Freemantleman

Now that's a video I'd like to watch!!, while like Steven would be, pounding my cock hard till i spewed all over my chest, stomach, pubes and my hand. Like the old saying "sticky when wet" roflmao! The imagery created is first class!!

A great chapter! But is this a true turning point???............. With the gruesome twosome things can turn on a pinhead !.......?????

Great chapter! Nice to see alighter side to both of these characters, both of whom cam come over as overly serious and that a smile would crack their facades wide open with all their secrets spilling out unbidden! A light seeming chapter which shows the huge variances between small town & larger city interpretations of, laws, history, religion and societal "norms" as a whole. It also to me atleast shows a distinct shift in their relationship almost to the point at times without the back story you could dip into random passages and believe them to be friends and confidents rather than their actual roles as mistress and slave!?!! I believe both to be as true as they can be towards each other but it should perhaps be dialled back in public if they are to be able to be recognised and treated as society says they should be. There are laws and standards that each must uphold despite their ever changing "personal" relationship as mistress/slave/friends would warrant. Once the time she has stated previously has been worked/elapsed perhaps as a free-man he would be accepted as akin her social equal!?!? OR: have I totally cocked my understanding of their laws and social levels and their relationship - I get that Mistress Alice would be perceived by city "Sisters" as no more than a overstepping "country bumpkin"type woman lacking societal graces.

Wow! Great chapter! Atlast - Bareback in Boytown!! The 3 most sacred words have been said (& truly meant!!) & the oft used phrase "family helps family" was shown to be true even if the "family" weren't a biologically related one but one that chose and loved each other for who they were!! This family has the means, but also the desire to offer financial stability and pure independence to M&R not to control them but to make sure they are set for life, obviously they would like they to stay close by but this isn't meant as a tie that would bind them just that they could continue to support each other as "their extended family" Obs, M would love his mother to move out of NYC to B/town, there's potential work on offer and an apartment (that M would buy for her) too but if she chose not to I dont think it would stop M from moving, as long as she's happy & protected home wise he'll be happy moving.

Love your comments over all, but I think I would in my opinion like to counter a comment from your first paragraph. Please don't see this as me dismissing your thoughts, merely a slight divergence in the path to a shared goal of M & R's LTR & a respectful & deep love. I think Maverick IS head over heals in love with Randy, he problem is saying it outloud! His past trumas and his protectiveness of his true identity due to his years of only fans and sex industry work has lead his to be fearful of showing feelings and his true thoughts to anyone, his mask has become heavy armour that he doesnt want to wear anymore but can't remove it without help. He finds it hard to say things to himself let alone to those that he truly cares for and loves. He's used words and phrases that Randy understands accepts atm until he can throw off his own self imposed mask/armour and say "I love you Randy, with all my heart" He's partly running scared as this wasn't in his future, he thought, well not right now, but "the fates" have other plans for our man I think! (& hope!?!) Uni, his career and his mother have to be factored in to his complex thoughts and future plans. (Another fab chapter & the comments and discussions are lively, diverse but loving overall I feel!?!?!) 🥰 SORRY FOR THE DOUBLE POSTING! DONE IN ERROR BUT CAN'T SEE HOW TO DELETE ONE OF THEM!?!? HELP!!!!!!!!!!

Love your comments over all, but I think I would in my opinion like to counter a comment from your first paragraph. Please don't see this as me dismissing your thoughts, merely a slight divergence in the path to a shared goal of M & R's LTR & a respectful & deep love. I think Maverick IS head over heals in love with Randy, he problem is saying it outloud! His past trumas and his protectiveness of his true identity due to his years of only fans and sex industry work has lead his to be fearful of showing feelings and his true thoughts to anyone, his mask has become heavy armour that he doesnt want to wear anymore but can't remove it without help. He finds it hard to say things to himself let alone to those that he truly cares for and loves. He's used words and phrases that Randy understands accepts atm until he can throw off his own self imposed mask/armour and say "I love you Randy, with all my heart" He's partly running scared as this wasn't in his future, he thought, well not right now, but "the fates" have other plans for our man I think! (& hope!?!) Uni, his career and his mother have to be factored in to his complex thoughts and future plans. (Another fab chapter & the comments and discussions are lively, diverse but loving overall I feel!?!?!) 🥰

It defo sounds like a huge case of: You keep writing it and we will all keep reading it!!! With enjoyment, expectations, and the desire for the "crew" to keep expanding possibly in size but definitely in their knowledge, expertise, love for the group (& poss more personally) and live, over every other potential desires from us readers, they need to keep ahead of the curve and live their lives to thrive and be the fantastic crew that they are and could be, despite what the outcomes of this murderous toxin leak across the nation and world hurls their way. They need to live! OK my Friday 13th Sermon is over. Our final prayer is?................... LOL 🥰🤭🫣😇 P.S.: its a, shameful thing to admit, especially at my age 55, well almost 56! But here goes: Jesus, how to say ?????? OK, I'm. I'm..... I'm a ZOMBIE 🧟‍♂️ VIRGIN!!!! I've got questions!?!!! but I think I've embarrassed myself enough atm!??!?!!!!! Confessions and shaming over this insomniac is going to the 🚾 & to try n nap for an hour! ( but not in the WC i do have a bed!!) Lol " 04.17 am and all is quiet in the " Celebrity Big Brother House" (all said in a slow Gordie dialect) roflmao

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Time to read it again and do what Stephen is gonna do!! Lol 😉😇🤣

Wow! It's not just the heat that's hot!!!! 😚😇

A bloody brilliant chapter!! humour, warmth & compassion, teaching without condescension, love, heart ache, dispatching to honour a promise in the most humane way to the now inhumane, the smells and the sights of the almost undead dying (exploding) for the final time, skill, learning skills, shock, horror, war cries that honour lost family, ingenuity and down right "magauverism". 🥰

Credit where credit is due!! 😉🥰😇

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Only if we're lucky n paying!!

Not enough "views" yet?? Lol

The only thing I'm "viewing" is this "once" straight boy (no more lol) getting fucked by his totally gay room mate who has a cock that he'd have ridden much sooner had he known how big it was! There always seems to be just another "little thing, no biggie " that will make it "even more viral" omg just tell him you want his load and no doubt pushing that big load out slowly with audio and close ups will "break the Internet" Bloody hell I can almost feel the heat off this randy pair of buggers all the way over here in sunny England !!!🤣😜😇

One of the things I hate about living in a small town gossip & jungle drums beating away faster than the speed of light! But in this story it might just be "what the Dr ordered" !?!!!?. Another great chapter at the start of another great story/book!?!. I dont think I've ever read something of yours that hasn't grabbed my attention pulled me in hard n fast and kept me waiting (impatiently!!) for the next installment!

Totally brilliant!!! Can't wait for the next chapter (s)!?!! Thank you 😆

Your not the only one man! I'm always teetering on the edge and some times a geyser blowing hard!! Its like watching a high-class porno in real-time with auto slo-mo at the best parts!! You can almost feel what the author has written and what he wants us to feel as we read it. Any photos/drawings that inspired our lusts desires!? Or written descriptions of our wankbait!? Don't think I've ever had such physical reaction to a story before. All wonderful, testing & scary at the same time. To come across these two acting these scenes in a quiet cruising spot in the "New Forest" a few miles from the city I live in would be fantastic I could see watching them, them oblivious to anything around them whilst my fiancee and I watched them them! "A" blowing me, then me giving "A" the pounding he loves , perhaps up against a tree whilst watching them & they are still oblivious, would be stunning!!!! I cruised the " 'Forest" s a lot when I was younger and cuter, tbh I was a horny slut, but done nothing like that many years. We both would love to try sex outdoors as a couple (only!), happy for others to watch tbh we'd love that!! A hand job by a stranger to whoever was being pounded (I'm Vers whilst "A" is a bottom,but slowy learning to top bit by bit) would open the floodgates for us both and of it was "A" he'd know I was happy as it would be dripping out of his arse for hours, I didn't lie previously when I said my medieval nickname could be "Sir Cum-A-Lotte" . My cock might not be massive or overly wrist sized but "A" and others have liked/loved/enjoyed it more than once/never left not having had a good time! I've never put it "out there" in regards to my private life on this or another site before nor what it invokes in me sexually or my reaction to it in real life! I'm sorry to anyone who is offended by my words but if I can't say it "here" where can I?? To the author, I'm not trying to showboat on the back of your fantastic work, but if you'd prefer I tone it doen or not post DM me, I wont take offense - honest I'm not a total prick! F.M. A.K.A Ian. ❤️

Simple more of the same! Please and thank you!! ❤️

Wow!!!!! Thank you! 😊

Hot, super sexy n defo supercharged!!!

Drawn deep into this new story within the first few paragraphs! Fire rages and magic sparks, snow like ash swirls and settles. Time for chapter 2!

Its filthy, pure "cockilation" can't use "titillation" as there aren't any titties anywhere- thank any n all gods n deities you can think of or articulate!! Cocks n balls aplenty for which we rejoice!!!! I'm no qualified critic, all I can say is I came before they would have and cold cumm is a biat#h so I'm off to wipe off n change my soggy, stretch to fit, pouched, silky but not, midnightblue not black trunks. I didn't even pull them down I wanked as I read on my phone the filth that I'm Ioving. The cum has ended roughly where it started around my balls as I stood to tighten and flex my thighs n calves while n finished off in a violent explosion of around a large cup of cum, which is normal for me hence the "soggy" at the start! Roflmao!!! My medieval nickname could be "sir cummalot" no?!?!! My overall rating for this chapter is: fuck me sideways then up & down atleast 3-4 times until I slump over covered in cum thinking, when i revive, we've fucked right through to nex t Tuesday! Adult supervision required: cocks are slippery when wet!!! PG version; stock up on tissues & cum back in 3 years and I'll tell you more!! 😇😇😜😉😇😇

Its filthy, pure "cockilation" can't use "titillation" as there aren't any titties anywhere- thank any n all gods n deities you can think of or articulate!! Cocks n balls aplenty for which we rejoice!!!! I'm no qualified critic, all I can say is I came before they would have and cold cumm is a biat#h so I'm off to wipe off n change my soggy, stretch to fit, pouched, silky but not, midnightblue not black trunks. I didn't even pull them down I wanked as I read on my phone the filth that I'm Ioving. The cum has ended roughly where it started around my balls as I stood to tighten and flex my thighs n calves while n finished off in a violent explosion of around a large cup of cum, which is normal for me hence the "soggy" at the start! Roflmao!!! My medieval nickname could be "sir cummalot" no?!?!! My overall rating for this chapter is: fuck me sideways then up & down atleast 3-4 times until I slump over covered in cum thinking, when i revive, we've fucked right through to nex t Tuesday! Adult supervision required: cocks are slippery when wet!!! PG version; stock up on tissues & cum back in 3 years and I'll tell you more!! 😇😇😜😉😇😇