Ticklishboy30
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Beauty, breathtakingly indescribable.
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@kbois, are you able to see auras? The way you describe the colors and meanings feel like you're writing from first hand knowledge.
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Wow! Just, Wow. I'm already in love with this family.
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OXYGEN! My kingdom for some oxygen. @kbois, this chapter had me breathless and shedding tears at how beautiful and strong these guys are. The picture you gave birth to from the abuse to the way Ian so eloquently bared his soul, was exquisitely heartwrenching and loving.
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OMG!!! Ian is way too adorable. I loved the idea of the game too get to know each other. Holy mountain of a cliff hanger, @kbois.
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Wow! The high security clearance ads a whole new level of intrigue to Lex. Ian is all class and a total gentleman, I really hope these two can get over the painful awkwardness and set about becoming boyfriends. Once again, @kboisyou've kept my attention, I have ADHD, and am on medication for it. Thats why I'm always mentioning my attention, it's hard for me to stay with a chapter of I get bored with it. You're truly an amazingly ghosted writer.
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LOL The nick names for the homeowners had me giggling like crazy. I loved Prince Pathetic. @kboisthank you for the time you put into this story. The more I read, the more I love Lex, Ian, and the supporting characters who live in the town.
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I don't remember if we ever ate there while visiting. I remember the mall, and there was a little ice cream shop on the street Uncle George's house was on that Mom and I used to bundle up and walk to, I think it was a Friendly's. I just turned 45, so some of my memories are misty and watercolored. LOL
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My Dad is from Holyoke, so it was awesome to see a place I've been from the time I was adopted at one and a half til I was 13. I loved the house my two uncles, aunt and grandparents lived in up north. I'm not one for really slow chapters, but @kbois you've engaged to keep my attention. I loved meeting Cassie, such an interesting character, and the nicknames of Nemo and Dory were just too adorable.
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Interesting chapter. I love the interaction between Lex, Casey, and Ian, and learning some of Lex's history. It's so heartwarming to see Ian being so protective and loving towards Lex.
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Holy nail biters, @chris191070. This as totally intense. I could feel Coop's and Pete's emotions. Fuck, the rape scene gave me slight chills. I mean, the demonic and sadistic nature of whatever it is thats possessed Pete was amazingly described and flowed from the screen.
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I'm totally hooked. Ian is absolutely intriguing, and his level of caring is beautiful. Obviously, something's sparked between Lex and Ian, I hope it's something that lasts and can help Lex heal from his past trauma. Another amazingly descriptive chapter, @kboisand the characters have great emotional depth. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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I self edit my stories also. I write using grammarly, so I know all about seeing mistakes and not having time to fix them. Lex seems very fun so far. I'm looking forward to getting to know him.
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This is an extremely intriguing start. Can't wait to read more. @kboisyou're an extremely talented writer with impressive descriptive powers. The characters, town, and vehicles you've described came to life in my imagination. Thank you for taking so much time to create this world.
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Nice edge of your seat writing, @chris191070. The emotions of your characters flow from the screen and take hold of your reader.
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Excellent!!!
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If you are looking for an incredible, beautifully descriptive story, look no further. Never Walk Alone has everything to satisfy any reader's hunger. Thank you @Andre Delport for taking the time necessary to craft the product of your imagination.
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I can't help thinking, with all the food they eat, I hope their metabolisms are high. LOL
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This is a beautifully crafted story that will leave you wanting to know more about the sweet adventures of the Kelly Brothers and their family. @chris191070 you've created a confectionary masterpiece with this story, thank you.
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@Andre Delport, you are amazing. The brilliance and ambiance of The Cameron is breathtaking. I'm speechless over the meticulous planning and decor that went into the project.
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It's no wonder Dan and Joan fell in love with Ryan and Andrew. Professionally, the couples are very much a like, they make sure their guests have the best service, and most luxurious environment possible. Add to that the two couples are easy going but not so much so that they forget about their professionalism.
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It'll be interesting to see what's off putting about Clint. This just keeps getting better.
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Gorgeous setting.
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The story gets better and better. I loved the excitement, it added a bit of spice to the chapter.
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The love Andrew and Ryan have for their kids is indescribable. The more I read, the more fulfilled my heart feels.
