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    Chapter 11

    This is not "thought provoking"... This is just a story cut abruptly... Yes we loved the story from begining and it had and still has great potential because we love the way Ethan writes his stories. He had built a great story here and it just feels like "we were eating our desert and just before we get to a good part it is taken from us". The problem we have is cutting the story on a hanger... If i am to get invested in a story that has to have a conclusion. I was really focused on the story. But... When i saw those 2 words i was like... "what??!? This is not an end..." I am invested in characters, I wanted to learn about them more, I wanted to see into their heart/soul... But those 2 words had really shocked me... Anyways great begining, great story, but unecpected and problematic end. Love you Ethan but this story is not "finished"
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    Chapter 11

    My thought exactly... We have a staying in my main language that roughly translate as enthusiasm cut Short... (hevesi kursağında kalmak) and i was thinking about the same storytelling style... Thank you for giving voice to my thoughts
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    Quiet Acceptance

    They are exploring each other. I think Both should Explore the possibilities
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    Sorry for my butt-reply 🤣 Its my 5th time reading this story and whenever i have free time i read one of your stories. I dont think you would ever write something i wont like.
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    A@a#AAA AAZA Aaand my ass wrote this while my Phone was there.. Joke is aside this is the 5th time ive been reading this story and each time i get teary-eyed with Jeremy...
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