Danilo Syrtis
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Chapter 3: Home and Away
Danilo Syrtis commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 3: Home and Away
the switch between Trey and Josh is really refreshing for the story 👍 don’t know if it is hard for you to write this way but i really love the way you do that ❤️ -
what ? that’s all ? 😳 only 14 chapters ? we need more of that drugs 🤪 besides where is Elias cabin ? Bailey need to check it. and we only had one song from that CD, where are the others ? 😜 excellent final chapter 😂
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ok « once upon a great night » is over , now back to the routine with tissues box next to me ! because some sadistic writer is back to make you cry a LOOOOOOT !😭😭 can we consider this as violence against readers ? 🤪 excellent « low and finally high » chapter ! 😭🙈🙊❤️
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Huck and Aunt Carrie ? omg !!!! 😂🤣
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lol harlan really hooked to bailey😆 excellent chapter 👍
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lol i don’t think i could do what Shawn did without being embarrassed 😬 i mean translating for a dating 😬 so Harlan didn’t tell the whole truth. that’s not going to be easy to him if he want to keep it for himself. excellent chapter 👍 He is also guilty for making us crying a lot 😂
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we finally know about Bailey’s accident 👍 excellent chapter again 👍 sounds like a fairy tale « once upon a great night with a huge beef stroganoff... » 😆 lol didn’t realize that the story took place so long after « Camp Refuge » hmmm may be Elias’s cabin will be built with Bailey as supervisor ? 😬
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Mr Rogers was inspired by God or... the Devil ? 😂🤣 excellent and lovely chapter !! ❤️ btw « and he arrived rightas Greg and Clay started.. » your editor went camping next to Crescent city ? 😬
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fantastic bonus chapter ! 👍 « i’m the devil » this last answer sounds to me like from an Isaac Asimov short novel 😂😂 @Fae Briona that quote sounds to me like something from the « Winds trilogy » . something the vkandis priest said to his envoy in Valdemar ( i’m a huge fan of Valdemar 😬)
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i don’t know any Sign Language but i suppose that since they don’t come from spoken languages, they may have a common basis. Somehow like in China : chinese from different cities don’t speak the same way but they all understand each other just by simulating writing in their palm. i’m wondering if we are going to have some « misunderstandings » like people often have when speaking foreigner languages 😆 excellent chapter ! 👍
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lol harlan « dumb and coward », what’s next ? 🤣 he definitly caught something : love disease 😆 just not aware yet. hmmm i hope he ‘s going to take care of rayne’s case : he went through the same problem himself 😬 excellent chapter 👍
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a singer who can’t sing anymore !!!! 🙊😭 was it why the separators are ♬♬♬ (silent notes) ? 😬 correct from previous chapter comment : Wayne, i love your stories but i hate when you always make me cry like this !!! 😭😭 indeed Harlan dumb and dumber 🤣 (can’t play your song, my device probably doesn’t have the appropriate apps 🙄) edit : needed to just download it before i could play it 😬 you have a nice voice 😍
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omg ! Bailey can not talk !! 🙊 Hat off to Wayne because you rarely choose easy characters 😬 that’s why i love all of them and your stories ❤️❤️❤️ btw « Grant and Rayne walked behind Clay. » , who is Grant ? 🤔😂
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lol how did i not see that there was a new « camp refuge » story !!!! 🙈 happy that you made a new one ❤️ and that it is focused on harlan 🥰 the beginning is already promising ! 👍
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yes i think so as well. that will be a good add to the Currie Family 😍
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excellent chapter !! ❤️❤️❤️ longtime we didn’t have Josh telling the story. 👍 i had to use again tissues when they mentioned again Cody and Brent !😭 but it is really a great idea to have a glimpse about Sammy/Andrew/Graham’s life 👍 i hope that we will have more infos about Graham’s student case. lol just can’t wait to see if you are going to make Ricky tell the story 😆 will be lot of fun ! 😂
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i start liking Helen a lot 😛 she is a little bit like clifton’s mother in Naked Calendar 😬 hope that your muse will be visiting you soon 😆
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waouh !!!! another surprise !! now try to guess who is betraying who ! 😆 is Carlos really gay ? did Amanda install hidden cameras in Trout’s appartment ? and there are lot of other questions 😳
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hey brian give to your muse one of those hairs and your inspiration will come back for sure ! 😜😂🤣 i went from surprise to surprise during the whole chapter ! well done ! 👍
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hon hon ! lot of troubles coming !! 😂🤣
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i don’t know why but when i was reading this chapter, i had suddenly the image of that movie « tootsie ». 😂 i was thinking that would be really funny that Armando turns to be an « Armando »,... 😜 besides with all these family ties (Amanda/Clara, Trout/June/Garrison,..), the misunderstandings (clara’s boss, « marry in june /marissa-june,..), it is like a great scenario 👍
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excellent chapter ! just hope that lady nisa won’t become too annoying and that they will find her a husband fast 😬
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oh i didn’t know you had vision problems 😳😩 ophtalmology made lot of improvements these last years : hope it is ok for you now.
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lol ryan and noah are still after holly 😂 could holly be hiding a « girlfriend » ? 😆 thx again for continuing the « Castaway Hotel » 😍
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so happy to have this new book !!!!! 😍😍😍 i’m really impatient to read it !!! 👍
