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  1. ben dover

    A Proper Sendoff

    Even without national news, just keep an eye on the Indiana papers online.
  2. ben dover

    A Proper Sendoff

    If we assume the body has been found, it shouldn't be all that difficult for Larry & Greg to ascertain where Adam's from. A grizzly murder would likely make national news, and then it's just a matter of process of elimination.
  3. From Chapter 15... "I think I get off on the thought of our Jensen here losing his cherry for the first time. " -Steven I didn't know you could lose your v-card more than once!!
  4. I can honestly say I don't know what I would do in this situation. He should call Greyson immediately and get this out in the open.
  5. Too much effort to find the link you mentioned, so I'll just post here...please consider giving us one more book. Thanks.
  6. ben dover

    Chapter 29

    PLEASE stop with the italics and capital letters. It doesn't add anything to the story. It doesn't convey extra meaning. It doesn't generate more emotion. It is, quite frankly, extremely annoying. Now, on a happier note, this story is flat out cringe-worthy. I do realize that, unfortunately, this is a way of life for some people, but why advertise it? It's not like we don't know it happens. It's not going to make it disappear and never return. It's not a story people want to keep coming back to, in my opinion. Especially if it takes you six months to update it. You are a FANTASTIC story teller. I'm a faithful follower of yours. This one, however, I'm done with.
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