Will Hawkins

The confrontation between Heath and the Big Kahuna is going to be one of the highlights of the story I feel.

"No man is a prophet in his own country." King James Version.: Luke 4-24,

Both of our boys are working so hard at avoiding the 'L' word. Somebody will break the dam soon.

Freudian slip: 1. An unintentional error regarded as revealing subconscious feelings. 2. A form of underwear worn by a cross-dresser.

I think Heath needs a personal assistant to help him keep tack of all his appearances and TV programs. Would that not be an excellent job for Aidan, It would get him away from the rat-race in which he finds himself now and give the two guys more time together. He could control the NDAs jest as well from Heath's side as he has even while working for the military martinet. And being watched over by Heath would certainly improv Aidan physically (and I think Heath would be able to make good use of him as well, perhaps in a different aspect of the employment). As a personal assistant, Aidan would have an excuse to associate closely with Heath on a continuing basis and one that would be simple to explain to the tabloids. Let's give him a new job.

Heath is in the process of discovering something that all 'versatile' men know -- Tops may think they are in control of the sex act, but Bottoms know hat it is them who are the leaders. Just by shifting his body a little the Bottom can cause the Top to hit the magic button at every thrust. Much to the satisfaction of MM sex is not apparent until the Top decides to try bottoming- It is then that he discovers why his partner was so willing to place himself in a position that reputedly (and erroneously) is an inferior one. Tops think they know but it is Bottoms that blow.

This chapter has handled the 'deflowering' (what a quaint old fashioned expressi that is) of Aiden in a very beautiful fashion. A combination of an experienced and kind top with a bottom who knows how to relax and really wants to be introduced to MM sex is the ideal combination. All too often, because sex of any kind, but especially MM sex is considered somehow to be so 'dirty' that it is practiced only in the dark of back rooms or alleys by inexperienced or uncaring people, that it leaves a dark shadow on an act that can be a wonderful expression of the love that exists between two men. If the tales of history of the relationship between a youth and an experienced teacher are true, I believe the Greeks had the right idea -- actually assigning a young man to an older one for training. Anal penetration need not be painful or dangerous, after all, by the time a man is of late teen-age, he has shit turds that are probably as large as almost anything that a man carries between his thighs. Caring and lubrication are the keys to a successful anal penetration. Too many times young men get their sex education from gay porno on the net forgetting that these are actors and are well practiced in making anal sex seem exciting,

This story is one of the best arguments for honesty between lovers I have ever seen. We have two men, very much attracted to each other who are keeping themselves apart, not sharing a relationship, because neither one will admit what they really want. Aiden is a 'nearly virgin' and is head over heels in love with Heathcliff, but because he will not confess to that affection, they continue the cat and mouse (or in this case, the wolf and bunny) game and delay for time after time the mutual affection they could enjoy. Oh, I know it is just a delay and soon they will ge together, but all the time they are wasting!

I am enthralled. Reading this story had added a new author to my 'must read list'.I have not encountered a story written by you brogue today, but I certainly will seek out your work in the future. Your characterizations are wonderfully handled (a very important point in my judgement of an author's ability) and whether it be by you or by your editor I have not encountered the grammatical errors that make my reading of some GA authors so painful to an old school teacher like me. You both are doing a splendid job and I will be searching out other stories authored by you to read in the future.

Young lady, nothing you write seems impossible to me any more. My reaction to your story is much like the young puppy who, after a bath and dusting with flea powder, ran out into the road and plopped down to scratch an itch and was left with a hind foot waving in the air as nothing itched any more. He could not find a place to scratch!

In studying recent history I have come to the conclusion that the way to get ahead in the world is to declare war against the US, fight for a couple of years then lose. Just look at Germany and Japan as examples of enemies of the US who lost their wars and at the results of their loss as far as position in the world is concerned. One in Europe and one in Asia, both leaders in the world now. Perhaps China could learn from their example. Apparently we are engaged in a financial war agains China now. If they Chinese take heed of history, they should make sure to lose. If they do I can see them joining Japan in being business leaders for the world. I had hopes that something like this would occur in the recent problems that Hong Kong is having with the central leadership in Chine. True, that current series of demonstrations is not yet over, I can only hope that the people of Hong Kong can keep their momentum going in spite of tear gas and water cannons. At any rate if Stone and Sparks engage in a similar war it would seem to me that whomever loses would end up the winner in that war as well. If I were a wagering man, I would put my money on Sparky. to win.

I guess that os one way to get your V-card punched, but which one is going to be more surprised?

If I remember my mythology correctly, once Pandora's box had been opened, it could never be closed again. Prelude, the application of oil; Act I, a kiss and a hand job; Act II, mouth to mouth resuscitation; Act III... However, one thing that many people forget about the legend of Pandora: true Pandora's curiosity let loose all the ills on mankind, but the last thing that flew out of her box was 'hope'.

It seems to me that the relationship between Aiden and Heath is starting out very much as a cat and mouse affair, the big question is, which one is the cat and which one the mouse. I notice that Aiden got his hands all over Heath in this chapter and all Heathcliff got was a view of Aiden's ass, not that such a view was objectionable. I am looking forward to more of this byplay, Laura, the dialog and characterizations are both handled very well. Congratulations are due also to T. The Wilde man has done an excellent job with the editing. I am sure this series is going to be a fun read.

Declawing cats and debarking dogs are both cruel and unusual punishments and, in addition to being illegal in some states, many vets will refuse to perform the surgery. A pet that is sure of his acceptance and love will quickly learn the family limits, but I will have to admit that dog raising one end of a table to get the food that slides to the floor is a new one to me! Admittedly I live in a very rural area and we have a billy and two nanny goats on the place with as many as two families of kids (2 each) at the same time. The billy is an old sweetie, probably because he gets all the sex he can handle keeping the nannies either expecting or nursing all the time, and the kids are just super cute little guys.

Multiple births are more common in cases of "turkey baster insemination" than in normal insemination (normal, about 3-4%, turkey baster, about 10%), so that information from the ultra-scan was not unexpected. The two fathers learning to take care of twins will be very interesting reading. The hit/run is indeed very suspicious, it makes me wonder if there is some documentation somewhere that will add to our understanding of that situation. This chapter is truly a "wheel of life", you handled the reactions to the ultra sound extremely well, though the strong possibility of multiple births should have been made clear to the "daddies" right from the beginning, the fertility clinic sort of fell down on the job there.

I will have to admit that is about the GAYest color for an automobile I have ever seen.

It has been my understanding that letters to and from jailed prisoners are censored. If I am correct a letter such as that from R. should not have been allowed to be sent. There are threats, both real and covert contained in that letter and it constitutes a violation of a prison communication privilege. That having been said there is someone who is providing an information avenue both into and out of the prison where R. is incarcerated and the prison authorities should investigate and cut that conduit. Communication by a prisoner is a privilege, not a right and should be carefully controlled by the authorities.

In my Bible Christ commands us to 'love one another'. He does not command us to love only those who happen to attend the same church as I do. I cannot understand why, it seems, that the most hateful people (and by that I mean the people most full of intolerance and hate) are those who feel they are the most holy. Religious conservatives harbor the most hate in the world. I know in my heat that intolerance is taught to them from birth, but intolerance is not God's way. I think Casy will be a great addition to the story, but I am sorry to see Grandmother's illness. Cancer is so often one's own body consuming itself. It is truly a sad disease.

There was one thing about which i was confused in this chapter -- I had never heard of a store called 'Wally World', so I resorted to my old standby Google and determined that Wally World is a slang or young person's term for Wall-Mart, so the confusion was probably because of my (extreme) age. I like how the placement process is going, the residual upset will probably fade as all the parties become used to each other. Excellent characterization, guys, I am looking forward to much more reading.

Somehow I believe CPS is just as effective (but not more so) as any other beucratic entity. I am a very retired classroom teacher and I agree that child abuse (including but not limited to sexual abuse) is a very grey area for a teacher. In my case it could have beed even more confusing as, in addition to being in the classroom with 15-17 YO boys, I also had as many as five at a time boarding in my home. And in addition, I am was a deeply closeted gay man. (I did not come out until after I retired from teaching) I made it a hard rule not to touch any of my students or boarders at any point below the shoulders unless they were suffering deeply, then a discrete hug was permissible. That rule stood me in good stead all through my 30 years of classroom experience and there was never any shadow of sexual innuendo about any of my students or boarders. However, it has left me a very lonely man in my old age. Oh, I maintain a low key (email) correspondence with several of my former students, but there is no one to keep me warm at night. To draw the line is hard, but for a gay man, teacher, and landlord, it is necessary.

I m encouraged by the number of comments made on these chapters -- it means that reader interest is continuing to be very high. As far as the newlyweds being kicked off their honeymoon cruise in Australia, I believe that the Australian Defense Forces (Coast Guard) should be alerted and put into full protective mode -- even as accepting as the Aussies are, I don't believe they could put up with that pair, perhaps the judge would be okay, but his new wife -- too much even for the most accepting Aussie! Since the first time I read these chapters, public acceptance of same-sex marriage has improved somewhat, yes, there is a long way to go but progress was being made until the most recent Presidential Election, at that time we made the two steps back that are said to follow the one step forward. May God and the voters help us in November of this year!

Okay, I am going to assume (and you know what that makes me) that I will be reading two versions of events, one written from Kyles viewpoint and the other from Blu's. Each written by a different author. Kyle apparently having been subject of up-tight social climber parents who are disgusted with his selection of a college major, feeling that music even as a teacher is beneath their status, a man deeply in the closet, not perhaps by choice, but forced there by his parents attitude. The other man, Blu, embarrassed by parents who are very aware of his orientation and choose to encourage him (with a lifetime supply of Anal-Ease and rubbers)- I have the feeling that I have read this series before, but at my age (87 next birthday) while I feel in possession of almost all my mental faculties, I do find gaps at intervals. (Like just this week, my partner, who is Portuguese by birth, ask me what was the name in English of the carnival ride that went around a long track with ups and downs and sharp curves, and it took me an hour or so to think of the words 'roller coaster).

The contrast between this coupling and the two women his outstanding and wonderfully handled.

Interesting that Skold is turning out to be a sexual being when he does not have nor has he had the necessary parts to produce the hormones required since he was a child. Perhaps an emasculated man man can achieve a certain degree of pleasure from provided gratification to another man. That is something to think about.