James B.

You did a wonderful job with this story. I was even happy to see that you carried Eli & Jamie into it a little. This story was actually in my book the best of the 3. Only because it had the best ending. I'm still not over Jaime's death. It might be a tad bit better if maybe you could have given us a look into the Future of their lives. Like did Riley's dream of him and Carter actually have 3 children. What of the rest of the family. Over all this has to be one of the best stories I've read here. Keep writing.

Damn this was definitely a short story that needs continued. Although I was disappointed with the first story only because there was no gay to it, other than I did enjoy Firestorm. We need more Benning story, we were cheated with Tom's story. (I was actually hoping he turned out to be gay.) May Auntie Rest in Peace.

I have a really bad feeling that what's going in with Robbie's temper, panic attacks has to do with his brain injury from the stairwell. I don't like Don at all, I believe he is a big problem in Robbie's life and if Sue had any common sense and wasn't afraid of Don and threw his ass to the road things would be better for all of them. I believe Sue's one of those women who has to have a man supporting her because she's to terrified to do it on her own. Just my opinion. I believe Nicola and Daniel see how much of an ass Don is they grew up with him so they know how to work him to keep them from being mentally abused like Robbie. Still holding out hope for Robbie and Nathan.

I agree, I'm thinking Tom is gonna come out to Nathan which is only gonna through poor Robbie into more confusion. I'm just hoping that after it all crashes in on him Nathan and Robbie are still together. I truly believe they Love each other and get through it all together. I'm a hopeless romantic and believe in true Love and that Love conquers all.

Warning!! This chapter consists of heterosexual scenes. If you find this offensive you may wanna skip this chapter.

There needs to be some kind of disclaimer saying these chapters are str8t sex. I don't think I can take much more. I'm vomiting in my mouth as it is. Yuck

Yuck, Yuck, Yuck! I can't believe Robbie dicked her. Such a betrayal to all gay men.😣😣😣😣😣😣😣

I've got to agree on these short chapters. They ruin a story for me, but I'm so involve with these stories I gotta deal with it.😕😕

I'm i total agreement with Peter & Jason at the end. Although it's sad to see a young person spend the rest of their life, but he did the crime so do the time, just because of jealousy & hate. I myself think Peter had what Jacob wanted and that was Jason. Nice Job,

You're writing is great and part of crying is the reward I figure for getting caught up with the characters & stories. Thank You

Beautiful Story. Now on with my questions. I know you ended Brett and Billy's story 10 yrs into the future from the story with them getting married in the park by Nate. I'd like to know did Brett and Mom ever reconcile? Did any of them ever have children? I think they'd all make great parents because of their problems growing up. I think George did a great job with Billy, Brett and Dustin. They all respected George and he thought the world of those 3 boys. I only wish Nate could have been able to experience life with George in his. Anyway you left us with Dustin and Nate remaining in the Valley. Where did Brett and Billy finally settle down. What kind of careers did they all end up with the only one for sure we know of is Nate ended up a Minister. Like I said great story, even though I was in tears through most of it. Especially through the growing up part. Made me think of my life. Thanks, again.

I whole heartedly agree, I like to see a reunion story. Here.

Way to go Dustin, you're my hero. Now FUCK with your meat stick. I'm in Love with ya Big Red, by the way please get rid of the gun.

Tell him brother brett, keep my dusty alive.

Poor Brett, my heart goes out to him. I've got to say I've done alot of crying reading these stories, but I just can't put them down, especially living in a small town in Pa. Just like Denora.

Fantastic story! Thank-You

Jen is a shit mother, she expects respect from everyone but yet when her son's not home she calls his boyfriend to her house and demands answers. That's a conversation that all 3 should of had together. Then she threatens Billy's relationship with Brett to keep quite about who Bretts father is. Brett's not gonna have any respect for his mom at all if he ever finds out who is father from anyone but her. Sure he's gonna be pissed but he will eventually get over it if she finally tells him the truth. She made her bed now she needs to lay and be truthful with Brett no matter if it ruins her friendship with Joeys mom or his parents relationship is ruined. After all the truth will set you free. Worse of all now she has put Billy in a difficult situation with Brett. Secret and lies are no good.

I'm thinking Dr. Reilly has found out Brett is gay and Billy is to and forbidding Brett to have anything to do with him. As far as Dustin, I don't think he's being sexually abused of course I could be wrong. His parents may have found out about the park, but I'm truly wanting to believe his parents are literally physically abusing him. I know that's not right either but I'd prefer that over sexual abuse. Yes I too worry about suicide in Dustin's case. Overall I'm truly concerned for Dustin.

I'm finding this book so full of sadness and I'm really worrying about, Brett. I know he took some of Bill's pain pills.

Okay this book was actually better all the way around than the first. Although I still wish Jamie and Matty wouldn't have had to die in the 1st book. I think though it would have been nice to have more Jacob & Stephanie in this book as well. Maybe do a book of Jacob and Stephanie to bring book one to a closer with all characters intertwined and healing after the senseless deaths and the nasty underground.

I'm not liking where this is going. I'd have thought Eli would have stayed away from the underground especially after everything with Jamie.

I so agree with you. There was no need for Jaime's death.

I can't read anymore I had so much hope Jaime was badly injured, not dead. I was truly hoping for a happy ending. Then to find out Matty died too from an apparent suicide. That was the end for me. You did a fantastic job writing the story I will say that, but the ending ruined it for me.

I know it's a little late but I like longer chapter. Loving this story.

I'm not liking where Jamie is headed and he's gonna take Eli, Jacob, and Matty down with him so sad. I was actually hoping he'd finally come to his senses and give up the racing.