This struck many chords with me, no I've never cheated on anyone but I have been cheated on. The words capture an underlying love but speak of the regret, consequences and loss of unwise actions. It's a lesson for those who may contemplate taking such a risk as many of us cannot get past such actions. It hurts and leaves a mark that can never be erased.
This telling of a sad course of events was beautifully and sympathetically written. It caused goosebumps all over and brought a tear to my eye. This shows you are a wordsmith with skill and have fittingly captured the atmosphere. This is as relevant today as the day it was written and should be showcased.
It's fun, not to mention a good experience, to read more of your earlier works. The comments and reviews are earned and well deserved. You should be proud of what you have written and how you have developed your writing craft over the years.
This is a real feel-good, heart-warming story of love. Two men with broken hearts and trust issues from previous relationships meet, what starts as slow smouldering feelings quickly develop and become a raging fire of love and lust in the right amounts. This is one to read and enjoy in one sitting, trust me you will enjoy it, although you will be left wanting more, such is the writing skill of @Headstall.
This is a great ending to this part of Arron and Chet's story. I'm hoping there is a continuation in another story, these guys deserve to have more. Thank you for an excellent feel-good story, I love it.
Phew, now I feel better. Ian may have been there and caused problems, but Dwayne is still in Arron's head, both Ian and Dwayne need to be banished so these guys can get on with building a good settled relationship. Love is love and nothing should get in its way.
And there it is, Ian reared his ugly head and ruined things for Chet. Yes, I know you described Ian as looking beautiful but beauty is more than skin-deep, Ian knew exactly what he was doing when Chet walked in with Arron. Okay, he wasn't expecting Arron but it played well for Ian because now Chet is distraught and he will try to use that. I hope Chet can get rid of Ian and rekindle things with Arron, they sound like they will make a great couple.
It's obvious that Ian is trouble, big trouble and my guess is he isn't finished. Now I'm waiting to find out what trouble he is going to cause, or already has caused, between Chet and Arron.
You tease @Headstall, I thought you were about to pull the plug on these guys before they got a chance. But okay I'll forgive you it was just a misunderstanding about which restaurant. I guess it's easy to miss-hear when you're lost looking into a pair of sexy eyes.
That's some strong vibes coming from Chet and Officer Arron, they are almost feelable. The vibes I mean, not Chet and Officer Arron, well maybe they are too. 🙄 I guess I'll find out in the next chapter or two.
Thank you for bringing this to our attention, many of us really appreciate it. Thanks to you making us aware the fund has received an uplift and I sincerely hope it reaches the target amount. As you can see from previous posts love and respect for Comsie has attracted a positive response.
For those who haven't checked out @Comicality's own website, you can by following this link. It is currently still running and being maintained by his supporters there.
https://shackoutback.net/?t=ENW4jjAe
You can add another donation to the total. It is getting closer to the total and I hope it is achieved, but it still has a long way to go.
N.B. For anyone who is sceptical, I have checked this out and I am happy to say, I believe it is genuine.