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  1. Goodie

    Epilogue

    Sigh. Im kind of sad its over. That was an amazing story and I loved every chapter. Travis was it for me, but I did appreciate Owen and Aiden reuniting. Thanks for this awesome story, sadly its the last of your stuff so far having already read everything else. Im hoping you will get back into it and write more, you have a gift that shouldnt be wasted.
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    Chapter 31

    Great outcome.....now happiness abounds. Almost. Now for a perfect story, just sort out Aiden and Owen, if not, then Ill settle for very good story.
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    Chapter 30

    LYLE !!!! God give me strength......what ????
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    Chapter 29

    Dennis needs to stop acting the martyr and reveal the truth so universal peace and goodwill can finally be restored.....nah, forget that, keeping us on edge makes for much better reading.
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    Chapter 28

    I made the mistake of prejudging in this story already, not again. I remember once Travis telling what Sara used to be like and how she actually wanted both him and Allen, the first one to do so. Bad relationships and bad decisions cost her as much as anyone else. I dont believe shes a bad person. just another broken soul trying to deal with the same pain, some of which she unfortunately had a hand in. Thanks btw for the insight into the pennies and tacks.
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    Chapter 27

    I thought I was over these two but Im obviously not. Travis and Dennis were a nice distraction, but in the end we all know the real story is Aisen and Owen findind the longer way back. Tears.
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    Chapter 26

    Forgot to mention that now Im scared about Lyle destroying everything.
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    Chapter 26

    Im so happy for Dennis,still cant believe how much I used to hate him. Then again, thats his fault for not giving us the full story and showing his real self. ok I just made that sound really bad, guessing its my fault for being judgemental without having all the facts. Damn it...no, its your fault Dom for being such a great writer.
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    Chapter 25

    Im thinking this whole party thing is a way that Travis can show Dennis he has nothing to fear from his family and will help him begin to bury his demons. Also. dont ask how I came up with this little epiphany. but I dont think John Gordon would react completely negative to Dennis being gay and in a relationship with Travis.
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    Chapter 24

    I have so many favorite characters from different stories, Travis has definitely found his way to the top of my list. Reading about his antics cracks me up, hes just too much. Admittedly if I had a real friend like that I wouldnt be able to handle him, but reading about him in someone elses life is so much fun.
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    Chapter 22

    ok so dont want to count my chickens yet but seem like everything and everyone is slowly falling into place. Even tho I made out earlier that I didnt care, this actually gives me hope that the Aiden Owen thing will work itself out. Then again, Im not writing this so who knows where your mind is at
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    Chapter 21

    Kyle homophobic?surely not. Half the guys friends are gay so how does that work? You know, in the last book I was convinced Dennis was just an asshole with no redeemable qualities. Ive had to reevaluate my opinion lately. Now, Im actually starting to wonder if youre about to pull off a similar trick with John Gordon?
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    Chapter 20

    "What did you do?" Yes Dennis, that about sums it up. It only just occurred to me, why wasnt Aiden at the party?
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    Chapter 19

    Wow is right. Knowing who it is, I just cant figure out the why.
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    Chapter 18

    Broken but not beaten, hard to imagine someone from that upbringing turning into someone like Travis, so outspoken,confident cheeky and downright ballsy......good onya.
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    Chapter 17

    Careful Dennis, somewhere in that closet you may run into a lion and a witch from the mythical land of Narnia.Hey...what you doin in my closet???
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    Chapter 16

    Travis at his best,hilarious. Eben tho this is meant to be a Long Way sequel, I think Travis makes this story his own. Great writing, thanks.
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    Chapter 15

    I was thinking we could all use a Travis in our lives......ok maybe not. But he is so funny. Umm alright, maybe I only think so cos hes not in my life.
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    Chapter 14

    Still cant believe it but there it is. Could not see that happening ever, but wow wow wow. Ill shutup now and let your words continue to wow me.
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    Chapter 13

    So much pain and for the Pinkets to become involved and allow Travis this one day in their home is quite remarkable. I love this story so much even though it hurts. I live in hope for everyone finding their peace and happiness.
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    Chapter 12

    Have to agree, this is a brilliantly well written piece of work. You make your characters feel so real and I get so caught up in their emotions. Travis is certainly one of the most interesting people Ive ever come across. Great writing, love all your stories but this is definitely becoming one of my favorite.
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    Chapter 11

    Ummmm what just happened....Dennis letting another guy kiss him????? I dont see it. Then again, Im starting to think back on the story........oh wow, could it be?
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    Chapter 10

    Damn, I forgot that under all that hype and bravado, Travis is still a scared and insecure little boy. Im trying to think of a suitable outcome for him and unfortunately the prospects are not good. If we leave out Owen and Aiden, since theyre getting back together whether they know it or not, unless some new character comes along the only available gay left is Reilly and that just cant happen.
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    Chapter 4

    Travis,he's such a crack up. Im also finding it hard to continue to hate Dennis.
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    Chapter 2

    As they say, life goes on. So, theres been a few changes, Im over it, its still a good story and like Miles Im enjoying looking in on old friends, cheers.
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