Danilo Syrtis
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lol is that Bard going to be Dalen’s partner like Bard Stefan for Vanyel ? 😛
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nice chapter. for those who might be interested , i uploaded a map of Valdemar in the pics gallery : didn’t see how to put it there 😞 you can see most of the countries mentionned in this story, except Menmillith because it doesn’t belong to the Valdemar’s universe 😬
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Yes Valdemar’s universe is really interesting and also very complex : i’m a huge fan of it 🙂
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Chapter 7 – Philadelphia
Danilo Syrtis commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 7 – Philadelphia
yes that might drive Graham to almost insanity 🙈 i’m not sure but i think Josh was worried about Graham when Graham wanted to go with Cody in that clinic where was Nurse ... ( ted’s Aunt) -
Chapter 7 – Philadelphia
Danilo Syrtis commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 7 – Philadelphia
yet that’s still a good gift that could be a help for many people 🙂 especially his own students. that might be « castaway hotel’s chronicles » 😉 i’m not trying some pressure for stories 😬 though i would be happy to have them. i’m throwing just some ideas 😆 -
hmm i’m feeling that Bart’s dormant gifts are going to be forced open 🤨 Vanyel’s dormant gifts were forced open in the Magic Trilogy 😬 and that was how started that Vanyel’s legend
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Chapter 7 – Philadelphia
Danilo Syrtis commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 7 – Philadelphia
yes ! i knew that Carlos and Ricky were living not far from each other 😀 so no more pranks from Ricky ? 😂 i’m very disappointed 🤣 hmm i suppose that Ricky and Tiffany’s marriage couldn’t be in Castaway Hotel because it wasn’t big enough to hold all the guests . wasn’t there also other marriages planned as well ? hmmm i think i need to read the previous book again to have my memory refreshed 🤔 excellent chapter 👍 -
if you are a fan of fantasy and if you are familiar with Valdemar’s world (i learnt afterwards that the author wrote a story inspired from Valdemar), you will love it 😀 you will probably see some scene similar to the Magic Trilogy as well though not completely, like Jeremy’s death, the Dream in Disneyworld,... but the story has still his own awesome particularities. you will laugh, you will will cry , you will be angry and you will be happy along will the characters and you are sure you won’t be bored 😉
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if you are a fan of fantasy and if you are familiar with Valdemar’s world (i learnt afterwards that the author wrote a story inspired from Valdemar), you will love it 😀 you will probably see some scene similar to the Magic Trilogy as well though not completely, like the battle against the Demon Lord, the healing after the battle,... but the story has still his own awesome particularities. Be also prepared that there are some « uneasy » chapters where some violence are involved.
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so sad such a great story and story teller stopped. 😞
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i’m afraid that those 4 children might be some kind of hidden trap 🙈 awesome chapter 👍
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could the dreams be some premonitions 🤔😁 could be Mark be Kyle’s future Channel ? 😀 Kyle can become Worthington’s lover and do the Joining spell with him without the issue Worthington/Jamie had 😁 imo the 8 people disappearing must be that 2nd Demon Lord awesome chapter ! 👍
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this story remind me of the book (Zelasny ?) about the duality between magic and technology 🙂 can’t remember the title though
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Wow dkstories is a big lost : he is indeed a great writer 👍
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awesome book !! 👍 we still don’t know who is behind Roger and all the demons summoners 🤔 and what was their purpose aside to try to start a new demons War 🙊
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hmm i rather suspect that the robber was related to Mr Johnson or the Secret Services 😬 excellent chapter 👍
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Chapter 6 – Preparations
Danilo Syrtis commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 6 – Preparations
excellent chapter 👍 it is always fun to read the kids’ dialogues 😂 -
actually the right quote was « les voyages forment la jeunesse » 🙂 literally « travelling makes youngsters grow » i forgot to check the translation 😛
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« travel broadens the mind » said a famous french philosopher Michel de Montaigne 😉
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thinking again, David reminds me somehow the movie « Sabrina » (with J.Osmond and H.Ford) . but David only spent 10 weeks when Sabrina needed 2 years to forget David (G.Kinnear) before coming back and then she felt in love with the older brother Linus (H.Ford) 😂
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lol the return of the other ex 😂 well done 👍
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intense indeed 😂 excellent chapter 👍
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Wait ! Rick lives in Cincinnati ? i thought he had a studio in Manhattan 😳 lol i would like to see Mrs Meyers priceless face as well . Wow Beth is pregnant ! more and more interesting 😆 excellent chapter 👍
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hmm those mooncakes must be some small ones, because real mooncakes are stuffy : i can hardly eat a whole one myself and i love them 😛 excellent chapter 👍
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lol Freddy definitly drops that « no way, you are my sister’s ex » very fast 😂 awesome chapter 👍
