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Wayne Gray

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  1. Haha. Disaster after disaster! Well, this one is a bit more subtle, but not to Taggert. For a quiet chapter, there's a lot to process here. Mostly for Taggert, but for all of the guys, too. And there's more coming. Thanks for reading and commenting.
  2. Sneaky is okay if it's something fun. That's the rule. 😛 And yes. This is a slow burner, for sure. But we're watching them circle closer every chapter. And that's fun, at least it is for me. You've nailed it with the comment about them not caring who loves who. They're watching Eric and Dale kid with each other about spooning and sleeping together. They're watching Ash and Taggert do this little, careful dance with one another. And Rupert is a sort of bellwether. "Yeah, we see you. And we don't care." He's a pain in the ass, but he's genuinely doing them a favor. That "Maybe later." conversation is coming. And... it's a big one. Just be patient - it may take a bit to get to it, but we will. And you can probably guess that Bert is going to have a conversation about their new cowboy with Branford. I mean, Branford hired the guy. So... Thanks for reading and for the great comment. There's more to come. I'll go back to my five-day schedule, so the next one will drop on Friday. See you then.
  3. You're welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed it. This was a fun one to write. This slow, careful, unwinding of Taggert's defenses. Though he runs face-first into Bert. And now, he's feeling that old fear again. Even with that, he didn't fully retreat from Ash there at the end. So maybe the progress he has made hasn't been undone. We'll see next time.
  4. Rupert is actually doing something important. I mean, he's not really meaning to, but he is.
  5. You've found some good passages to quote, made good observations, and asked some great questions. Keep hold of all of that as we move forward. Thanks for the insightful comments. Nicely done.
  6. I published this one a day early. I hope folks enjoy it.
  7. Chapter 9: What Horses Know The ranch woke slowly the next morning. Not because there wasn’t work to do; there was always work to do. Especially now. But exhaustion still lingered in everybody’s bones from the storm. Men migrated toward the kitchen in stages instead of all at once. Boots thumped more heavily than usual. Coffee disappeared almost as fast as Terry poured it. Outside, the world was battered but alive. The sun had finally returned properly, pale gold spilling acr
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    Aftermath

  9. Wayne Gray

    Shelter

    Haha. That pretty much sums it up. Thanks for reading, tim!
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    Shelter

    "Too hot." That's what it is.
  11. Thanks for reading, tim!
  12. Wayne Gray

    Shelter

    Glad you liked it. If the roof had been torn off, the suction of the tornado would have pulled everything inside up into the funnel. Including our guys. The force of wind and all of the debris would have killed them in moments. So… good call on replacing that rail! Thanks for reading and for the comment. 🙂
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    Aftermath

    Taggert is trying to claw back the original boundaries, but Ash isn't letting him do it. Not now. Not after that kiss. So now, they've got to find a new equilibrium of some kind. And we're watching that now. What do they look like after such an event? And of course, will Ash really be satisfied with something less than open honesty? And will Taggert keep being able to maintain distance? We'll find out. Thanks for the comment and for reading. More coming!
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    Aftermath

    Great way to put how Taggert has so far approached life at Nasser Ranch, and how he is beginning to doubt that approach is required. I think you'll like watching Taggert's progression. And... some of the other guys' journeys, too. Thanks for commenting and reading. There's more coming on Monday.
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    Aftermath

    Oh, it's not a week. It's only five days. I'm mean, but not THAT bad! Yeah. Taggert woke to find that he'd been taken care of by Ash. And he doesn't quite know how to hold that. A guy like him, who wonders at motivation, who questions everything, he can't find a reason why Ash would do that. Other than the fact that Ash cares. And Taggert is having a hard time processing that. Then, seeing the examples around him of men simply being who they are, that's really making him question things, too. And he's likely better for it. Taggert is in rough shape emotionally. We can see that. So can Ash. Up until now, Ash has been pretty patient with him. He did have a bit of a moment, cornering Taggert (Do you regret it?), but he was likely owed. I mean, the man kissed him. Ash deserves a little something after that. Thanks for reading, Dave. More to come. In LESS than a week!
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    Aftermath

    Damn it, I had replied to Cane! I knew I did!
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    Aftermath

    I thought for sure I'd already replied to this, but I guess not. Let's try again... LOL. Okay, that's a funny way to put it, but you're not wrong. And yes, Taggert has put up a huge wall around both his heart and, more importantly, his trust. It takes repeated examples for him to trust. You're right, though. The place he finds himself isn't threatening, and he's not sure what to do with that. Sadly, he wasn't prepared for decency. For being treated like a human being. And he's getting that, not just from Ash, but from them all. Thanks for the comment. More coming on Monday.
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    Aftermath

    So... I never specifically call this out, but Cara and Terry are a pair. Which... explains some of his behavior in chapter seven when Cara volunteered to drive out to open the gate that'd been missed. It becomes a bit more apparent over time, but yeah. Cara is married to their cranky cook. So they snuggled up on their own mattress along with the guys. They were cold because they'd been wet from rain and wet clothes all day. It seeps into your body and bones, and it takes a while for the body to warm up again. It wasn't too cold in the building itself, but they were chilled nonetheless. You're not thick. You're just watching a story unfold chapter by chapter. Maybe you're right about Taggert. We'll see. Thanks for reading and for the comments. More to come.
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    Aftermath

    The way Taggert behaves reminds a person of a creature that has been mistreated. I think you got that right, just from what we can say now, and based on what we've seen. Nicely put. And you're right about that clean-up. Without a visual inspection, they won't know which fences need repairing or if there are injured animals out in the fields. They've already put in a lot of work focusing on animals and fencing, but there's a lot more to go. They do get to take a break now, a little one, since they've determined the animals are all right. And they can certainly use a break, and Branford knows it. It's part of why he's such a good man to have in charge. He knows their capabilities and their limits. Yes. Ash just wants some communication. To Taggert, it may feel like pressure, and I guess it is of a sort. But... Ash doesn't seem to be asking much. We'll have to see if Taggert can meet him half-way. And that's coming. Thanks for commenting and for the read. I appreciate it.
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    Aftermath

    Haha. That's a great way to put it. Love that. Taggert has absolutely thrown up walls around his heart and his trust. Something has taught him that giving either away is dangerous, and those walls, while cracking, are still there. But you're right. He keeps looking for danger, and he's not finding any. That's disarming. He has a way to go, but he's slowly getting there. Thanks for commenting and reading. Hopefully I'll see you here again on Monday.
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    Aftermath

    Thanks, Chris. Taggert does have a past, and we're watching the fallout from that now. Will he be able to get over it? We'll have to see. The ranch did survive. We'll get a look at the damage soon, but yes, it does appear they survived relatively well thanks to all their preparation. More to come soon.
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    Aftermath

    Thank you! It’s great that you took the time to comment on the work - I appreciate that. I hope you continue to enjoy the story!
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    Aftermath

    Yes. Taggert’s past emerges once more to hinder connection in his present. But Ash’s steady, consistent presence does a lot to disarm at least some of that vigilance. And it’s likely Taggert would be better for it, if he could allow Ash into his life. Thanks for the great comment. And thanks for reading.
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    Aftermath

    I’ve been there too. Trapped in a few rooms with hurricane lanterns, an emergency radio, a few board games, and family/friends, all trying to pass the time while the world rages around us. And yeah. Ash is beginning to realize some things while Taggert has already figured out some stuff he doesn’t necessarily want to know. A slow awakening at war with denial. It’s a fun dynamic. 😀 You’re right about Taggert and those lasting wounds. They’re on display here as he struggles to even understand how Ash could want him. What can he offer Ash? What could he offer anyone? He may not ask the questions but they underpin a lot of what he does. Thanks for reading and commenting. The guys will return on Monday.
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    Aftermath

    He was also quite literally exhausted. And walls tend to wobble when a person can’t think straight. But even after his nap, Taggert is obviously wanting connection. He hates that he wants it, but he does. We’ll have to see if he allows himself that or not. Thanks for commenting and reading.
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