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Mancunian

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  1. This telling of a sad course of events was beautifully and sympathetically written. It caused goosebumps all over and brought a tear to my eye. This shows you are a wordsmith with skill and have fittingly captured the atmosphere. This is as relevant today as the day it was written and should be showcased.
  2. It's fun, not to mention a good experience, to read more of your earlier works. The comments and reviews are earned and well deserved. You should be proud of what you have written and how you have developed your writing craft over the years.
  3. Yep, it's typical British summer, lol.
  4. A bit of warmth would be good over here, we are experiencing lots of rain and cool temperatures.
  5. Aloha my friend, how are things with you?
  6. How about Spew.
  7. This is a real feel-good, heart-warming story of love. Two men with broken hearts and trust issues from previous relationships meet, what starts as slow smouldering feelings quickly develop and become a raging fire of love and lust in the right amounts. This is one to read and enjoy in one sitting, trust me you will enjoy it, although you will be left wanting more, such is the writing skill of @Headstall.
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  8. This is a great ending to this part of Arron and Chet's story. I'm hoping there is a continuation in another story, these guys deserve to have more. Thank you for an excellent feel-good story, I love it.
  9. Another beautifully written chapter that leaves me feeling all warm and fuzzy. I do feel a little envious but in a healthy way.
  10. You nailed the excitement of the night brilliantly, I almost felt like I was a voyeur.
  11. Phew, now I feel better. Ian may have been there and caused problems, but Dwayne is still in Arron's head, both Ian and Dwayne need to be banished so these guys can get on with building a good settled relationship. Love is love and nothing should get in its way.
  12. And there it is, Ian reared his ugly head and ruined things for Chet. Yes, I know you described Ian as looking beautiful but beauty is more than skin-deep, Ian knew exactly what he was doing when Chet walked in with Arron. Okay, he wasn't expecting Arron but it played well for Ian because now Chet is distraught and he will try to use that. I hope Chet can get rid of Ian and rekindle things with Arron, they sound like they will make a great couple.
  13. These guys are building something good and I hope it works out. But I'm still concerned about what Ian may have planned after the previous chapter.
  14. It's obvious that Ian is trouble, big trouble and my guess is he isn't finished. Now I'm waiting to find out what trouble he is going to cause, or already has caused, between Chet and Arron.
  15. You old romantic, that was the perfect date night that we all dream about, well I do anyway. I love this chapter, it's beautifully written.
  16. You tease @Headstall, I thought you were about to pull the plug on these guys before they got a chance. But okay I'll forgive you it was just a misunderstanding about which restaurant. I guess it's easy to miss-hear when you're lost looking into a pair of sexy eyes.
  17. That's some strong vibes coming from Chet and Officer Arron, they are almost feelable. The vibes I mean, not Chet and Officer Arron, well maybe they are too. 🙄 I guess I'll find out in the next chapter or two.
  18. Thank you for bringing this to our attention, many of us really appreciate it. Thanks to you making us aware the fund has received an uplift and I sincerely hope it reaches the target amount. As you can see from previous posts love and respect for Comsie has attracted a positive response.
  19. For those who haven't checked out @Comicality's own website, you can by following this link. It is currently still running and being maintained by his supporters there. https://shackoutback.net/?t=ENW4jjAe
  20. You can add another donation to the total. It is getting closer to the total and I hope it is achieved, but it still has a long way to go. N.B. For anyone who is sceptical, I have checked this out and I am happy to say, I believe it is genuine.
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  22. You are more than welcome my friend, it's a pleasure.
  23. What I do need to do, is go back and read more of your older stories. That could be a good idea for everyone else to do too.
  24. My review is there from when I previously read it. But what I have done is go back to it and leave a recommendation which had not done before. Can I suggest to our friends that even if they have read and reviewed they can do as I have done, go back and leave a recommendation if they haven't already. Recommendations also bring stories to everyone's attention.
  25. Aloha my friend, I hope all is well with you and Steve.
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