bending in truth we'll find who is foe and who is friend. The story keeps the thrill to the end. Thank you for writing!
  3. This is an awful but magnetizing story, not for the faint hearted. A young guy didn't get the love and understanding in despair and became years later known as the Ghost.
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    For the Love

    This story has it all: young romance, trills, speed, gadgets, guns and a very tight circle of friends. One of the best novels here, indeed. Read it! I feel very lucky to find this story already completed, as waiting for the next part would have had me in despair. How could anyone not binge read the story! Thank you for writing this excellent novel.
  5. This a vivid story of two young surfers ride with enourmous waves of a cat 5 hurricane the other to loose and the other to save. As the old Miss Apuhau expressed it: "storms sometimes bring rewards for the brave". Even if the story is one chapter long, I consider it worth the stars. Thank you for giving me these thrills.
  6. What a rollercoaster! The story had me in its claws up to the end. A well written story with well thought plot and fluent to read. It was hard to take pauses for sustenance and rest, luckily I found this story when it was complete, so the next part was always available. I would not have been able to wait for the next chapter. Thank you so much for your talent and effort.
  7. So finally a not so much tearjerker, fluent story anyway. I would have expected something more, but this kind of closes the Avery Noonan family experience nicely. Thanks for writing.
  8. Another well written fluent heartfelt story. The tissue warning is in correct place there, indeed. As this is the fourth in the series, I really recommend reading the previous parts first. Thank you for writing.
  9. An interesting, well written and fluent story that keeps the reader in its grip to the end. Thank you for writing it.
  10. mate

    Chapter 6

    There seems to be a haunting history, but also a future to win with care and love. Interesting setup, thank you.
  11. mate

    Chapter 15

    Does this mean that we may not enjoy further wins of Albin, meaning that this story is "Complete" even if the status says "In progress"?
  12. mate

    Spring Ch 13

    Intriguing development, again, thank you.
  13. I'm very sorry to see this is the end, would have liked so enjoy the characters more. Anyway, thank you for taking time and effort to write another educative and entertaining story that begun as touristic tour thru Australia, well worth to study the places more.
  14. In this story there are several pairs of lovers, a beach, sudden twists, guns, love, love, love and ticklings and laugh. What else would be needed in a decent love story?
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  15. This is a light - and, yes, ticklish - story. It has its turns and highs, all the time with positive humor. Very easy to read. Thank you for writing.
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  16. An easy and beautiful Christmas tale, and ticklish;)
  17. It sure looks like beginning of a nice story (again;). I really hope you have the time and energy to complete it.
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    Grantly

    Again Quokka mixes in this nicely knit up fast paced story an interesting snippet of life of a young lad and educational locations for the reader to study. Even if the reader is taking just a skimming interest in the places presented in the story using Google Maps and Wikipedia, the sites become intriguing targets for a holiday, or two, or a dream of such holiday. I really like to learn about far away sites I can only dream to visit, it helps me to understand better the people and the culture. The special gift in this story in the Manx, and the usefulness of learning other languages. I feel the story comes to abrupt end. Now that the reader knows the mystery behind the main character it might provide source for continuing adventure in the future. New gang for the Special Forces, perhaps? Five years after;?
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    Terror Again

    This is so fast paced story that it doesn't leave you time to ponder why what when, things just happen. There is exitement, reptile justice, and some military action. Almost all kinds of military vehicles are in action, not submarines, though, but then private hovercraft yes, the noisy thing that is somewhat challenge to steer. If it doesn't trouble you too much that money seems tight at first, then maybe not, just lean back, keep tightly on your hat and enjoy the journey.
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  20. It might be politically unwise for me as a non-citizen comment anything, I just wish there were other countries, too, that might have the means to send their corresponding governmental body to similar exploration, maybe together in co-operation with other countries?
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    Disputed Sea

    Another nice fast paced story, thank you! Life for these guys seem to be ever changing like a weather vane. Meddling with international politics has its dangers, one hotel gets demolished and the guys have to seek shelter and they get unexpected help from another familiar pair. Life is hectic between managing their businesses and the the new station. Will the guys get time to manage their relationship? And if you follow the adventure with google maps, you get another exotic tourist trip in Northern Australia, excellent;) Will there be continuation to this story?
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    Consulate Chapter 6

    Thank you for writing such a nice and fluent story. Is the "King Island" a hint of your next story;?
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    Changing Lanes

    This is not just a story. It has them all: wonderfully scary plot, excellent story telling, thrill, wonderful characters, bomb stealing mercenaries, an erupting volcano, military aeroplanes, guns, grenades, love, marriages, cliffhangers, nukes, politics and rotten politicians.... What else can you wish for?
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  24. What a story! I recommend anyone to read this story, but not the last thing in the evening; it will haunt our dreams. Very powerful script, nice collection of the good and the bad, well, that latter part is really bad collection, evils and more evils. The story takes you to the world of a successful rock band and to the world of people who have not learned to stop killing and bombing others. If you start reading you can't stop until the end.
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    Adam Blake

    After having read this story third time, I'm still baffled of the beauty of the story line: a teacher, who has his own idea of how to make young men learn while having good time and fun, is selected to a remote school for privileged students from different countries and starts a revolution. The teacher fights for his students, and gets their support to fight further. This is a long story, but there is not a dull moment with it, just cry, grin and laugh along the story. Thank you for writing a great novel!
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