Danilo Syrtis
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hmm may be not lynch, but hanging you on some Nordmann until you send a chapter per day 😆
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@kbois$@$*#% you forgot again to send me the next chapter 👹
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OK devilish 😈 kbois is back 🙈 ! dang cliffhangers should be forbidden !😆 i was cursing badly when i reached the end of chapter ! 🙊 i think you can measure your talent in cliffhanging with how many curses you get from your readers 😂
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indeed a heartbreaking chapter 🙈 can't imagine how painful it is to have Reilly's legs broken 58 times !!!!!!! Hopefully, he's got Kellan to help and protect him 👍 wonder if Sebastian is going to have Reilly's dad rightly punished
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@kbois i can't wait to see you explain everything about the classes between Beta and Kappa 😆 : Gamma Wolfes, Delta Wolfes, Epsilon Wolfes, Dzeta Wolfes, Eta Wolfes, Theta Wolfes, Iota Wolfes 😂 Good Luck 🤣
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LOL calm before the storm. Restaurant before action 😁 You always love describing foods, just to make people salivate 😄 excellent chapter 👍
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LOL the wolfes shifting story is on time for xmas 😆 ! Thanks for the gift 😘
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exactly 😁 that's the right way ! or you can eat sushi or maki 😄
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and the rice will be even more sticky when you put more water and cook longer 😉 Or unless you are trained in using chopsticks like we chinese are 😄 The trick is to use them like clamps not like 2 parallel sticks. This way you can even pic up "heavy" little things 😉
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If it is italian, then it is "mio amore" not "mi amour" 😉 (and "mi amor" is spanish) unless we don't use the same translator 😁
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LOL a short story only ? i was expecting a "30 chapters" shifter story ! 😄 but still better than "no story" 😁 very interesting : it is almost like watching some "Supernatural" episode 🙂 👍 (i liked the serie a lot 🙂) that boundary could be very useful 😉 btw : what is "mi amour" ? 😂 i understand "mi amor" or "mon amour" but i never heard of "mi amour" 🤣
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a lovely story 👍 sadly there are too many of this kind of bullying problems and it seems to be worse now with the social networks 😞 many teenagers committed suicide every year because of being harrassed on social networks ! 🙈 now less serious : why the puppy wasn't named Joey ? ( => Joey and Chandler are having fun 😂) and Sampson was called first Simpson 😄 ( finger slipping ? 😁)
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Chapter 1 - Precious Memories
Danilo Syrtis commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Precious Memories
a lovely story indeed ! 👍 it is like a mutant power ! 😁 i wasn't expecting the lens and the pics 😉 i was more expecting drawings associated to Jeremy's gift 😄 i really love those short stories 🙂 no cliffhangers, easy to read in less than 15 min ❤️- 29 comments
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Chapter 1 - Unscheduled Recess
Danilo Syrtis commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Unscheduled Recess
Awesome story ! 👍 humm this could be Josh Currie or Graham 😁 that would be fun to have Graham starring in one of those Halloween stories !😄 -
Chapter 1 - Strange Things Are Happening
Danilo Syrtis commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Strange Things Are Happening
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Chapter 1 - Echoes From the Past
Danilo Syrtis commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Echoes From the Past
Well done ! you really got me scared with this one ! It is almost like watching "The Exorcist" : I never managed to watch it ! 🙈 -
Chapter 1 - Seeking Justice
Danilo Syrtis commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Seeking Justice
Yes was about demons and vampires but one of the secondary characters (played by charisma carpenter) met a ghost in the appartment she moved in 🙂 i think it was the only ghost in the whole serie -
Chapter 1 - Unwanted Perks
Danilo Syrtis commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Unwanted Perks
AWESOME spooooooky story 👍 i really loved this one 😄 too bad Andrew didn't ask Connor to scratch his nuts ! 🤣 could have an extra chapter giving some clues about what would happen next year if Bill (you said Bill ? like Bill W ? 😂) hire another young man ? 😁 -
Chapter 1 - Seeking Justice
Danilo Syrtis commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Seeking Justice
no, "Angel" (starring David Boreanaz), the spin off from "Buffy, the Vampire Slayer" (starring Sara Michelle Gellar) 😁 -
Chapter 1 - Seeking Justice
Danilo Syrtis commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Seeking Justice
awesome spooky story 👍 it somehow remind me that old tv serie where a male friendly ghost fell in love with the girl who moved in the appartment and protected her from some bad guys : charisma carpenter in the spin off "Angel" 😁 -
Extra 3 - Laner Visits Sun-filled Manor
Danilo Syrtis commented on lilansui's story chapter in Extra 3 - Laner Visits Sun-filled Manor
Excellent chapter 🙂 i was expecting something about mid autumn feast with mooncake but Laner's visit in order to reconnect with Jihan is just lovely. Wonder if Duyi will ever change the same way. and i loved the end with Yoru ❤️ i wish to have a few extra chapters with Yoru and Jihan visiting the elders ( with Kas ?) thx @lilansui for those extras 👍 -
Loved that "HIM" serie ! i recently read "Men of Cardiff" from Violette Banks : loved that too and "Agents Irish & Whiskey" from Leyla Reyne (there is also a spin off : "Trouble Brewing")
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Extra 2 - An Emperor and a Queen visit Silver Shore Valley
Danilo Syrtis commented on lilansui's story chapter in Extra 2 - An Emperor and a Queen visit Silver Shore Valley
Awesome chapter ! 👍 Humm Temu wanted to dance with Jihan ? 😆 any spin off with Temu and a new character then 😜 ? are we going to see Yoru again in Silver Shore Valley ? 😁 only 3 to go ! i'm going to miss all those characters ! 🙈 -
Thanks to the matchmaker 😜 excellent short story 👍
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Knew that Mark would find his lover in someone else when i saw the quote "Birth is not...", just didn't how 🙂 loved Mark's strip-tease 😂 and how Kevin waited for Mark, so sweet ! ❤️ if you are into fantasy, there is a great trilogy from Mercedes Lackey ("Magic's pawn", "Magic's promise", "Magic's price") about that reincarnation them too. and some authors here wrote some good stories using her Valdemar universe. awesome chapter and story ! 👍👍👍
