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"Damn it," Adam and Mikey exclaimed in unison, causing a flood of laughs from their mates and little brother. "Mama knows we're gonna be going crazy not knowing what's up," Adam stated. "Yeah, mean Mama," Mikey said with a pout. Dakota, Lance, and Jai couldn't form any words. They just shook their heads and leaned against one another as their bodies quaked with boisterous laughter. "C'mon, my adorable overgrown kid of a husband-to-be," Jai said amidst his chuckles. "You, me, and K
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The Greatest Gift pt. 1
Ticklishboy30 commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in The Greatest Gift pt. 1
I loved seeing these guys again. It's been fun watching them grow and mature in the course of the story. Dakota is really embracing his new large family. -
As the afternoon progressed, Lance continued to stick to his older brothers like glue. None of them said anything discouraging as they accepted the loving and affectionate attention he gave them. At one point, Mikey looked at the clock, then smiled as he lightly stroked his younger brother's hair. He also leaned to the left to kiss his mate's soft lips. He playfully tickled Lance's exposed armpit and said, "Hey, baby bro." Lance giggled, squirmed, and let go of the older brunet's waist. "Ye
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I bear no responsibility for where your imagination takes you. Now, I'm running and hiding under the bed before you can catch and tickle me.
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Dean Warner Intrigues is an incredibly satisfying read. The dialog is mature and more intelligently worded than a lot of stories involving characters in their 20's, which I found to be very refreshing. From start to finish, @Daddydavekdelivers excitement, danger, mystery, romance and humor in his creative work.
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They really need a "whew" emoji for chapter reactions. LOL Awesome wrap up i can't believe I've read the whole thing so quickly. @Daddydavek you should truly feel proud of your first story because you nailed it. The range of emotions from the characters, the monogamous couples, the action and romance, it's just an incredible story. One I'll be reading again.
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Holy Shit, that was exciting. Umm, I need to borrow toenails now. Since the other chapter laid claim to my fingernails, i had to bite toenails for this chapter. Again, we've learned, and this time it's been drilled into our heads, don't fuck with Libby Trask. She freakin' owns 49 percent of the company? You go girl, asserting your power. BTW, I'm not A Dean Koontz fan. I go for the Mary Higgins Clark and Murder, She Wrote books.
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Hmm, why does it feel like something could go wrong with this plan. Although, it is a good one. I love it that Dean isn't a pushover and won't run.
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Gee, where'd I see that line before?
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You totally succeeded.
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Damn, if I ever need to have a security team, I want one as well organized and proficient as Libby's guys. Holy Shit they were on point.
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The families gathering at Christmas was perfectly presented. John definitely has style and is totally into ensuring Dean's success with becoming a part of his family. It so awesome that he added Dean's name to the diamond bracelet. And Libby was great with her interaction with Debbie. The Moms in this story are totally comfortable in their own skin and are kickass.
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Okay, and the lesson we learned from this chapter is, don't fuck with Libby Trask. I LOVE her.
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Yeah, i totally stand behind my comment about Sean, Bob, and Mike. They're the perfect uncle and big brothers.
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I love Dean's and John's family. Debbie is such an amazing Mom. Sean is the perfect uncle figure. Mike, and Bob are great role models and older brothers for Dean. It's really nice when there's no bigotry and discord in the family dynamic.
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This was an amazingly sweet chapter. I love the fact Ty was concerned about Dean, and the lovemaking between John and Dean was so beautiful.
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Ty, Justin, and Jacob seem really awesome and fun loving. At least Dean didn't get stuck with pricks.
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Aww guys with dogs are so cute and hot. I also love Sadie.
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Well, since Dean's name is in the title, I'm guessing he's a survivor,and will get through this bit of action. LOL I'm a mystery and suspense junkie, you've done well keeping my interest.
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It seems to me they could've come up with a better scenario, or even left the part with him and John holding hands out. They could still go with the bigot story, without outing Dean. There are plenty of people who aren't gay who've had antigay slurs hurled at them. I do admit, it's an interesting ploy, just hope it's worth it and doesn't cause Dean and John any hateful drama.
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Hey, does anyone have any extra fingernails I can borrow? I seem to have bitten mine during this chapter.
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Dean and John are sooo cute together. I love their growing attraction to each other.
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The fact that so much attention is being paid to Dean's education is awesome.
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Dean's mom is AMAZING. Sean seems like he's gonna be a great person to help Dean navigate his sexuality and not take advantage of him. Sooo loving these characters so far.
