James B.
-
Posts
1,785 -
Joined
-
Last visited
Content Type
Forums
Stories
- Stories
- Story Series
- Story Worlds
- Story Collections
- Story Chapters
- Chapter Comments
- Story Reviews
- Story Comments
- Stories Edited
- Stories Beta'd
Blogs
Store
Help
Writing
Gallery
Events
Everything posted by James B.
-
Chapter 32 – Who’s in Charge?
James B. commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 32 – Who’s in Charge?
I can't say this enough, but I Love this family. I wished there were more people like them in the world. -
What we don't get to find out what's in the box. 🤣
-
What a Great Story.
-
What happened to chapter 6?
-
Excellent chapter and very happy for Jon and Ollie.
-
Actually yes it will.
-
In the past I would have been able to help but these days I can barely help myself but I'd sure do what I could even if it's only food.
-
This story captured my interest right away. Great job.
-
Must have blown up before I got here.
-
Chapter 27 – Josh Takes Charge
James B. commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 27 – Josh Takes Charge
I'm so glad everyone had a good time for the Holiday weekend. I gotta say I Love this family and it also started because of Josh and the Love he has for kids. -
That's okay I know it's not easy catching everything. I was just funnin with you. Keep up the good stories.
-
And that is what we presented to my dad and Dr. Diego. Carlos and I stood together waiting to hear what my dad and Dr. Diego would say about the wall. At the start it was Dr. Viego, suddenly I'm reading Dr. Diego. Did someone not proof read or do a spell check? Anywho great chapter to what I see as another good story.
-
This was a wonderful story. For not being a sexual one I am glad I stuck it out and read the whole thing. I also have to agree with you in wishing the whole world could be like Jim and this story.
-
Chapter 26 – TJ Meets Grandpa Josh
James B. commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 26 – TJ Meets Grandpa Josh
Another great chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter. I'm sure Dion, Trey, Brandon and Danny are gonna have a great get away. I'm mostly looking for TJ coming home though. I think he's gonna be spoiled. Not only by the adults but the kids as well. -
Glad to have you back after your month Hiatus. Wonderful chapter.
-
Well this chapter finally got my attention and now I'm drawn to the story.
-
I'm not really sure how I feel about this story. This chapter made me wanna just forget about it. I said I'll give the second chapter a shot if nothing draws me in I'm not gonna go further. All your other stories had me on the first chapter.
-
Uncle Toby, order for us,” and I did. shouldn't that have been Uncle Jeff?
-
I agree, I'm not a counselor or anything like. I myself have experience suicide twice in my life. My nephew who was at the time 30. He left behind two children and his wife as well as the rest of us. That was 8 years ago. I also lost my own son 5 yrs ago. He too left behind a son. In both cases leaving us with unanswered questions as too why. Neither one showed us signs. It's been years and still we wonder. I myself have had thoughts of suicide myself, but I think of my grandson and how he would feel losing me. I don't want him suffering the way I did.
-
Loving this so far, hoping things work out good for Toby.
-
That's okay, it's just I'm not a writer but love to read. I don't get out much. These stories you authors write are my life.
-
You have nothing to be sorry about, it's your story to write. Write it the way you want. I just would like to have had a little info on places they went. I can use my imagination, but when I've never done a cross country trek to cities like they did, I'd just likes little info like did they take in Disney, I imagine when in DC they to in the historical sites. You could make this book as long or short as you like and I'd still follow you. After all I read all your stories here. I Loved them all. I Thank You for those great stories as well.
-
I can't believe I'm gonna say this but I was really disappointed we didn't get to experience the trip with the family. Other than that I did enjoy the chapter.
-
🙏 Going out to him and his family. Wishing him well for a full recovery.
