Danilo Syrtis

Wow just discovered you had written that story ! very different from the Castaway Hotel !! but i like the way you set your stories XD ok let’s see what is next 😉 excellent prologue 👍

yes « both » would be the logical choice 🙂 it is interesting to have Maggie’s feelings and that would be interesting to have Dale’s ones as well 🙂 great chapter 👍

lol it was really fun to see how the boys enjoyed their night in the tree house ❤️ so the Curries are going to have another new member with Beth’s pregnancy 😀 excellent chapter 👍

actually parents planning marriage for children are not that unusual : there are lot of them through the history. they are most of the time arranged to keep peace between 2 kingdoms or to reinforce 2 families’ wealth. and in Asia, marriages are still most of the time arranged by the parents, especially in small towns and villages

interesting to see how Maggie and Dale’s relationship evolved great chapter 👍

i was also thinking at this one 👇 then it should be « i » (Trey) since Trey was narrating 😬

excellent chapter 👍 i almost forgot about the slides 😆 the boys are going to love them 🙂 btw i think there are a few brandon/danny mix in the beginning of the chapter : danny were talking and Xander talking to him when he wasn’t supposed to be home yet 😬

since holly took care of her brothers when her mom was sick, i’m sure she will be glad to help for the 2 new comers : she is a good soul from what we know 🙂 yes Bill take care of you ❤️

So Richard is really bringing new case with him and the Castaway Hotel is still working 🙂 this time 2 boys with huge problems 🥺 Poor Xander and poor TJ ! excellent chapter 👍

things evolved very fast in this chapter !! excellent chapter 👍

for sure Richard has another boy to need a loving family 🙂 hmm, Josh isn’t a little bit too old to be best man ? excellent chapter 👍

excellent chapter 👍 and i loved the spiral tube slide ❤️ i have a few ideas for the tree house : - they can also use a garbage tube like those in construction areas. since it is made with interlocking cones , length is adjustable (seen one in « the secret life of pets »). the fact that it is interlocked, bottom end can be raised up like a fire ladder - They can also fix a « door » at the bottom end of the spiral tube, they can raise it with a rope , so animals won’t be able to get inside the tube. - since they have a fire ladder, they can also fix a fire pole (like those firemen use to get down faster), though the dogs won’t be able to use it 🤔 - they can put a chest in the tree house so sleeping bags can be stored inside 🙂 btw i’m surprised that they watched pics on the phone instead of the tv : there are many apps that can load pics/movies direct from smartphones to tv using a bluetooth/cable connection. may be brandon doesn’t like digital technologies 😂

now that the King Manufacturing mystery is solved, is Bob going to stay ? he and Mike are staying together ? nice chapter 👍

yes, Bill, i like the way you put historical stuff in your books : never boring 😀 and it is good to know more about Josh’s old passions : pinball machines 😂 and miniature trains 😀 and Carolyn’s background is really interesting ❤️ lol Frankie is getting old : dozing when watching tv or a movie is one of the precursor signs 🤣 excellent chapter 👍

i totally agree with gmc 🙂 and adding Bob the character who is investigating about disappeared stuffs made the story even more interesting 👍 excellent chapter

Sorry, i’m just not familiar with US geography 😆 and i was referring to Donald when i said he wasn’t adopted by Josh 😬

can’t wait to see the boys and the dogs playing in the tree house ! 😍 btw Holly doesn’t have breakfast with the family ? excellent chapter 👍

lol Carolyn is going to have a baby ? i don’t remember if they are already married. btw isn’t Donald (who rescued Vinnie) living close to Frankie ? so is Josh visiting him though he is not adopted by Josh ?

lol my cat goes in the garden so no need to change litter 😆 and you won’t walk on his stuffs, since cats bury them 😉

lol that’s why i prefer cats to dogs ! 😂 you don’t need to clean them 😆 yes it is becoming a routine for Trey 😆 the tree house will be probably hosting some nice chapters 😉 excellent chapter 👍

love & hate, two face of the same coin... shouldn’t that be Aidan ?

yeah ! heading to Frankie now 😍 though he wasn’t one of my favorite characters in the beginning, he has changed so much that i like him a lot now, especially when he brought Ryan (i remember correct ?) to Danny and Brandon . hmm i think that we will hear from that UFO soon again . lol can’t believe Rick watching King Lear 😂 i would imagine him being one of the actors and playing some pranks 🤣 excellent chapter 👍

those kids are just too funny 😂 Poor Trey having too endure all those rides 😂 great chapter 👍 btw, isn’t Frankie living close to Graham/Andrew/Sammy ? so Josh isn’t going to visit Frankie ?

for those who are interested by Valdemar’s universe, you can read Vanyel’s story in the Magic Trilogy and that Tylendel part was in « Magic’s Prey » , the first book of the trilogy 😉

the story starts to go away from Valdemar’s regular rules 🤔 but the story is good, otherwise i won’t keep reading 😬