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  1. O. K here is the thing. Mrsgnomie is one of the best writers in this site (or any Erotica i would find in book or webisode form) and they outdid themselves in this story. I was hooked on scene one of this story and they kept me on my toes for the whole ride. And the laughter i had on the last scene. Was priceless. So that out of the way here is the rewiev from my eyes. "A real young guy who had to inherit a burden finds a great soul to help him. And then the fire burns." The story doesnt go long and it doesnt bore you for one second, or it isnt short and tells its great story
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    Chapter 25

    Let me be clear from the start that i am not belittling the pain you have endured. That said; the keyword there is "endured". We here in this age have more ways to cope with pain. Escapism is one of the ways that depressures that valve. When one of those things that happened to you happened now, what would you do? First you gotta deal with the grief and you have to accept that "the thing" has happened and there is nothing you can do about it and you cant change it. We can escape those feelings via other means to deal with them when the pain is not scorching Hot but Sean has none of
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    Chapter 25

    Think about this way. 1-You are being threatened by outside forces that they would kill your husband. 2- You send your best option to past so he can stop what has been set in motion. 3- After that you watch your husband and one of your besties die. 4- Your friend who you sent back gets in another danger that you think needs to be warned about. So you send yourself back. 5- You woke up in another timeline Just after your traumatic childhood event to be thrown around by the person who was your husband a few hours ago. 6- You get sent to some torture camp (conce
  4. I love your style from the begining. Character are getting fleshed out brilliantly and they feel so lifelike(am i using the Word correctly?). Keep up the good work man.
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    Chapter 11

    This is not "thought provoking"... This is just a story cut abruptly... Yes we loved the story from begining and it had and still has great potential because we love the way Ethan writes his stories. He had built a great story here and it just feels like "we were eating our desert and just before we get to a good part it is taken from us". The problem we have is cutting the story on a hanger... If i am to get invested in a story that has to have a conclusion. I was really focused on the story. But... When i saw those 2 words i was like... "what??!? This is not an end..."
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    Chapter 11

    My thought exactly... We have a staying in my main language that roughly translate as enthusiasm cut Short... (hevesi kursağında kalmak) and i was thinking about the same storytelling style... Thank you for giving voice to my thoughts
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    Quiet Acceptance

    They are exploring each other. I think Both should Explore the possibilities
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    Sorry for my butt-reply 🤣 Its my 5th time reading this story and whenever i have free time i read one of your stories. I dont think you would ever write something i wont like.
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    A@a#AAA AAZA Aaand my ass wrote this while my Phone was there.. Joke is aside this is the 5th time ive been reading this story and each time i get teary-eyed with Jeremy...
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