Will Hawkins

The Boy Express may be a good idea. It was tried in my country. It worked but didn't last long. It was replaced by the telegraph wires strung along the railroad right-of-way. Even the telegraph had its faults however. It required experience operators at both ends and relay stations along the way. The Money Express lasted only 19 months before it was replaced by the telegraph and is was not a money making operation even at the rate of $5 per ounce ($138 per oz, into todays $s).

"My BF is a top and he wants to have sex nearly every night. Will having anal penetration by a big dick stretch me out to the point I feel loose to my BF and if I clean myself out too frequently will it injure me?" Okay, two questions and several answers to each one: Physiologists say that a liquid enema (a cleaning out with water or water containing soap) too frequently will short circuit the normal urge to poop caused by pressure in the bowel, that leaves the question, how often is too often... After cleaning yourself out with an enema, wait until you have had one or two normal solid bowel movements before you clean out again. That will keep your normal "I have to go" reflexes in order. If BF wants sex while you are waiting, he can either use a rubber or, some BFs just dive in dirty then shower after. That is up to him, but the answer to your question is: enema no more often than once or twice a month for safety's sake. So, it is the enema to clean out that does the damage. On the other side of the question -- the anus is a muscle and like every other muscle in the body, responds to exercise by becoming stronger. If your BF will either go in dirty or use a rubber, you can have anal sex to your heart's content. Hey, even three or four times a day\night. If, however, you find your hole becoming sore, decrease the frequency severely until it recovers. An inflamed ass hole is ripe for infection. The secret here is communication -- 'not tonight, Baby, my butt is sore. Let's stick to mouth music for a day or so.' if he truly loves you he will be apologetic and want to be kind. just remind him that after you heal\recover, its going to be tighter than it was before!

I would love to read your 'Reality of Sex'. Is it available on line someplace?

Top and Bottom are terms that some people apply to men having sex. Somehow there is an onus connected to the term bottom. It takes on the onus of being an 'effeminate' position. As a man who has had repeated, but not excessive, experience with being both a top and a bottom, let me assure you that being a bottom is not a negative experience. There are nerve endings in the male bowel in the vicinity of the prostate gland that when massaged by an engorged dick, respond very favorably. Even experienced actors in gay porn movies have a difficult time maintaining a pain grimace when such a rubbing occurs -- their expression quickly turns to extreme pleasure, even ecstasy. And rightfully so -- rubbing that spot, called the male G-spot, in the bottom's intestine causes feelings of great pleasure and can even, if continued for a period of time, bring ejaculation to the bottom without him even touching himself

Okay, lets talk about MM sex. No, I am not a physiologist nor a psychologist, but I am an old man who has had some experience in life and, more importantly, I am willing to talk about it. First point, do not believe everything you see on gay porn sites in your computer. Remember, those men are actors and they earn rather significant sums of money with their acting. "But it is too big, you will tear me up putting that thing up my ass!" Yes, there are many different sizes of male equipment. Yes some racial extractions have larger dicks than others, but there is nobody who has a dick too big for a mature man's ass. It may require patience on the part of the top and relaxation on the part of the bottom, but adequate lubrication and willing partners can solve any sex problem. Relaxation, lubrication and patience are the clues here -- you have most likely had a turd larger than that forcing its way out in the past, so just relax and enjoy the feeling of being filled up all the way. Many men would pay to have their ass really stretched. "But I have seen grown men screaming with pain when I watched gay porn on my computer!" First, remember these guys are actors if they can make you think 'he is too big', their income goes up. it is all bull-shit. I will talk about the psychology of the names TOP and BOTTOM next time. Meanwhile, relax and enjoy!

The responses the boys made in this chapter have been spot on, but I will wait until after I read the next chapter to make further comment.

Yes, and Cinderfella is a fairy tale, as I mentioned in my comment on the last chapter. Fairy tales have mad kings, dragons breathing fire; so who cares what happens to the poop from a unicorn, and they have love between men and women, why not between two men as well? Should practicality place limits on an author's creativity? I am somewhat surprised at even the mention of changing diapers in these chapters. Certainly what goes on under the covers in the boy's bedroom will not scar a youngster for life.

Alright, I realize this is a fairy story, but I am a little overwhelmed with: children in schools, reading from bound books even if written by hand and I assume writing on slates with chalk -- swept streets, considering the number of horses there are around -- inside flush toilets -- water in pipes, copper I hope -- street lighting, which implies the availability of a liquid fuel like kerosene or hundreds of candles; all this makes Royal City truly a marvelous place. The magicians must really be busy! lol

But there are so many people in the world who are mean and avaricious. They ruin the good that others do.

I did not realize that there were many different forms of Sign Language. Really there is a different sign language for every different nation -- even Australia and New Zealand use different signs for things than those used in America. Even the hand signs for the characters of the alphabet are different. That is difficult to understand, I had thought that the signs for example 'mother' would be the same in every sign language. Not so. I remember a BF from my teaching days who was pleased to be Catholic because he could go into a Catholic Church in almost any country in the world and speak Latin to the Priest and be understood.

Yes, California boy, you have just the twisted mind that can handle a story line.

Eye witness accounts have held that the human brain is able to function to a small extent for a maximum of perhaps 5 f seconds after decapitation. There were many decapitations by the Japanese during WWII primarily Australian POWs that were witnessed by ranks of Aussies being forced to watch as a means of punishment. Some victims of the guillotine at the time of the French Revolution showed evidence of limited brain activity for a brief period after the blade fell. Even worse, when decapitation is performed by someone who is incompetent or by a means that results in an incomplete severing and a blood supply continues to the brain, it will continue to function until shock sets in. Of course there is no evidence of feeling (pain) after decapitation as the spinal cord is severed in the first instant.

It seems so much like cancer and that disease would be mysterious and totally deadly in this era.

Maternity Leave, Adult Education, Street Lighting, Sanitary System, Fire Protection, all this done with a VAT? Wow, that is going to take some 'creative bookkeeping'. Can it be done? Sure, remember everyone involved here is honest -- now that is a fairy tale.

I have made a resolution (and it isn't even the New Year, as a matter of fact, it is the first week of August, Spring here in Bahia) I am so looking forward to Summer, it seems humorous that a former resident of Washington State where a day in the 60s is considered warm, should be looking forward to weather in the mid-80s, but my old bones really appreciate the warm days coming. I have just started coming out of my cold weather shell as the early morning temperatures break upward, but enough of the weather and my old bones, on to a discussion of the story. Oh, about the non-New-Year's resolution -- I have determined that I am going to be somewhat kinder in my comments. Now I am not putting the Old Troll out to pasture, but just making him a bit less nasty for a while... at least as long as I can keep it up. Cinderfella Part One was a fascinating take-off on the old fairy story, and I enjoyed watching the characters grow (especially the Fairy Godfather, he is a wonderful creation and show the real inventiveness of Eric!) So, in Volume Two, I am just going to sit back and enjoy! Oh, there may be a remark tossed in now and again, I can't keep myself totally under control, but let's just enjoy the tale.

I tried to remove the comment about which you are speaking, but apparently once a comment is posted it cannot be removed. I am sorry to have stepped on your story line, but as an excuse, anything that somebody wants to know about is available on line. The description of faggots, a recipe, even photographs of the dish are there for anyone who wishes the information. I wish I could remove my comment, but it seems to be impossible. My abject apologies.

I wonder if magic can diminish the scarring? I could be a gift to give to the young man.

Well written chapter, good characterization and pacing. I, too am looking forward to the hunt and the ball, we shall have to see what comes up.

Oh, But I am stuffy. I cover it up with a thin veneer of conversational English. When I was writing Engineering Reports I would even avoid ending sentences with prepositions until somebody showed me that was a carry-over from writing in Latin as the verb form in latin changes when there is a sentence with a preposition. I remember a quotation from Winston Churchill about a preposition being a word one should never end a sentence with. Of course he was joking, but I now use some colloquialisms that would cause my old English teacher to roll over in her grave, and I use them without even a twinge of conscience about it!

Some of the denizens of the deep are so ugly, many people avoid them, but I would recommend lobster and shrimp as well as some breeds of fish and eel (which is just a funny shaped fish I am told.) If you can get by the appearance of lobster (it looks like a warped spider) the tail meat is to die for! I recall years ago when I was a party chief on a Survey Crew, walking along a beach, digging up clams and popping them into my mouth, yes, raw. I think there were several of my compatriots who though me insane, but I was only a little bit off in left field, not totally bananas, though raw clams (and oysters) must be swallowed whole, not chewed, in my opinion.

Just for your information I am not a nit-picker because I do not have head lice, and fortunately never have had, though I have lived in areas of the US where head lice, especially among children were endemic. At intervals my schoolmates especially in the lower grades, would show up for classes, with shaven heads and very embarrassed. My mother told me just to ignore these poor youngsters, but it was alright to play with them as, while head lice are easily transmitted from one child to another, a shaven head has had all possibility of cross contamination removed with the removal of the infected hair. So, I am not a nit-picker, just a grumpy old English writer, who is aware of such things as homophones and passive-voiced verbs.

Thank you, my lady. The woman who marries a Prince is probably a Princess. Check with your British readers about those rules, If she is a Princess, she would be address as 'Your Highness.' A couple of paragraphs later you get into the whole thing about Kings, Queens, Prince Consorts, and so forth. A suggestion: get the whole thing sorted out before you step on somebody's toes. I am sure a little chat with a Brit would help here, they are used to Prince Consorts, etc. I have never heard of a King or Queen Consort, however. But then, what is a dumb American supposed to know about royalty. The only word of title we use is with a judge who is addressed as 'Your Honor'. As is a Magistrate I found out just the other day. He\she is also addressed as 'Your Honor', but a King may be addressed as 'Your Majesty' or 'Sire' as the occasion may call for. Are you confused? Well, I am.

while I bath…. ... while I bathe …. 'While I am in the process of taking a bath.' Okay the old troll makes his first appearance and is nipping at the bare toes of the author as he crosses the troll's bridge. Do you want me to make suggestions such as this or not. I can go either way.Get back to me at the end of the next chapter. Just don't start screaming at me and jumping up and down on your computer! It is very hard on the mechanism. Remember,I am older than are you (85) and probably grumpier. But really, I am a nice guy even though some authors consider me to be a nit-picker. Just let me know ASAP. Mister Will

An accepting brother, a chubby little good fairy and, oh my, was it 81 Princes to choose from, what more could a gay prince want. Go for it, percentage-wise there will be several Princes who may be interested, It is not every gay lover who can promise a kingdom to his boyfriend, though there are some who try!

I have been negligent in complimenting both you, Northie, and Parker Owens, in your joint work on this series. As I have mentioned earlier, I am known as somewhat (somewhat -- hah -- that is a gross understatement) of a troll in my picking at authors and editors of GA stories for the errors in grammar that creep into their publications. I am totally pleased with the excellence of the work of the two of you, both with Northie as an author and with Parker as an editor. Your control of English has increased my enjoyment of this series (and the previous book) immensely. Oh... my nit-picking self has detected an occasional error, but in the main and by far, the typical amateurish errors that inexperienced writers make, have been avoided. Congratulations to you both, to Northie for his creativity, pace and characterization, and to Parker for his headache producing corrective work. Your joint efforts have taken this series far above the average.