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Marty

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  1. G'nite, all...
  2. What dugh said.
  3. Marty

    Chapter 1

    I'm happy you found the characters different in each snippet. Even if you found it strange, I actually made an effort to have them all be different people. The risk to me was writing them same guys in each scene. Though I will think about if this makes the story too disjointed and if I could have done something differently to avoid this. The light-hearted was because I felt it was a bit silly with the cliché dream scenarios. And of course I always knew Devon and Fabian had nothing to worry about as regards their relationship. Now that I read the comments, it's clear people took Devon's troubles more seriously than I thought. So thank you for pointing that out. And for commenting! I always try to make a point of not reading anybody else's comments when I comment on a story. That way, I hope my comments won't be coloured, or influenced, by what others have written. I did guess, after reading some of the other comments, that the different characters were almost certainly scenarios (or daydreams, as @JeffreyL suggested) that Devon was making up in his head. I'm not sure @Puppilull, but maybe had you put them in italics, or indented dream sequences, it may have made them more obviously so. (Or maybe I was just slow on the uptake... )
  4. Nothingness !!! ??? How dare you , young man!
  5. It was just the first picture I could quickly come up with...
  6. I'd be more worried if his nose was warm.
  7. Nah, not me. I'm a confirmed pacifist.
  8. Mwwwhwwwhooohaaaa!
  9. Hey, Gary! Hope all goes well. (Both for you and young Albert)
  10. Albert! How the hell are ye?
  11. How's yourself, Page?
  12. Hey yourself, Bobster!
  13. All this talk of hurt means that I'm now going to have the following song as an ear-worm in my head for the rest of the day:
  14. Well let's just hope the massage give you some much needed relief... (...from the migraine.)
  15. Hi, Gary! How's the arm/shoulder today?
  16. Albert! Hope you're feeling a bit better with the new day.
  17. Almost 2:30am here... Guess I better stop trying to write Chapter 4 of Fragments of Sean, and get some beauty sleep. Good night, gang!
  18. I got you, Bob
  19. Question: How do you confuse an Irishman? P.s: I'm allowed. I'm Irish. 😛
  20. Hey Drewdrop.
  21. And, of course, we mustn't forget the Rod Stewart version... So similar to the Bob Dylan original that Rod even agreed to share the royalties with Bob. And a great video to it as well. Especially if, like me, you find it hard to resist cute young kids.
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