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  1. Wayne Gray

    Choice

    Wayne Gray posted new chapter in Wayne's Poems

    How is it that I feel so much, when all I sought was fun? Why does this seem like something real, like something I have won? Why does your name fall from my lips, with reverence in my voice? What have you done to me, my boy, you took away my choice. To love is not a choice.
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    Chapter 2

    Wayne Gray commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Maybe it is a bit soon. The going estimate I see most often is that we need a month to mourn for every year we spent with someone we lose. Of course, there's a lot of variety there, too. Regardless, I bet Lonnie could use a friend at the very least. If things turn into more than that ... well, that's just gravy.
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    Chapter 2

    Wayne Gray commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Awww. Lonnie is on his journey. There will be bumps and even a little crash or two along the way, but he's moving forward. Keve could be good for him. Hell, they could be good for each other. One way to find out. Ask the man, Lonnie! Nice chapter, tim. I understand how hard it is to move on, and Lonnie is still somewhere in the middle of that. I am interested to watch his journey.
  4. Wayne Gray
    You are not wrong. That Xan is one of the best knights in the kingdom was just icing on a delicious cake. 😏
  5. Wayne Gray
    Thank you for reading and commenting. This one, in particular, I am proud of. 🙂
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    Loss and Hope

    Wayne Gray commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Loss and Hope

    I'm glad you made it through it. This was the roughest chapter I've ever written in any story. Though it's critical to what comes next. Thanks for reading and for the comment.
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    Changes

    Wayne Gray commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Changes

    I'm glad you're still reading. Yeah, it is getting sad. But as I've said to others, it's not about what looks to be an upcoming loss. It's about what is left behind. You're right about our three guys leaning on one another. They're lucky, all of them, to have found what they did. It will make the coming weeks bearable - not easy, but bearable.
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    Chapter 1

    Wayne Gray commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Oh, man. Lonnie is so wounded, and you write him so well. What do we do when someone we love is just ... gone? How do we think about moving on without guilt? Lonnie knows Leo would want him to do exactly that, but honoring our love and moving on sometimes feels at odds. And no matter what we tell ourselves, the guilt can still suffocate us. That's what I see in Lonnie. He's trying to hang on, and let go, and move on, all at once. I've been there. Anyone who has lost something precious has. Nice job, friend. xoxo.
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    Thank you, Mike. That's a great compliment considering the man delivering it. And the dynamic is really fun. It engages me in a unique way. The man with the authority ... asking. Pleading, almost. For permission to command. Yeah. I like it.
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    Gotta admit, it's a seductive thing for me too. I love the idea, you know? Love superseding duty is such a draw. And that dynamic is fun. Thanks for reading and for the comment. It's great.
  11. Wayne Gray

    Awakening

    Wayne Gray commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Awakening

    Great to hear you're enjoying it. I know it took a bit to ramp up, so I'm glad you stuck with it. There's more ahead!
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    Time

    Wayne Gray commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Time

    Weird ... double post.
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    Time

    Wayne Gray commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Time

    You’re welcome. Thanks for reading. And no. Chris and Miranda largely got along well until Chris left Tad. That made things even harder for her - she lost someone she liked, and she’s dealing with the diagnosis for her brother. Its a hard time, all around.
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    LOL. Well, I'm glad you enjoyed it. As I said above, the dynamic is very fun. Thanks for the read and comment!
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    Uh-huh! I have too many projects that have languished to add another. But yes - this dynamic is pretty fun to play with.
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    Thank you, tim! 🙂
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    I actually think I should have called it "A Knight and His Prince." Because in my mind, Prince Candir didn't anticipate more than a bit of fun with his sexy bodyguard. But he finds himself falling deeper than he'd planned.
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    An Ember Burns

    Wayne Gray commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in An Ember Burns

    It's great to hear you enjoyed this one. I think it's one of my best. Though Fleeting Eternity rates high on my own personal meter as well. And since you seem to like emotion, I do think you'll like it. Thanks for reading and for the comments. I appreciate them!
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    Thank you. It was fun to write!
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    "I … your majesty. I cannot." The prince stood so close that his body heat made Xan break out in goosebumps. "We cannot." Prince Candir wet his lips and leaned even closer. "Oh, I assure you. We certainly could." He let his clear, blue eyes roam over the rugged face of his personal guard. He smirked. "Of course, if you tell me you're not interested, then I'll restrain myself." One nearly-perfect hand rose to lightly dance along his quivering guard's jawline. "But don't lie to me. I've seen
  21. Wayne Gray

    Revelation

    Wayne Gray commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Revelation

    Thanks! I think the journal reveal went as it should have, considering the characters involved. But I'm glad you approve. Oh, mother. Just you wait. LOL 😛 Beth? Hrm. Well, currently she doesn't even know Troy's alive. But ... maybe if that changed?
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    Regrowth

    Wayne Gray commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Regrowth

    So suspicious! Good. 😝
  23. Wayne Gray

    Guarded

    Wayne Gray commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Guarded

    It's an emotional situation. I think you'll like the next chapter, though. 🙂
  24. Wayne Gray

    Home

    Wayne Gray commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Home

    You're welcome. Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. If you like romance, Ash and Ember would likely appeal to you. It's a very slow burn, but once the fire starts, it goes pretty hot.
  25. Wayne Gray

    Trust

    Wayne Gray commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Trust

    I use a weird technique with dialogue. Every line, I speak aloud. I do that to test how it sounds. Is it natural? Does the dialogue flow as easily as a conversation would? It helps me write realistic dialogue, even if my husband glances at me as I mumble away. Lol
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