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Chapter 28 - In A Perfect World
Black Paper commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 28 - In A Perfect World
I ALWAYS told Comicality that Scotty is his best character. He's better than all three of them combined. PSHH! He's potential model material and is all awkward which makes him more approachable and dynamicly appealing. The character development which Com implements on who he is and how he acts and talks is believeable and is super intruiging on a superior level. I don't get that feeling with many characters or even stories for that matter. I like him and his story.💋☕ Forget Jessie. SCOTTY all the way. With... With some ripped jeans and a denim jacket. Maybe a lit cigerrette standing in an alley. Hehehe -
Chapter 28 - In A Perfect World
Black Paper commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 28 - In A Perfect World
I mean...it's cute and all...but Scotty knows that I can actually SEE him, right? I'm, literally standing right there. I'd say this is cute. But, the reality is, this is how I act in real life. I'll "fix myself" and pretend no one sees me as my mind thinks- you saw nothing. 🖖True and sad, Julian. True and sad... -
Required You do not need a crutch. You do not need a clutch. You do not need much. You just need the right touch. You simply need what is required in order to obtain what is desired. You do not always need anything. You do not always need everything. Sometimes, do nothing will bring you something. Plants don't even move. Yet, they continue to grow and improve. Sometimes, staying quiet without the need to riot will bring you even more than e
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Don't know if I ever mentioned it to you, yet. But, this is my number 1 favorite story by you, Com. The descriptions of Tanner that you implement in Derrick's thought monologue to introduce Tanner to us are absolutely, just like his eyes, "Spellbinding". It captures the reader and it captured me two years ago in November when I first read this story. Tanner has a subtle and quiet sensuality to his persona that is so INTRUIGING to imagine.☕🍫🍒
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Tom & Jerry - The Black Cherry
Black Paper commented on Black Paper's story chapter in Tom & Jerry - The Black Cherry
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Time II Time cannot heal if you do not let things go. You will never get anywhere. Your flowers cannot grow. How can your flowers grow and big, if you hurry and worry and start to dig? Yeah, okay. Rush your flowers today and they will die that way. Just calm down. Do not frown. Things will get better. The soil will get wetter. Do not doubt and there will be no drought. Never forget what this said. Never forget what you read. Never forget what "Time" said to you. For, you know it is
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The Gun Of Fun - The Game Of Shame
Black Paper commented on Black Paper's story chapter in The Gun Of Fun - The Game Of Shame
When you gamble you take your chances. ♠️🍷♦️He'll either win or loose. And, that's technically Johnny's fault. He doesn't have to stay. But, Salem is a game that he just can't refuse playing.🃏He's an addiction that he just can't refuse consuming. He already lost his virginity in a way that he never wanted. Nobody forced him. He put 'all he had' on the table & suffered the consequences as a result. "That's what he gets..." as Salem would say for not being smart from the start. And, it's all fair play. What else will he loose? What will he gain? Time will tell. And, I'm not going to lie, I like rolling these dice...🎲 ~Black Paper -
~Addiction II~ This pattern is like the rings of Saturn. It will burn and return and burn you in it's urn. Like a caldron it will cook you as you continue. It burned you with it's fire, Because, it is what you desire. You like it. You hate it. You drank it. You ate it. You could not stop it. You could not drop it. It shook you & took you. Like an earthquake it shattered all that mattered. You already knew. You already know. It always gets you as you scream & shout- "NoOO
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Tom & Jerry - The Black Cherry
Black Paper commented on Black Paper's story chapter in Tom & Jerry - The Black Cherry
Oh yeeeah. Well. The second song posted, I have personally learned myself when I was a kid, as my older sister was a music student in high school and played it at a concert. As such, it was always played at our house by her since I was 7 years old and inspired me to learn. Maple Leaf Rag I have yet to learn and master. And yes, Hungarian rhapsody I DID play in my 8th grade talent show. Only, that show was no where near as nice as "You Are A Star". It was a normal talent show program thrown together by our private middle school. Yes, I went to private school all my life. 😑 Lord, those uniforms would gag me the same that Johnny's button up shirt that was too tight around his neck. I remember coming home & would just rip my clothes off in order to 'free myself' and would want to role around on the grass in the jungle and just enjoy the freedom from their restricting & tight fabric. Hehe! -
Tom & Jerry - The Black Cherry
Black Paper commented on Black Paper's story chapter in Tom & Jerry - The Black Cherry
My birthday is coming in September. I'm actually putting the cheesecake together, myself. (In my opinion, being French, cheesecake isn't cake. It's a PIE or a tart. What a LIAR.🍒😛. But, I suppose "cheesepie" doesn't sound so good. I buy a NY strip, buy some Ameretto liquor, sugar, black cherry juice(fresh if you can) and cook it down. Drizzle on top of each slice, top each with a fresh black cherry, Perfect. And, thank you so very much. -
Tom & Jerry - The Black Cherry
Black Paper commented on Black Paper's story chapter in Tom & Jerry - The Black Cherry
You're exactly like me. I prefer pure Vanilla as well. Us Virgos don't always enjoy extra things interfering with the pure essence of whatever it is that we are trying to enjoy in order to fully appreciate it in it's original & perfected form. At least, that's how it is with me, anyway. You'll never even see me eating a sandwich. I prefer a nice salad so that I can fully enjoy every ingredient all on its own. Page S, Your words are always a sweet delight. 🍒☕ -
Tom & Jerry - The Black Cherry
Black Paper commented on Black Paper's story chapter in Tom & Jerry - The Black Cherry
If you would like to hear the renditions of the two songs that Salem performs in Johnny's high school talent show, here are both links to the exact pieces of music described that he is playing in order from the first to the second: -
Chapter 9- ~Tom & Jerry - The Black Cherry~ *cough cough* Being around Salem when he smoked a cigarette was a new and slightly unpleasant experience for me to be honest. As we were walking past the little bodega shop which was deemed as the town's mini mart with a small liquor store inside that many locals & teenagers used in order to purchase their little pick me ups throughout the course of the day, I side glanced my new 'boyfriend' take a puff of his Marlboro menthol
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I'd give this a Rainbow reaction, but, GA doesn't have one. So- 🌈
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This story is one of my favorites to be honest. Com just...💗 Here is your cherry pie. 🍒I made it. Enjoy it. 😘There's something sexy about a cherry pie & in this case it's appropriate.
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I am glad you, or anyone for that matter, are enjoying the story & the morals that I am trying to portray inside of its plot. It means a lot to me that I get any type of positive feedback & criticism is more than welcome. Cheers. Have an incredible night.🍷
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Chapter 8- ~Spies With Eyes~ Walking around school for the passed month since Salem and I had last been at my house was by no means, a relaxing experience to be honest. A month was enough time to ensure me that no serious words had been spread about us being caught by that group of kids when Salem was caressing my face. Yet, I didn't buy it. Sorry. But, I'm no idiot. I know those kids were talking. I can practically hear it in my mind. I heard the echoes & whispers circle aroun
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So I just realized, in my story, they kinda meet similar to Deme and his Boyfriend. Well, I mean, not EXACTLY. But, they DO meet in a restaurant. That's so Interesting! And I LOVE that you make Deme cook and that it was bad. It makes me smile and idk why. Oh, I know. It's because Com Always makes me smile. Hehehe.😗🍒 Reading the first few sentences of this chapter, I had a huge smile across my lips when he was like "Omg, eww. I hope his cooking isn't disgusting again."
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The Warrior II The Warrior is not a worrier. He is a carrier with a barrier. She has a shield and sword. He has already explored. The truth is, Their youth is, Inside hers or his, Heart from the start, So, they will not be torn apart. Inside of their chest lays their very best. It is not the strength of their right hand, That allows them to conquer or save each land. It is their heart's power which brings them strength at every hour. It is beating and feeding their muscles as th
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Prison The Chain Of Pain. The Box Of Locks. The Cage Of Rage. Each person in a prison can be locked inside. Each prison has a person that Is blocked by each side. Hold them. Scold them. Mold them. Told them. They said they were stuck & locked in here. These bars hold them from all of their cheer. What else can be said? Nothing much right now. Can they live a different life instead? This Book will tell you later, How to get out, somehow...
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Depression You feel depressed. You are not impressed. You feel compressed. And, you are stressed. You are faced with all that you detest, And, makes you feel that you are failing your test. Maybe, a blessed nest will make you heal and make you feel that you are at your best. But, being dressed in these clothes and thinking these thoughts makes you obsessed with what life has processed and compressed inside of each side of your mind and it's unkind. So... Where can you go? What can y
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And, the almighty power of self love. True Self Love, in my opinion, & knowing you are worth it & are the best is the only road to Success. By knowing you are the best, it motivates you to be & to always perform your very best.
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~Earth~ Good & bad. Happy & sad. Up, down, left, and right. Half Day. Half night. Half Dark. Half light. Half Dim. Half bright. Half wrong. Half right. This world is curled. This round ground has rules that are around. It has laws. It has flaws. It is half ugly & half pretty. Half crying and half laughter. Before & after. It is half perfect and half wrong. You hear this song. But, you knew it all along. Everything here in this atmosphere on this sphere, Is h
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This particular one, ...your soul knows what it is talking about. And, thank you.🎆
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Be quiet! Just kidding. Thank you.🔮Your words mean much to me. Constructive criticism is always welcome as well. Please feel free to express any thoughts you may have. I welcome it all.
