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Danilo Syrtis

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  1. yes great chapter as usual. lol the boys seem to like to joke about Josh getting old. 😆 that’s great 👍 it is really like in the first books when when Josh took the boys for visit Museum 🙂 i love too watching stainglass in cathedrals : always spectacular ❤️
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    Chapter 26

    it is a shame that the story stops here ! 🙈
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    Chapter 25

    yes i don’t think Hanna is honest neither. Dean is still too young to be able to see behind her talking
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    Chapter 24

    Wow i love the way Darryl talking to Dean !!! ❤️ actually i always thought he was a great character who deserved some more chapters. excellent dialogues ! 👍
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    Chapter 22

    lol looks really like Dean wants to try something gay XD with Matt ?
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    Chapter 13

    lol honestly i thought it was more complicated than that 😂
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    Chapter 9

    hmmm could Matt be another closet case ? XD if i remember right , Matt was one of those who were for Jason staying captain
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    Chapter 6

    Soccer Boy, now Soccer Stud, what’s next ? 😂🤣👍
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    Chapter 5

    i like Ethan and Blake a lot, so i’m very happy that we can know about them ❤️👍
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    Chapter 1

    lol jason a « matchmaker » ? nice start 👍
  11. lol i have as fun as i were watching L&O, may be even more, because reading/writing allow more imagination 😂🤣
  12. hmmm imo, i rather think Peter didn’t fully recover for the beating 😞 all the changes in his moods look more like some brain damage than cheating on purpose. just wondering why Jason didn’t talk to Amanda and Erin to have their input about Peter’s changing moods
  13. Interesting ! i’m an fantasy stories fan 😉 in case you didn’t notice (from my pseudonym), i will look for them once i finished this story 🙂
  14. i thought i wouldn’t cry more after what happened to Peter. i was so wrong ! 🙈 i had to stop many times because i couldn’t read 🙈
  15. any chance that the Grand parents were watching the news as well and rescue Jason ? 😬
  16. actually i would be on Pete’s side : his thinking was closer to reality than Jason who is really naive, super naive ! imo, asking for the Grand parents’ help would be the best choice : from what we read about them, i don’t think they will let Hurricane B keep doing her insane stuffs i’m happy to come to the story now so i don’t have to wait for the next chapter 😆
  17. shouldn’t it be Jason ? 🤔
  18. i too loved that auction ❤️ memories and nostalgia or how to make more tears 😂👍
  19. the shower scene was just too hot !!! but that was a brilliant way to give us Aaron and Ethan’s story 👍 like those 👆, i cried during their whole story. i hope there is a spin off with them or that they will appear in another story ❤️ yeah, the grand parents are good ❤️ and it is a shame that they have got a daughter like Hurricanes B ! but sadly, money often corrupt people excellent chapter 👍
  20. sadly that’s what families (and society in general) expected from their children since thousands years everywhere in the world, and still today, because this is how families survive. hopefully, it is starting to change little by little, though there is still a huge way to go. excellent chapter ❤️
  21. Wow i’m wondering what Royce had to say to Hurricane B that the sons can not know ! probably some ugly family secret ! And i think that Royce has more authority on Hurricane B that the boys can imagine 😉 And Royce might be a hidden closet as well XP excellent chapter 👍
  22. lol yes you wrote this story 9 years ago, but i’m a new reader 😉 found you in the « promoted author discussion forum ». going to have to spend some time to catch all your stories : i like your writing (full of characters feelings, with lot of shades) ❤️
  23. all excellent chapters, but this one is probably my favorite because of the relationship Michelle/Jason, Dean/Jason , and then the evolution about the love between Pete and Jason 👍 ❤️
  24. lol we are not going to have a lesbian girl in the Curries 😂
  25. btw i have a question : i thought Owen moved away due to his father’s work, so i was wondering if he is there just for the summer 🤔
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