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James B.

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  1. Great Chapter, thanks for finishing the story. Looking forward to the Epilogue.
  2. James B.

    Embers 17

    Another fantastic story. Thank-You
  3. James B.

    Embers 2

    (The Liston Winery and Liston Family are the intellectual property of Carlos Hazday from his CJ series and are used with his gracious permission. If you haven't read them yet, you really should.) As I was reading this chapter I was wondering if it was them. Then when I read about Owens sisters death. It was nice of you to mention them and Carlos. The CJ verse is great. Of course you stories are too. Loving Embers already.
  4. I'm liking Rusty and Matty's story more and more. Maybe even more than Maddox and Jonathan's.
  5. It's not short time, it's all timers. LOL
  6. I need a reminder of who Owen is? I don't seem to remember him. Never mind (realized it's Ozzie). It's been along time since I heard that name.
  7. Excellent Start to a New Year.
  8. I love this story as much if not more than Jonathan and Maddox. Happy New Year.
  9. Oh, I'd Love to be a little bird watching the kids with Grandma. That could be a story itself. The kids are a riot. I loved this little story. Thank-You Carlos for another fantastic story.
  10. Thank You as well for being a great story writer, and Wishing You a Merry Christmas as well.
  11. Wonderful Story Bill, you brought tears to my eyes. There is just not enough caring anymore. I needed a true happiness story to brighten my Holiday.
  12. Go Rusty, Catch you that Cat Boy.
  13. Oh the next chapter is gonna be a fun one. Rusty catches on, but does Matty come clean? Great chapter, looking forward to the next one.
  14. James B.

    The Accountant

    Again, another great chapter with this superb family. I Love these stories so much. Thank-You for magnificent writing and stories.
  15. James B.

    The Marine

    I've learned a lot of these places in the story from the details you put into it. Also I'm comforted just know one Day CJ is gonna be President and make this Country Great again.
  16. Damn I need a Rusty.
  17. James B.

    The Marine

    God I Love This Family. I can't get enough of them. Great Chapter and Lots of Fun As Well.
  18. Oh, This is gonna be a great one. It's all about Rusty and his Cat Boy. Fantastic start to what I predict to be another fantastic story.
  19. James B.

    Chapter 20

    Excellent ending to a well written story. I'd be wrong if I said I didn't want to see a sequel, because this wasn't about the characters. I agree with you. It is about racism, discrimination and needless sense of death because of ignorance. I have always said that there is always good as well as bad in every race, color and living person. Great Story hope to read more just like this.
  20. James B.

    Epilogue

    Well I was hoping for a wedding and kids and Uncle Rusty to spoil them. Overall excellent story. Looking forward to Rusty's Story.
  21. James B.

    Chapter 19

    This Chapter was truly emotionally sad. I cried reading this chapter the whole chapter. I had to stop a few times to wipe my dry my eyes. I couldn't see the words. I do feel the way Parker does at the balloon launch. I'd be angry as well too. Myles death was senseless, because of discrimination and ignorance. Great chapter however of course I wasn't excited to see the next chapter would be the Final Chapter, but I'll Live.
  22. Actually Drew did have something to do with the video because he put the video on the web for everyone to see. If he hadn't shared it, Conner wouldn't have seen it and shared it with the outcast haters as you put it.
  23. (There's no one like Rusty Parker, am I right? And his story will take place during the senior year, with all its trials and tribulations ) would that be of High School or College? I can say I'm looking forward to a story about Rusty Parker.
  24. James B.

    Chapter 18

    I agree, I'd rather have seen him just hurt but not dead. Not that I wanted to see either happen.
  25. James B.

    Chapter 17

    I too have a bad feeling the next chapter or 2 is not go without out incident. I also Morgan is gonna be the reason too. Hope we're both wrong.
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