Ticklishboy30
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This chapter was made for a tears of joy reaction.
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Again, exquisitely written, @Andre Delport. I loved the additional stones on the wedding bands, and the final scene with the news report was heart-wrenching, as well as beautifully heartwarming.
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They really need to expand their reactions. The options need to include tears of joy and breathlessness. That's what this chapter was filled with.
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@AquariusGuy I LOVE this first chapter. You've done an incredible job of giving life, depth, and emotional range to your characters. Already, the love and energy you put into writing pours from the words written.
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Indescribably well written, emotionally charged, and simply the perfect chapter.
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Essentially, if I get an idea in my head, I'll start writing. For instance, my story, "Love Of Family" was written because I wanted to come up with a nickname that a younger sibling would call his older sibling who'd been a parental figure to him. As I was feeding our cockatiels, the word Bropop popped into my head. Then, I saw the most adorable red-haired eleven year old boy jumping into the air, pumping his fist. The boy aged into his twenties, and became Levie.
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Andrew had to have been a teacher in his past life. The way he explained things in a manner that's both adorable and understandable is amazing to see. I loved watching the interaction with Craig as he was explaining how to steer the yacht. It was so cute, I could hear him saying "Easy" and saw a boyish grin on his face.
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DOLPHINS!!! I'm totally in.
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The love between these two is so breathtakingly ethereal. Andrew and Ryan are so much more than their flesh and immortal souls. They are an incredible power couple.
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Words don't really exist to describe the happiness and emotional depth of this chapter. Thank you, @Andre Delportfor the painstaking effort you put in to create the resort and wedding scene.
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From Karen Carpenter's solo album. Recorded from 1979-1980 but never released till 1996. It would have been at least a top ten album, if they'd released it when she recorded the album. Karen's solo album was AMAZING. The material she chose was more sensual lyrically than what she recorded with Richard. The songs gave her a more in-the-moment I guess feel to her voice. It was definitely a different sound for her one very fitting too.
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I LOVE this chapter. It's incredibly colorful and exquisitely descriptive. Okay, that's as formal as I can get. LOL @Andre Delport, ya done good.
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Your story is on nifty.org I believe that's where I originally read it.
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That's how it is for me when I'm writing. I'll stay with an idea, but as I start typing, my characters show me what they've got in mind for what's being worked on. Pretty much all the time, they've got a better and simpler idea than my original one. That's why I always say my characters write the chapters. LOL
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@Andre Delport I read part of this on another site, it's always been one of my favorite stories. Thank you for taking the time to create Andrew and Ryan, and their world. With your descriptive powers everything comes alive and becomes like a movie in the imagination.
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@Remijay @BoyLove @TiggerDude this is an awesome story to check out. Hey, @Howzat thanks for the idea to mention other authors.
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From 1979
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I love how @chris191070 characters come to life and instantly star in the movie that plays in your imagination as you read this story. They are engaging, funny, and hot. A very well crafted plot.
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@chris191070 This was a great story. I love these guys. AWESOME!!! I can't wait to see more from you. You've been such an amazing supporter of others stories, it's great to see you on the other side.
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Thanks @Hryjknyk I truly appreciate your compliment, and hope you continue to enjoy my stories.
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Totally, and one that is worthy of a Rootastic tickle attack.
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Aaannnddd another of my fav @TiggerDude stories. Hot Damn!!!
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I LOVED this chapter. I haven't read the story yet, but now I'm gonna have to go back and read it from the beginning. Just from your descriptive powers, I already feel like I know the characters and I like how they interact with each other. Thanks for writing your story and taking the time to create your characters @Remijay
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A year ago @TiggerDude's husband Benji pointed out something that I totally overlooked when I wrote and posted this chapter. He told me that Art's pistol would've probably knocked Tyler's shoulder out of joint because of how young Ty is. I didn't think anything of it till just this morning when I made the changes. Thanks Benji-Bro for pointing that out. I love ya, little bro.
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There is one more chapter coming that will bring an end to this fun story.
