Danilo Syrtis
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Yes, that's what i was thinking but you quoted before i could add that his ability would help to find the kidnapped youngsters or to predict where will be the next time or the place where the kidnapping will happen 😆
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Talking about how shifters do shifting, there is a serie i liked a lot years ago : The "Chronicles of the Cheysuli" from Jennifer Roberson. It's a serie of 10 books written during the 80's with many types of shifters (wolfes, ravens, lions,.. ) and the shifting involves a "lir". a great serie (even if not lgbt+)
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Guess the "love handles" won't stay long with their night activities 😆 hmm Zev's psi power is probably the ability of see patterns 🙂 excellent chapter 👍 btw Happy New Year 2022 to everyone ! ❤️
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Actually, Ben's real name is Ruben (in chapter 6, if i remember correctly, Silas asked him if Ben was the shortcut for Benjamin, just before Ben asked about the origin of his name, "Marrock" ), so Ru-ben and Rou sound quite similar 🙂 and Jaeger is rather the danish spelling, german spelling is Jäger, but pronounciation must be the same 🙂 i love being beta-reader for kbois because her stories often made me do some researches to check some informations : these are some of them 😉
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You started the delirium with lowly humans becoming shifters, mixing greek alphabet 😆 next time you want to do that, let me tell you that Beta in ancient greek is now "V" in modern Greek and Eta is now "i" (so the sheeps now don't say 'Beeeeeeeeee" anymore but "Viiiiiiiiii" 😂 but don't ask me how and when the pronounciation changed 😁) so an Eta shifter is able to be an Iota shifter 🤣
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Humm may be like Ben become a shifter in mating with Zev, Zev will gain Ben's psi power in mating with Ben ? gifts may go in both way ?
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Now we have the connexion between Sebastian, Reilly, Kellan, Hunter and Caleb's pack and especially Ben & Zev 👍 Now they are going to fight the big Evil 🙂 and let's go rescue the young pups 😜 hmm sorry but still not clear about how a Lambda can be Beta can't wait the next chapter 😁
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What ? Dante dumped a half-drunk bottle in trash ? Wasting water is a shame ! 😆 Excellent chapter : Dante and Viola are divorcing , so he and Tani have got finally a chance to be together 👍 Hmm Cale restored a painting in Tani's home ? any hidden purpose ? and we know now how Dante got his power :-) what an exciting coincidence ! the story is becoming more and more interesting with all the mysteries ❤️ can't wait the next chapter !
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Awesome chapter ! 👍 Cale might be on the bad side, but he seems to want to help Tani. Interesting. Tani is surprised by Dante's new power, but i guess between 2 reincarnations, things happened or each reincarnation contributed to change Dante or simply just the bond between them changed Dante. 🤔 (Hope we will have the answer in some chapter.) That new power will probably help them to finally be together. ❤️ btw, i think a word is missing for "...wrapping an around Tani’s tense shoulders." 🤔
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So this👇 explains that ☝️
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Thx for this xmas gift ❤️ Wow a very interesting start with lot of possibilities ! 👍 "Hera" ? after egyptian gods, are we meeting some greek gods ? 😆 (i think i spotted a little typo : "Atri grimoire" > r missing in Artri) can't wait the next chapter and meanwhile : Happy New Year 2022 !
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hmm shall we expect a 2nd story after this one ? 😜
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LOL that's very complicated 😆 what would you say if in school, you were told that L is also B, and K is also A and that i could spell ALois instead of KBois 😂 Definitly not clear 🤣
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Finally end of the cliff . about time ! 😆 LOL looks like we have all the wolves on Silas painting 🙂 hmmm Kellan was a Kappa, wasn't he ? and he is now a Beta ! So when a shifter mates another shifter, the lower one takes the higher one's rang ? ? 🤔
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almost forgot it 😏 I wish everyone a Merry Xmas !
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The name of Marrock is just a great finding ! Good job 👍 Looks like we've got our second winning couple : Ben & Zev (bingo for @84Mags😁) When I was reading the Ben & Zev "encounter", it was almost like watching an Hallmark movie in slow motion 😄 Wonder if these two will be able to control their pheromones 😂 hmmm Ben won't be a "lowly human" if he mates with Zev and accept the shifting gift. 😆
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Chapter 1 - A Runaway at Christmas
Danilo Syrtis commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - A Runaway at Christmas
A very sweet xmas story 👍 Thx and i wish everyone a Merry Xmas and a Happy New Year 2022 ! 🙂 -
Great chapter ! ❤️ So Ben reveals his hability in saving part of the shifters because he couldn't stand his "friends" being murdered. In return, he won Caleb's respect and to be included in some important decisions. 🙂 This is going to be a big turn in Ben's life : i loved this chapter. 👍 Now will he find also love ? 😄 Will they be on time to save the kidnapped young shifters ? @kbois 1 chapter every 3 days : you are killing me 🙈
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Just to make everyone happy : may i suggest that we keep @Wayne Gray as cliffhanger King of and name @kboiscliffhanger Queen 😂 so nobody will lose the crown or head XD
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You know... tastes and colors... Philippinas people love boiled eggs with half born 🐣 , some scandinavian people love fermented fishes, french people love snails, some chinese eat dogs or snakes, some african people eat monkeys, some people eat insects... traditions and cooking combinations can be really surprising, it is weird only from stranger's point of view ! i tried myself once a squid ice cream 🙊 it wasn't great but wasn't bad neither, just surprising 😄 same for beauty : someone ugly can be beautiful to someone else (i'm watching the movie "Beauty and the Beast" when i'm doing this post 😂 )
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You know what when i read about Ben ? my first reaction was he reminded me of Lex ! (forgot to say it to you)
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Zev : from Ze'ev , from hebrew and means "wolf" another thing i like in beta reading Mrs Cliffhanger : i learn lot of things myself because i have to do researches
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Caleb's wolf must have some nose problems😂 the basic food must what @kboisuse to buy to her childrens 🙈 poors guys ! 🤣 "can't write and cook at the same time"
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i know 😁 i'm already on it 😜
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LOL so Mrs cliffhangers put Seb and Reilly aside i love that Ben character 👍 a shifter detector among wolf shifters : that's really interesting ! hmm Silas must have detected that 😁 i agree with @chris191070 : Ben is obviously more than a simple human 🙂 can't wait next chapter @kbois 😂
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